Too Many Children

• Artist: RydiaFoxx
• Description: This is a poem that I wrote about a month ago. It's about a family of children that only has one parent. It is told from the mother's point of view. I hope you enjoy it!!
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: many children singleparenting struggling poverty

Too little money, too many feet,
Not enough silence, nothing to eat,
All of the crying, the fussing, the screams,
Not enough laughter or smiles, it seems,
I'm all alone, with these children of mine,
Praying all night, for an answer or sign.
I should've stayed into my studies and books
And ignored all the boys with their charms and good looks.
I could've been somebody, famous and known....
....But instead I'm a single mom, struggling alone.

~ RydiaFoxx

Comments

[erasu01]

your good, I mean very good

[RydiaFoxx]

Thank you so much!! biggrin

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

hmm i have read your poem as u requested and i adore it and its very true this happens to alot of teen girls and u express it well so my final judgment of it is that it is spectacular 5/5

[Valoralin]

oh "Sniffel sniffel" i love it its so real and so cute keep up the good work ^_^

[RydiaFoxx]

Please comment!! This poem really came from my heart.