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Ch.1: What’s Happening?
One day a man named Mr.Willers came into town that when it started. Everyone thought he was harmless until people started disappearing, like old man Johns. Rumors started spreading that Mr.Willers is a masked murder or he’s a vampire. First it started it in my school, Johns High. Then the next thing I knew it was allover town. Hi, my name is Jenny Hudson and this is my story. You might have figured out that m in my teens. Well you’re right I’m 16the cursed age in my family. Everyone is pretty spooked like Mrs. Wells she’s wouldn’t let anyone even look at her kids without making remarks.
Ch.2: Why?
You are probably wondering why in my family, age16 is cursed in my family at least for girls. You see ever since 1804 every daughter born into our family has died because of Alice V.Husdon. Alice asked a witch to make the most beautiful girl in the land order to marry. The witch warned her that every girl in the family at the age of 16 must survive 4 tests in order to break the curse. Let me tell you what our family pattern has been since that day: boy, boy, boy, girl (she died at age 16, but had a child) boy, boy, boy, and then you might have guessed me. Most of the families here are cursed, like the Banner, who has twins that are girls, the Timest who has 1girl, and the Johns who has 2 pairs of twins that are boys. All of these families have the same problem as we do expect for the Johns it’s every boy not girl and we are all 16 years old. Banners (Ella& Mia), Timest (Zoë), Johns (Brian, Logan, Ryan &Xavier) & me
Ch3: It’s Starting!
The next day when I went to school, I didn’t see my friend Daniel for two more days other kids had been disappearing too. I found a book called “secrets”. It held every secret you would want to know like the one about James S.Witcow. His secret is that he Afraid of germs, but he is a pretty messy guy. The next day I found some of the missing kids. They said they were in a dark and scary room. people were giving them pills to make them very sleepy, then they got dragged to a room where kids were crying, and weeping. They tried talking their way out. But all that came out was nothing.
Ch4: What’s that?
After they told me their stories, I started calling some of the kids’ parents before I went home. They said all they can remember is a place St. Casper. I goggled it and. found that it’s some where in the state I live in ,Maryland, and the town, Utah is 5 miles away from us. It’s like a dead zone there because of 5 criminals minds who escaped the jail 5 years ago. Mom was mad about that so my big bro thought he could take them on. He was lucky to be alive; he had to go to the hospital because he got shot in the back. He’s in collage now in New York. I was cleaning the attic when I found a compass with an S on it, the same S on the book.
Ch5: The Connections
For the next two days kids have been popping up with scratches and bruises on them and I did some research about that book and compass I found they are old amulets that belonged to my great, great, graet grandma who used the 3 amulets on her quest to break the cruse but flasde tttThe next day a police officer found dead bodies in woods. The police said we have a kidnapping killer on the loose. They’re searching every house and every street. But I found the last amulet it held a map and a piece of paper revealing a prophecy. It’s in 4parts like my 4 testes.It says thus shall have allies and emeies.One will show himself.
One shall fall in the deepest pit. And one shall be lost until the sun sets.
Ch6: It’s true!!!!
I went to the living room. I stopped half way in Mom was talking to all of the parents of the Banners, Timest, Johns. They were talking about how we are supposed to save the town and everyone in it. I walked in and they all stared at me. I sat down and they told me everything that was going to happen that night. They were going to give us our gifts and tell us to hide in the woods, and then look for a cave with alight in it. Later that night my Mom gave me a sword, with an S craved in it. She sensed I already had my other three gifts. Before I left Mom give some kind of god outfit to change into.
Ch7: I’m the leader!!!!
She also gave me a knife and a shield. She said to go change then go to the cave. I did everything she told me to do. I was the first one to reach the cave. Then the Banners (Ella& Mia) sisters came, then Zoë my new best friend, and last but not least the Johns (Brian, Logan, Ryan &Xavier) brothers. The Johns were trying hit on us so bad that they sang a song called “Please”. Five minutes later I got sick of the stupid song and said “Why don’t we choose a leader? “They seemed cool with it. The Ella, Mia, &Zoe went to a corner to talk and Brian, Ryan &Xavier went to the other cornertotalk. This left me alone with Logan. After five minutes he finally talked. For second there I didn’t even notice him. He asked, “What’s your name? How old are you?” Jenny Husdon, I’m 16.”“Oh” he said. “I’m 16, too. My name is…”Logan Johns. I know already” I said with a little pride in my voice.
Ch8: My little talk with Logan!
“So, What school do you go to?” he said.” The same school as you since the first grade,” I said. “Seriously? I didn’t even know you were there. How long did you say I was in the school with you again, what’s your favorite ice cream?” “First grade and strawberry swirl. What’s your?” He said. “Wow! That one, long, chocolate and vanilla swirl.” So, what’s your favorite kind of sports?” ”Volleyball and basketball. What’s yours” I said. “Well it really depends. Mmm…I’ll have to say baseball and football.” Then Zoë announced the new leader.
Ch9: Where are you?
“The new leader is Logan and the co-leader is Jenny. Let’s give them a hand, Zoë said as she clapped her hands wildly. “Hey wait a second where Mia and Ryan? They were here a second ago, said Xavier.
- by Ninja Kiyo |
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- | Submitted on 09/04/2010 |
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- Title: Cursed
- Artist: Ninja Kiyo
- Description: You have to read it yourself to find out.
- Date: 09/04/2010
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- neonpastels - 10/18/2010
- Look, to be completely blunt, your grammar is horrible. I didn't even read the second chapter, because your sentences confuse me. Your writing and plot is probably awesome; but you need to get someone to edit your stories before you post/publish/show them. D:
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