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 Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:41 pm
I just want to be sure the anatomy is right. These are my latest sketched lines. I started inking the bits I liked, but stopped because I wasn't sure the proportions were right. My sketch...My first round of edits...And no, she's not really naked, I've just been working on a base figure for clothing to be added later. But I blocked out the female region that was visible.
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:23 pm
I did some quick red lines. I hope you don't mind. ^^; LookiePretty simple. Her neck was a bit short, and her breasts a bit too far down on her body. Looks good otherwise!
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 7:24 pm
Thanks, the red lines really helped. I will make some fixes!
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:33 pm
her eyes are quite slanted and far apart. Also I'd like to see a bit more work on the hair (more detail, more natural). its looking pretty good so far though good luck with it wink
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:38 pm
 Here are a few things that I spoted also don't be worried about drawing the shape of the brest no one is going to freak out as long as you don't add nipples you'll be ok =] it's a good start so keep working on it smile
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:18 pm
OK, so I will work on the fixes...but I was wondering is it better to your a white out pen to correct the inked areas or to do those fixes on the computer (one eye, ear, and nose).
Unfortunately, I already know I suck at drawing hair, so I might not ever get that right, but I'll try. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:18 pm
gun_girl Here are a few things that I spoted also don't be worried about drawing the shape of the brest no one is going to freak out as long as you don't add nipples you'll be ok =] it's a good start so keep working on it smile Oh I love this example! aslo I'd like to imply in the original drawing that the arms are too short. The elbow reaches right above the hips. The wrist lands on the mid thighs... I hope that helps smile
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Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 7:38 pm
Thaliat Everwood OK, so I will work on the fixes...but I was wondering is it better to your a white out pen to correct the inked areas or to do those fixes on the computer (one eye, ear, and nose). Unfortunately, I already know I suck at drawing hair, so I might not ever get that right, but I'll try. sweatdrop honestly when I make corrections on a drawing I just take tracing paper and trace the good parts and fix whatever needs to be fixed and finish the drawing on the tracing paper so I would do that if you can or just trace what you can on another sheet of paper and finish it there then just scan the finished product smile
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:57 am
Sorry I can't give redlines, but you could work on the waist-hip area a bit. Right now it looks like a curvey kinda noodlish.
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 9:05 pm
Um-kay...I should probably upload the edits I've made, though only to the bond this far. I have no tracing paper, so I have to get the white ink out to removed the inking I did before (seriously, I do this every time) so I can fix the facial features. Maybe tomorrow? I'll see when I get the time to put the edited version up. Thanks for all the advice! It helps a lot. OK, I got it posted today: The edits...
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