Falling Down

• Artist: Colour Splash
• Description: This isn't based on something true, I was just feeling well, I wanted to enter something that's all.
  
  I'm only 13 years old and I know there's alot of competition out there regarding stories, I probably don't have a chance anyway with everybody on gaia that's like 19+
  
  But even if I don't win I tried :3
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: falling down romance tragedy

You said I was one in a zillion,
But it feels like one in a million,
'Cause every time I get closer to you
I end up falling down.

Well it was alright for a while,
Made me feel like a bride down an aisle,
But then it all fell apart,
And I ended up falling down.

Say it was all my fault,
Say the words that never halt,
I know sometimes you're right,
I ended up falling down.

But just between you and me,
I'll make a silent plea,
I wish I'd never left that night,
With me falling down.

Don't bother coming back,
You'll just get a wack,
I hate you anyway.
You ruined my life.

Comments

[trssean3715]

I think it is a great story. Probably because I no from experience. So I gave it a 5 star rating.

[trssean3715]

I like the story. Probably because I no what she is talking about from experience. So I give it a 5 star rating