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Rain crashing down on my windowpanes,
mixing in with the screams
inside my own head.
"Not good enough,
never good enough."
Not good enough for who?
Now I can't even tell if what I'm hearing
is my voice or theirs.
Is this real,
or just a dream?
Faded
black and white,
of what had been happened
and said
earlier that night.
The pain still hasn't washed away,
not with the rain,
not with the tears,
They stain my face
but you don't notice,
I hide behind a smile everyday.
Do you not see
because you don't want to bother?
Or because you just can't?
- by normality_is_over-rated |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Bad Weather
- Artist: normality_is_over-rated
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Description:
Uhm. . . I wrote this because I realized that I
thought too much.
I never wrote and actually wrote,
I thought.
But to really say what I really felt
I needed to just let go
and let my pen do the thinking.
So that's what I've been doing.
Sometimes I just can't hold the
words back
because they flow too fast.
This,
and my other poems after it,
is me,
pouring my heart on paper.
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: weather
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Comments (3 Comments)
- scitama - 03/18/2009
- This is great. I like how you said that it wasn't washed away with the rain. Imagery smile
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 01/26/2009
- wow it does sound like your thoughts. you can make your description into another awesome poem. smile
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- celestacea - 12/30/2008
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heyy this is good i like iiiit biggrin
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