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I love you —
it’s really quite simple,
those three words,
so quaint;
I inform my mother
of them,
before we entrance
our minds
with vivid,
colorful,
luscious dreams.
Last night
I saw you in my dream,
standing there,
smiling,
mouthing something
I couldn’t catch,
couldn’t grasp,
but don’t mistake me:
I reached for it
so far, so long,
it hurt.
I love you —
those words
so simple;
I inform my father
of them,
when we sit in the morning,
sipping bitter
black coffee,
reading the newspaper,
complaints persistent
of $4 a gallon.
This morning,
I saw your reflection
in my bitter
black coffee,
mouthing something
I couldn’t grasp.
I didn’t reach this time,
I knew better,
but I wanted to know,
oh,
I wanted to know.
I love you —
such a simple phrase,
I was prepared to
inform you of it,
when the sun hit
the center sky,
but then you
smiled and said
“I love you, too.”
It’s no wonder that you knew.
- by flauterfli |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/06/2009 |
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- Title: Audeste
- Artist: flauterfli
- Description: I love you.
- Date: 05/06/2009
- Tags: audeste love poetry realism simplistic
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xCoco_Caramel - 10/10/2009
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wow. really, good.
really meaningful!
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- Daddy Got This Account - 07/18/2009
- aaawww..... thats so sweet. i just absolutely adore this poem! you are so talented!! ^^ i added it to my favorites. i wish i could rate higher than a lowly 5..... but thats the best i can do. ^^" so ill just give you a 5/5 knowing you deserve higher.
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- Aliethiara - 07/17/2009
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READ MY POEM!!!!
pretty!1111 - Report As Spam
- Hot_topicgirl14 - 05/11/2009
- this is so freakin aweosme. i love it. add me
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- I WiLl NeVeR LeT u Go - 05/09/2009
- its so sweet.... it makes me want to have a crush on someone..... but i dont... not no more.... 5/5 and my favorite
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- II Goddess Of Sins II - 05/08/2009
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omfg this is amazing
kudos to you
this is how i feel about my bf aka hubby! - Report As Spam
- Alma_Frostangel - 05/07/2009
- its lovely. ^^
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