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Broken man, what happened to you?
Where is the twinkle in your eyes?
Where is the friend that I once knew?
This transformation is too much of a surprise.
Broken man, where was your thinking cap?
Why has your expression gone gray?
Your mind is no more than a missing gap.
You can't even undergo a normal day.
Broken man, why be so quiet?
I do not hear the voices that you hear.
You were once a friendly riot.
Now, you're just a corpse in your dead atmosphere.
I remember being told that this was just a phase.
That this was just the beginning.
Then why stop the attempt to give me praise?
Why stay idle while the darkness is winning?
No response, Broken man?
Not even a beat from your heart?
Waving goodbye is meaningless with a cold hand.
Now that you and I have drifted apart.
Broken man, someday you'll respond whenever I pray.
And listen to the mourners that cry for you.
But for now, I only have one thing to say.
Adieu...
- Title: Broken Man
- Artist: Lady FOS
- Description: I wrote this poem during school last month, it's about a deceased loved one.
- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: broken
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Comments (1 Comments)
- SaiTheStrangeX3 - 04/05/2009
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i love it. makes me sad..i know where yoru comin from though.
good job. keep writing. - Report As Spam