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 Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:59 pm
Long time no post, guild!
This is Alice and Park. They are both members of the band XYSANA (A personal project of mine).
Alice is the vocalist.
Park is the drummer and is also completely deaf. He feels the vibrations like Beethoven.
-wants critique-
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:03 pm
Try making your lines a bit cleaner. The short guy's eyes seems a little awkward and the big guys lips as well. With the short guys hair, you should concentrate on getting the shape right instead of drawing the strands separately.
Otherwise, not bad.
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:51 pm
shiny dollar Try making your lines a bit cleaner. The short guy's eyes seems a little awkward and the big guys lips as well. With the short guys hair, you should concentrate on getting the shape right instead of drawing the strands separately. Otherwise, not bad.
I agree though; her eyes are a bit weird. I have fixed that as well as repositioning of her face.
What is awkward about Park's lips? Perhaps the positioning of his philtrum?
I realize the positioning of the pocket lines on Alice's jacket can be deceiving. As for the cleanliness of the lines, this is a just a sketch lol
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:54 pm
they both look like they're stretching their necks out.
generally though I think you have a unique and interesting style, I hope you don't change it too much.
Keep working on anatomy (especially in the arms) and you'll be great.
also: I have to say I LOVE your attention to detail, the piercings and accessories are awesome.
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