Continue this poem!

[Felix Avis]

I was looking out the window one blustery winter day, and I saw some leaves being blown by the wind. It was funny, how suddenly this mini poem came to my head. It was all like, KABOOM!
So here it is:

IF I WERE A LEAF
If I were a leaf
I'd fly all around
I'd float in a circle, then
FALL to the ground.

Please continue it then maybe even critique it! Just for fun!  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

nice simple poem. could use more image. its very generic but is a good start to a wonderful poem.  

[Felix Avis]

thanks! biggrin  

[Kirksome]

I agree with Black Star Shine ~ It's a nice start! 3nodding  

[Felix Avis]

Well, I mostly made this thread for people to continue the poem and see how long we can get it, but okay! xd  

[Kirksome]

*shrug* I could continue it if you want me to... I don't care. xd  

[Felix Avis]

confused  

[Kirksome]

Is that a yes or a no?  

[Felix Avis]

rolleyes That's just kinda the whole point of the thread right now. xd  

[Kirksome]

If I were a leaf
I'd eat lots of beef
Because I'm circle, yes
And I like to wear fez

I AM GREAT.  

[Felix Avis]

....THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.  

[Kirksome]

4laugh Wasn't it just?  

[Dreveryn Dex]

If I were a leaf
You could see me immediate
My colors don't match the white
Nor the trees my crimson fur
Still warm like summer day
My passionate flames
the same as names in vain
Still diverse as Autumn sleigh
Wind blows as I make my way
Traveling in everlasting silence.

Though I would give it a try. Kind of random as I just wrote it but I thought hey, what the heck. Might be fun. What you think?