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She was rejected,
Her life neglected,
Memories erected.
She couldn't sleep,
She'd just weep,
Darkness'd creep.
Her faith was getting dim,
Her hope getting slim,
She couldn't live without him.
Couldn't take more,
Her life's war,
Darkness lore.
Life a strife,
Took a knife,
Ending life.
- Title: She Ended
- Artist: Tetarti
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Description:
Story of a girl
In a dark world. - Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: ended
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Purple_Pearl_Girl - 10/21/2009
- It was magnificent.
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- I IS BACON - 03/26/2009
- I like it. I agree with DDrox316 though. It does seem at some parts you tried to hard to find words to rhyme.
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- Daddy Got This Account - 03/26/2009
- nice, i like it. 5/5
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- Tetarti - 03/03/2009
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@ DDrox
Actually, it just sucks because It took 2 minutes to make. mad - Report As Spam
- DDrox316 - 02/23/2009
- but the depressing-ness is good biggrin
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- DDrox316 - 02/23/2009
- im sorry to say this but it seems like youre trying too hard to find rhyming words....
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- Vexaz - 02/22/2009
- good but...try to make something more sinceable..>.> this one was too...ununderstandible...just bunch of feelings around....i like coz' it's dark and there are good ideas in so i'll rte with 4:p (i wish there is 3.5)
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