You need to improve on using the shift key.
Learning to self evaluate and identify areas that you WANT to work on first is a valuable learning tool. What do you think is wrong with this? What would you like to improve about this piece? What would you like to keep the same?
From my first impressions I see the balance is terrible and the anatomy needs a lot more work- oh no she's falling over sideways under the weight of that giant skull! And she'll never be able to get back up with those little toothpick arms!
Let's fix it with redlines!
See how the shapes are drawn on top of each other? If you draw lightly, then it's okay to draw shapes on top of shapes- this is called drawing through. You may not see the area in the finished product, but because you take the time to draw through it will ALWAYS look better.
Let's give her some better hips- girls are actually much wider at the bottom! And while we're at it put some meat on her bones and even give her elbows! And hands!
Notice the little face diagram in the top right corner? I hope it's self explanatory as a guide for how to construct the basis of the head. I'll say it again though- hair does not cut into the skull!
oxellebellxo- Posting your own art in someone else's thread is spam. The only time it's allowed is in the case of redlining such as I have done here. A critique is not simply saying "what they said" followed by personal anecdotes. It's been a long while since I kicked people out for stupid- don't tempt me.