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what is wrong,
my dear boyfriend.
you were just happy,
or was that all pretend.
i see tears,
drip from your eyes.
and your getting paler.
then the clouds in the sky.
i see your skin
you're starting to shiver.
oh im sorry,
my sword's in your liver. sweatdrop
- by hexcastersasuke |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/24/2009 |
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- Title: Oh I'm Sorry
- Artist: hexcastersasuke
- Description: i guess the ending only sound ok if u read it a certain way cuz i no that some people my read the stanza's different then me. but i hope u like it cuz its kinda short. plz no rude comments i already deleted like 5 different entrys cuz of that.
- Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: evil romance sorry
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Comments (5 Comments)
- hexcastersasuke - 03/29/2009
- thanks ^.^
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- shortstella - 03/29/2009
- Wow, I so didn't see it going there! Great poem dude!!
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- hexcastersasuke - 03/27/2009
- yes i base most of my evil poems of someone.
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- BakaJustine - 03/25/2009
- ROFL nice!
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- Roxxi Renegade - 03/24/2009
- I like it!!! Did you like write this based off of somebody? Because if so...GREAT!!!!
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