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ounce upon a time the was a boy named ligo first he got a F on his test.Then it started to rain while he was walking home.and his pet mouse bit him.he went to his backyard to try to figuer out why all this is happening to him today.He saw a gleaming light,he went towards it....And there it was the monster with huge red eyes,sharp fanges,and visouse claws all it took was one swip to make the boy dissapear.
(if u want to find out what happens next youll have to read my next storie!!! THANKS FOR YOUR TIME!! BYE)
- by kitty_lion_tiger |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/21/2008 |
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- Title: monsterland adventuers
- Artist: kitty_lion_tiger
- Description: on a horrible afternoon its about to get a whole lot worse!! ligo does not know what hes getting his self in to!!
- Date: 11/21/2008
- Tags: monsterland adventuers
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Commando Axton - 02/05/2009
- . . .gay. . .
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- Larial Istari - 01/15/2009
- Umm, you listed this under Non Fiction. It should be Fiction. (Fiction = fake. Non Fiction = not fake.) Unless Ligo did get attacked by a monster... smile
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- da1andonlyprinc3ss - 01/06/2009
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My advice, use a spelling and grammar checker as well as punctuation checker..
Oh god, know what?, never mind.
Just DON'T expect to win with this kind of writing. - Report As Spam