- Johnny was walking home from his friends house and stayed to late. He hated the dark and everything about the darkness. He wanted to get home as fast as he could so as he was walking through Devil's Holler when he cut through the woods. He didnt have a flashlight so he could not really see much of anything while he was walking through the woods he heard a faint screeming sound. Johnny looked around and passed off as nothing. He walked about further and he heard it again except this time it was a little harder to pass off. So he began to take longer strides as his heart skipped around a little. He walked another thirty feet then he heard it again very clear and very loud. Johnny's heart skipped and started pounding through his chest. He began to run barely missing trees tripping over small rocks but managing to catch his balance. He looked back but when he turned back around he saw a strange mist. He disregareded its precense and countiued to run. When he got about ten feet from the mist it took to a figure, An elderly woman. Johnny stopped and heavily greeted her panting for breath, he asked the elderly woman if she had heard the screeming. The woman looked around put her hand under her chin and pulled off the thin mask she was wearing revealing a hidiously disfigured.....thing with greasy black hair white eyes, a huge gaping mouth with fangs as large as a grown mans arm. She took her large mouth picked johnny up by his head tilted her head back and let him slide down. Now if you go to west virginia and walk through devils holler, and cut through the woods you can hear the screems of all her victoms including johnny. she comes out only when, darkness falls
- by mddavis2012 |
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- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: as darkness falls
- Artist: mddavis2012
- Description: ummm this is my first story on gaia
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: darkness falls scary
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Scarlett Shizzle - 07/24/2009
- is your reference image referring to the ugly figure?
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- crazyzalaxgirl - 07/21/2009
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i liked it...but i think that u couldve made it longer tho...
other than that...i like it.
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- Cyanide and Happiness fan - 06/03/2009
- Scream**
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- John George - 05/31/2009
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good story im gonna tell it to my 8 year old cousin scare the s**t out of him.
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- Lolly124 - 05/31/2009
- i mean not mine my brothers emo_cookies_make_me_happy but its my younger sisters story sorry if it cconfused u
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- Lolly124 - 05/31/2009
- um thats kinda scary ur gonna give me night mare but it had alot of details and no punctuaition which i think includes capitals. but i give it a 4/5 look for my sisters story, its called seeing double. its under my name
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