Risky Feelings

• Artist: Mc muffiner
• Description: it sort of made me laugh when i read it back to myself. but it does indeed surprise me this way. think about it.
• Date: 07/29/2009
• Tags: risky feelings love hate chance

love is just too dangerous
too risky for my armor
too changing for my schedule
too moody for my health
hate is so reliable
death is a certain
hate is unwavering
and death is not a burden
so why is it that on every
bench
in new york
a young girl
and boy
kiss and love
instead of strangle each other?
is it perhaps
because humans
lust for risks
and will take the chance
of broken armor
merely because they know
one day
it will heal stronger...

Comments

[Chip Select]

i love the flow. ties up nicely in the end. a little cliche though, but it works.

[delphine17]

I like your poem & want to invite you to enter the poetry contest at THE Santa Claus' summer event.