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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:04 pm
I was looking out the window one blustery winter day, and I saw some leaves being blown by the wind. It was funny, how suddenly this mini poem came to my head. It was all like, KABOOM!
So here it is:

IF I WERE A LEAF
If I were a leaf
I'd fly all around
I'd float in a circle, then
FALL to the ground.

Please continue it then maybe even critique it! Just for fun!  
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:11 pm
nice simple poem. could use more image. its very generic but is a good start to a wonderful poem.  

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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 6:01 pm
thanks! biggrin  
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:53 pm
I agree with Black Star Shine ~ It's a nice start! 3nodding  

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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:52 pm
Well, I mostly made this thread for people to continue the poem and see how long we can get it, but okay! xd  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:26 pm
*shrug* I could continue it if you want me to... I don't care. xd  

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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 8:02 pm
confused  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:16 am
Is that a yes or a no?  

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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:07 pm
rolleyes That's just kinda the whole point of the thread right now. xd  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:34 pm
If I were a leaf
I'd eat lots of beef
Because I'm circle, yes
And I like to wear fez

I AM GREAT.  

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Felix Avis
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:55 pm
....THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:02 pm
4laugh Wasn't it just?  

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Dreveryn Dex

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 6:06 pm
If I were a leaf
You could see me immediate
My colors don't match the white
Nor the trees my crimson fur
Still warm like summer day
My passionate flames
the same as names in vain
Still diverse as Autumn sleigh
Wind blows as I make my way
Traveling in everlasting silence.

Though I would give it a try. Kind of random as I just wrote it but I thought hey, what the heck. Might be fun. What you think?  
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