Darkness Doom

• Artist: Undead To The End666
• Description: I made this poem when i was emo......sadness
• Date: 11/16/2008
• Tags: darkness doom

By Juliea Ann Davis

The darkness around me is fearful and creepy
the people are dieing as if a monster is growing
the killing is fighting and the doom is raising
i wish you can see this darkness with in thee
i see it i feel it is growing and hurting....
the darkness doom....... xp

Comments

[musicbyme]

oh is ok i would rate it a 3 though. it need more.more what?just more!more words that touch u and stuff.longer r sumthing it just need more.and i sumtime feel like im emo too.wanting to die but im not cuz i think of the brite side.u shud try 2.keep on trying and you'll get it great