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Reisen Sketch! Two ! Critiques greatly appriciated

Iris Silver

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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:24 am

A friend of mine likes Touhou and wanted me to draw her favorite character Reisen for her. I need some help on whether these look alright or not. I feel like something is off in both of them. Some advice would be great since they are for my friend!

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:57 am

I love these drawings. Something about the first one looks odd to me too. It's probably just the position of the mouth. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with them. I wish I could draw like this.

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Iris Silver

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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:14 pm

Ah you are right~ I think the mouth is skewed too much to the left in relation to her face. I'll go fix that now. Thanks~

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:54 pm

very beautiful and clean. I kinda wish the intensity in eye detail was carried out in the whole figure.

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oxellebellxo

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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 5:38 pm

i like themmm :] then again i like alot of drawings mrgreen
only thing i have to say is that the upper part of the arm looks kinda skinny but then again idk it might just be me. idk. but yea it looks realllyyyy good biggrin

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