ShellShock

• Artist: ChroniclesOfGrim
• Description: Vietnam.
  
  The harsh jungles. The hot climate. The sound of bombs and gun fire all around. Most men never have to feel this type of torment, or misery.
  
  The ones unfortunate enough to have experienced suffer alot from shell shock. ******** up mental issue that makes any vet jump at a single sound. War is something no man must see. Sadly some unlucky b*****d has to. Either way god bless to them and their families
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: shell shock

Shell Shock
by shadow

The ground is dry
The weathers hot
No sign of life
Smoke what ya got

Soldiers search
Trace of life
Only dead rest here
The living keep moving

Keep your gun clean
Keep your head down
Fire all you got
Leave none standing

Some are 18
Others older
Boys and men
Brothers all

Keep ya gun clean
Keep ya head down
Smoke what ya got
Living Keep moving

Death seems peaceful
Life is torment
They said few months
Men knew the truth

Smart men stay home
Wild men go to war
Whistle as ya march
Keep ya finger ready

The jungles seem endless
The bodies are the norm
Keep moving soldier
Keep firing.

The sun beats down
The sounds explode
The bullets fly
Give everything ya got

Some make it home
Others keep moving
The musics loud
The ground is dry

Keep ya gun steady
Make all shots count
Protect ya brothers
Let the bullets fly

Keep your gun clean
Keep ya head down
Smoke what ya got
Leave none standing.

Comments

[Buhatika]

Interesting...There were several stanzas (3 and cool that were a little unbalanced with the syllables but overall I like it ^^

[dyosa_sharpay18]

its unwonderful sowe