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A note on a shelf,
Left sitting alone,
In a quiet place,
An abandoned home.
Back from school,
She entered the house,
Tip-toeing in,
Quiet as a mouse.
Little did she know,
She was alone,
In a quiet place,
The abandoned home.
She waited and waited,
For her parents to come back,
She picked up the note,
Taken aback.
'Eviction Notice.'
The note read.
How could this happen?
Not again.
They had left her,
All by herself,
With just a note,
Upon a shelf.
Why hadn't they waited?
Did they forget,
Their only daughter,
Their little regret.
She wasn't wanted,
She knew that for sure,
But how could they ever,
Do this to her?
She went to bed,
Curled up in a ball,
Then cried to sleep,
Abandoned, once and for all.
- by kiri scream |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Abandoned
- Artist: kiri scream
- Description: sorry if its not that good its my first poem..dont be to mean
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: abandoned
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 2RainbowColoredQuissants - 04/23/2009
- I adore the flow, and the rhyme scheme you have is what most people lack. But you? Nah. Please continue on with your brilliance.
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- emo0213 - 11/29/2008
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thats rlly good
since it didnt happen to u - Report As Spam
- kiri scream - 11/29/2008
- na it never happened to me.. it just poped into my head
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- Osaka Mistress - 11/29/2008
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Did this happen to you ir was it just some random thing you thought up?
But it's really good! 5/5 - Report As Spam