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+++++ Critique on my Drawing +++++

Rikuso Chan

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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 4:42 pm

I need a crituqe on this drawing I made recently. Can you crtique this for me guys? It will help me alot~!! heart heart

http://chibi-dark-ninja.deviantart.com/art/H-a-r-m-o-n-y-104331599

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:11 pm

i really like your coloring! heart
i'd say the head is too big nd the upper arms are a bit too short but overall i like it! biggrin

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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:16 pm

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Your coloring is soo good. Is it a chibi? If not ....

mangaoverdose

i'd say the head is too big nd the upper arms are a bit too short but overall i like it! biggrin

nice gallery.

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 1:10 pm

mangaoverdose

i really like your coloring! heart
i'd say the head is too big nd the upper arms are a bit too short but overall i like it! biggrin

Yeah, I have this problem with drawing the head to big.. sweatdrop but thanks for pointing that out~! heart

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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 1:11 pm

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Your coloring is soo good. Is it a chibi? If not ....

mangaoverdose

i'd say the head is too big nd the upper arms are a bit too short but overall i like it! biggrin

nice gallery.

No, its not a chibi. xd Chibi is like a tiny and cute character thing.. xd

But thank you~! 4laugh

Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:20 pm

I really like the glow that the head gives off That looked great!!
Doing that with markers was cool.
Experimenting with preportions is fine biggrin
Or dont overestimate the page 3nodding
To help you with your markers maybe: Try to put less pressure on to the marker as your moving it across the page and... its hard but trying not to overlap each stroke. Or go over the same area twice.
If you look back at the top left; You'll understand what im getting at razz
Under the clouds right eye is an example of this..
Btw love the gallery