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Seeing isnt always beleving
Just because you cant see something
Dosnt mean it isnt there
Santa is a symble of joy and hope
He brings cheer to every childs face
Why would someone want to ruin that
On that special day called christmas
Every little boy and girl will open there eyes
Jump out of bed and run down stairs
To see that santa has remmberd them
To see a childs eyes light up
That itself is the spirit of santa
You dont have to see it
You just no its there
When that child grows up
They have children of there own
A whole new generation of santas joy
Is brought to the world
This tradishion will ever end
Even when we are gone
If there is a child on christmas day
Santa will always come
- Title: santa
- Artist: na-san43
- Description: what santa really is
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: santa
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Yuki_Asatine - 11/14/2009
- I have my own view of what Santa is (not a good one at that) but your poem is deep and meaningful and I like it a lot ^^
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- cruel_And_Proud - 07/05/2009
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I know this going to sound extremely mean, but I'm honestly trying to help. When you submit anything, be it a contest entry, a proposal for work or even comments in a forum it is a good idea to make it as correct as possible.
Simply be re-reading what you have written prior to letting anyone else read it makes a marked difference in the final product. It is simply common sense. - Report As Spam
- cruel_And_Proud - 07/05/2009
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After all, if you don't respect your own work enough to read it why should anyone else take the time or effort to do so?
I gave this entry **, in spite of the glaringly obvious confusion with homophones and your seemingly total disdain of the conventional rules of grammar, capitalization and spelling.
Once I muddled through the atrocious grammar, I realized that the arrangement of words and the the concept behind the poem were both very well chosen.
Anyway, wonderfully thought out. - Report As Spam
- xMurck - 05/05/2009
- good but yuo need to work more^_^.
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- -wicked.candy- - 04/18/2009
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a lot of spelling a errors,
but good message ^^ - Report As Spam
- karo_14 - 01/30/2009
- WOW
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