cant come up with a name

• Artist: Sweet The_Fallen
• Description: I don't really remember what I wrote this about.
• Date: 06/19/2009
• Tags: love hate suicide

Please tell me
Its not too late
Take away this suicidal hate
Why are you just standing at the gate

Knock at my door
Say you don't care anymore

Take away my pain
Through that which is slain

Bleed me to death
Take away my final breath

Watch my soul die
Something which God would never design

Comments

[Noodle Ton]

wow that was awesome. 5/5 and im favoriting it! </3 veri good.

[iLeekMonster]

That poetry made me cry. D:. Soooooooo cute/good. biggrin . All my 5/5 belongs to this.

[xxxlovedpuppyxxx]

I think you should name it something like, Never forgiven or Take away the pain, or Don't keep me alive. I give it 5/5

[fatehero1]

aw sad