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Fearmie

Tipsy Girl

PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:10 pm


This is sketch of an idea for a picture and I was wondering what people thought of it.
How strong of a composition is it?
Any ideas on things that could be changed, added or taken away?


Please don't tell me anything technical like anatomy or anything like that. This is just a basic sketch to map out my idea not the actual painting.

Thanks~!

[x]
PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:08 pm


I think it looks pretty good. Perhaps you could add a little yellow in it so there's a little more pop in the reds and pinks and stuff, but all in all it's pretty cool. mrgreen

Tarff


Fearmie

Tipsy Girl

PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 3:33 pm


Tarff
I think it looks pretty good. Perhaps you could add a little yellow in it so there's a little more pop in the reds and pinks and stuff, but all in all it's pretty cool. mrgreen

Thanks!
I did end up adding a little bit of yellow!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 4:09 pm


Fearmie
Tarff
I think it looks pretty good. Perhaps you could add a little yellow in it so there's a little more pop in the reds and pinks and stuff, but all in all it's pretty cool. mrgreen

Thanks!
I did end up adding a little bit of yellow!

Cool. And you're welcome. mrgreen

Tarff

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