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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:07 pm
rawrrr new characterrrr :3 trying new thang with lineart and took a stab at bloody effects :] so yess crtiques on those would be most loved but if you see anything else that looks weird or wrong, say somethingggg D: thankyou <3 
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:51 pm
Is it strange that I find this cute? From my perspective, everything is fine. And I do like the varying weights of line.
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 8:35 pm
slight gore? lol. i like it it looks good in a creepy way lol xd so anyways all i reali have to say is that the ear looks kinda big but thats it. other then that it looks good
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:06 pm
Is he supposed to have pointy elf ears? If not, his ears look a bit pointy ;P
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 6:29 pm
It's beautiful. o.o Your art is fantastic. I particularly like the extra-light shading of the pale skin, how the hair moves, and just generally that expression.
Now fo the blood and shirt. Is his black shirt of some kind of slippery material? Blood generally soaks into about everything, instead of just running over the surface. Maybe for the blood on that part, which to drip so far had to have soaked in a little...keep your layering and the variety to the shades, but give it that soaked in look a little more. Blood in contact with the black fabric will also look a lot darker, and be a bit more spread out.
Again, I'm assuming he's had this blood on him for more then a minute, from how it gushed.
Just an opinion. Still, very nice.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:30 pm
Amusing how some people think those ears are supposed to be pointy.
Well fact is, some ears are drawn like that to make the "human" person look more evil. And ears can be a form of expression.
I like that. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:56 am
Eeeeew! (in a good way hehe)
I enjoy the look in his eyes, I dunno how to define it but its great.
I think... the only thing I could crit... is O.o
unless it was unpurpose to position the shoulders, there seems to be a big difference in his shoulders shape/tone (aside from the other things already mentioned that is)
I really love this though... maybe later you can give me some tips on how to do blood lol whenever I happen to submitted a bloodied piece that is O.o never seem to be able to make blood look right, and your blood here looks really convincing
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:23 am
Not to affend you or anything, I like the pictures.
But it looks like it's just an ordinairy picture of a guy you happend to draw blood on, play a bit around with red.
The blood and the person don't look like they go together that well ^^'
Other than that, it looks great, how do you get the lines this neat? What program do you use? :3
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:03 pm
The white against the red is a lovely contrast! All the white makes him look almost innocent, and completely normal, even though he's gushing blood from his wounds, (or something of the like)
It kindof looks like his heart has been ripped out. Heartbroken.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:14 am
there's not much to say that already hasn't been said....
I think he's adorable. maybe there's something wrong with me.
I do think the way the blood is dripping down his neck looks strange. like it was just put on there, rather than going down his skin. I dunno.
but otherwise I love it!
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:29 pm
other than your rather boring composition and calm facial experession, making the bood seem rather random
it's a good drawing
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:22 pm
veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery nice drawing.
however, i don't notice a lot of shading in the body.
was that intentional?
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:51 pm
I'm trying to be nice but you can sort of see the lips shape underneath all of the blood and i think it would make more since if they were sort of open, otherwise it looks like the blood is coming out FROM the lips. (Unless that's how you want it to be then it's fine. 3nodding Great pic though!
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