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 Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:01 am
http://keigankun.deviantart.com/art/Happy-Birthday-Shinie-103391965
Scanner made colors slightly too light since all the colors aren't visible in the birthday cake.
I would be pleased to get critique about everything wrong you can find in this pic. Thanks! whee
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:43 pm
well first off, i think you should add a "nothing's wrong with it" option for the poll!
second thing, i'm a lazy bum so i'm putting the same "critique" as i did on dA here rofl :
"aw this is so cute!~ i love everything about it! :+fav: eventhough the scanner raped the colors, i think it's my fav part and the ribbons, wrapping the stars, etc lol biggrin good job! your lettering is so cute, too! i love the hands!
only thing would probably be that the circles aren't perfectly round, but everybody knows that's impossible lol"
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:23 pm
very nice. I also have nothing to complain about in this image. The anatomy is slightly off but it's just the style of the work 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:41 pm
Thank you both for the comment. ^w^
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:18 pm
I like it a lot! Her eyebrows are kinda high up, so lower them a little so she has a forehead. Other than that, it's very pretty! blaugh
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:44 pm
That is sooo pretty! I think the colours look fine, but her eye is a bit weirdly slanted on one side, but that hardly matters because of the awesomeness of the drawing! Great work.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:15 am
There's nothing wrong with it and it looks soooo cute. Veryy nice. whee
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:51 am
idk wat ur talking about!! this drawing is like amazingggg lol mrgreen but seriously it looks really really good
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:02 am
SamuraiBlazexFlame I like it a lot! Her eyebrows are kinda high up, so lower them a little so she has a forehead. Other than that, it's very pretty! blaugh I wanted to get some comic effect, so it really shows that she's happy, but seems that I over done it. sweatdrop Next time lesser high up. ;3 free_river22 That is sooo pretty! I think the colours look fine, but her eye is a bit weirdly slanted on one side, but that hardly matters because of the awesomeness of the drawing! Great work. I allways have problems with that. I should draw more different head positions, so I would learn that slanting better. ^w^ Januarydays There's nothing wrong with it and it looks soooo cute. Veryy nice. whee Hehe, thanks. ^w^ oxellebellxo idk wat ur talking about!! this drawing is like amazingggg lol mrgreen but seriously it looks really really good Heh, thanks! XD
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