- Her breathing was quickened; I could feel it with the hand that lay on her stomach. My other hand was holding her head up. I sat on the floor, her body across my lap. She was dying of course. Her eyes filled with pain and fear. I would be the last thing she saw. I moved my hand away from her stomach and onto her cheek. Her eyelids lowered and the pupils were locked with mine. I stroke her cheek and brushed away her light brown hair from her beautiful face. Why did she want to end her life in such a disastrous way? A way that wouldn't just pain her, but me also. My heart was breaking in a way that couldn't be mended. I leaned down to her face, feeling her warm, sticky breath on my face. I closed my eyes and pressed my lips to hers. She showed no resistance, only because her skin had gone cold and her eyes had closed. I pulled away and let a tear roll off of my cheek. I pried the dagger from her cold hands and held it to my own heart. "I love you, sweet Juliet." were my last words.
- by Fighter2TheStars |
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- | Submitted on 07/29/2010 |
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- Title: A Kiss Of Death
- Artist: Fighter2TheStars
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Description:
Based upon Romeo and Juilet. Not all that accuate, but pretty good if I do say so myself!
Rate good and comment back please! - Date: 07/29/2010
- Tags: death comes slowly loved
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Comments (3 Comments)
- MoooooCowy - 08/11/2010
- Nice story ^^ Thanks for rating my avi! 5/5~!
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- natsumi tanazaki - 08/05/2010
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it's good
going to give youa 5/5 cuz you gave me one ^^ xx
i never log into this now lol - Report As Spam
- Fighter2TheStars - 08/04/2010
- I like comments... I feel so lonely...
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