- Nothing
- by Sky_of_Destruction |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Title: Nothing
- Artist: Sky_of_Destruction
- Description:
- Date: 08/04/2009
- Tags: lkasdsd
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- Elden Andel - 08/27/2009
- Try to describe the thoughts a little better,otherwise it was fine.
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- lalaland2106 - 08/09/2009
- Break the story up into paragraphs and work on your grammar. Every time a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph.
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- Just_another_Ojama - 08/09/2009
- i would love to read more.I reccomend breaking this in shorter pieces.icve noticed that a extra long entry could bore readers.breaking it up makes it easier to read.if u wanna write for goldor add more pm me.id love to check it out
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