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 Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:41 pm
welll..this is a picture i drew like 4 am this morning, so yeah xD I'd like your opinions on it smile thanks biggrin  (if the above link didn't work..then..sorry =.=; wink like i said..4 in the morning..not really my best time :/ but don't hold back on your opinions okay smile (Akira-kun's face looks a little plain doesn't it..=.=...he does have a nose..its kinda hiding in his bangs. razz ) sorry if its a lil big -.-;;
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 9:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 9:52 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:12 pm
It's really well done! Although, i would make the nose be a little bit lower. I like it! cool
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:27 am
It's pretty good except I'd lower the nose and make it bigger (but if small noses is your style I'd just move it down and not change the style)
Other than that it looks good for a 4am sketch, how do you stay awake so long?!? lol
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 12:50 pm
No one really seems to give actual critique on here..... if you don't want critique, I put this in white. Highlight it if you wanna read it. Warning, it's long and kind of harsh...
FACE SHAPE. Where is the skull? IS there a skull? Lips? real chin? Cheeks? Reference a skull or practice drawing faces from reference. At least the shape. The eye is WAY too big and out of place. I am NOT an expert on the angle of the face this is drawn at so I'm not going to say WHERE to put the eye cause I would probably kill it myself, but you should be able to fit 5 of those across the face, and there should be the space between the two eyes equal to the eye width. It's way too big for the face, but it'll become proportioned with practice. The nose needs to be WAY longer. there is such a thing as cartilage. Remember that. The chin is non existent, and you should not be able to see the whole mouth. The head is a REALLY pointy Egg. Where's the back of the skull? The neck should connect to the back of the skull. The jawline doesn't seem to end. The neck should be much thicker. Again, it's off with the angle, but I can't actually fix that xD The shoulders should be MUCH wider and thicker. Shoulders have muscle and remember, BONE. Drawing the collarbones help (when correctly put in place). Remember, perspective. If the face is at an angle, the shoulders should be too.
If you read that, sorry if it hurt your feelings. It's just no one actually gives criticism when someone asks for it or at least an opinion. I think the effort is good, and I like the actual eye style. Keep the art up, seriously.
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:40 pm
The_Brightest_Moon No one really seems to give actual critique on here..... if you don't want critique, I put this in white. Highlight it if you wanna read it. Warning, it's long and kind of harsh... FACE SHAPE. Where is the skull? IS there a skull? Lips? real chin? Cheeks? Reference a skull or practice drawing faces from reference. At least the shape. The eye is WAY too big and out of place. I am NOT an expert on the angle of the face this is drawn at so I'm not going to say WHERE to put the eye cause I would probably kill it myself, but you should be able to fit 5 of those across the face, and there should be the space between the two eyes equal to the eye width. It's way too big for the face, but it'll become proportioned with practice. The nose needs to be WAY longer. there is such a thing as cartilage. Remember that. The chin is non existent, and you should not be able to see the whole mouth. The head is a REALLY pointy Egg. Where's the back of the skull? The neck should connect to the back of the skull. The jawline doesn't seem to end. The neck should be much thicker. Again, it's off with the angle, but I can't actually fix that xD The shoulders should be MUCH wider and thicker. Shoulders have muscle and remember, BONE. Drawing the collarbones help (when correctly put in place). Remember, perspective. If the face is at an angle, the shoulders should be too.If you read that, sorry if it hurt your feelings. It's just no one actually gives criticism when someone asks for it or at least an opinion. I think the effort is good, and I like the actual eye style. Keep the art up, seriously.
I am by no means an expert, and have a long, long, LONG way to go. Just giving some tips.
Seriously though, keep it up. The artists who don't get anywhere are the ones who quit early. I can show you some of my drawings from a few years ago that'll make your eyes bleed...
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 5:04 pm
Wow, cool pic. I think you should probebly give the face a little more detail but that's just my opinion. smile
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:37 am
The_Brightest_Moon No one really seems to give actual critique on here..... if you don't want critique, I put this in white. Highlight it if you wanna read it. Warning, it's long and kind of harsh... FACE SHAPE. Where is the skull? IS there a skull? Lips? real chin? Cheeks? Reference a skull or practice drawing faces from reference. At least the shape. The eye is WAY too big and out of place. I am NOT an expert on the angle of the face this is drawn at so I'm not going to say WHERE to put the eye cause I would probably kill it myself, but you should be able to fit 5 of those across the face, and there should be the space between the two eyes equal to the eye width. It's way too big for the face, but it'll become proportioned with practice. The nose needs to be WAY longer. there is such a thing as cartilage. Remember that. The chin is non existent, and you should not be able to see the whole mouth. The head is a REALLY pointy Egg. Where's the back of the skull? The neck should connect to the back of the skull. The jawline doesn't seem to end. The neck should be much thicker. Again, it's off with the angle, but I can't actually fix that xD The shoulders should be MUCH wider and thicker. Shoulders have muscle and remember, BONE. Drawing the collarbones help (when correctly put in place). Remember, perspective. If the face is at an angle, the shoulders should be too.If you read that, sorry if it hurt your feelings. It's just no one actually gives criticism when someone asks for it or at least an opinion. I think the effort is good, and I like the actual eye style. Keep the art up, seriously. Thanks for the tips. that was what i was kinda thinking, but i wanted to get someones opinion. thanks ^^
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:42 am
Pentium 6.0 The_Brightest_Moon No one really seems to give actual critique on here..... if you don't want critique, I put this in white. Highlight it if you wanna read it. Warning, it's long and kind of harsh... FACE SHAPE. Where is the skull? IS there a skull? Lips? real chin? Cheeks? Reference a skull or practice drawing faces from reference. At least the shape. The eye is WAY too big and out of place. I am NOT an expert on the angle of the face this is drawn at so I'm not going to say WHERE to put the eye cause I would probably kill it myself, but you should be able to fit 5 of those across the face, and there should be the space between the two eyes equal to the eye width. It's way too big for the face, but it'll become proportioned with practice. The nose needs to be WAY longer. there is such a thing as cartilage. Remember that. The chin is non existent, and you should not be able to see the whole mouth. The head is a REALLY pointy Egg. Where's the back of the skull? The neck should connect to the back of the skull. The jawline doesn't seem to end. The neck should be much thicker. Again, it's off with the angle, but I can't actually fix that xD The shoulders should be MUCH wider and thicker. Shoulders have muscle and remember, BONE. Drawing the collarbones help (when correctly put in place). Remember, perspective. If the face is at an angle, the shoulders should be too.If you read that, sorry if it hurt your feelings. It's just no one actually gives criticism when someone asks for it or at least an opinion. I think the effort is good, and I like the actual eye style. Keep the art up, seriously.
I am by no means an expert, and have a long, long, LONG way to go. Just giving some tips.
Seriously though, keep it up. The artists who don't get anywhere are the ones who quit early. I can show you some of my drawings from a few years ago that'll make your eyes bleed...
heart thanks ^^ can i see those pictures?? xD I really want to work hard at this, and i've only started drawing in 2007. so i haven't really any experience. so i'd appreciate as much tips as i can get, and i was really looking for some serious critism, but you 2 guys filled it in for me. thanks ^^
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 2:47 am
The other 2 pretty much said most... I have trouble with lips in profile if they're not kissing, so I do the same and show no lip indentions. When I do it right, and when others do it right, it looks pretty hard core. Usually you don't see that much, but I like that. Nose must be down, considering the eye yes, you need to smallen the eye a bit in my opinion... Not a lot of people know what CC is xD I'm sorry to say... emo I hope I helped O:
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:37 pm
Hey, I don't think this has been mentioned yet about the eye; It's sort of in a front view, whereas the face is in side view.
You could improve really noticably by narrowing the eye and the pupil, and putting the pupil right to one side (the front of the face side)
I must say though, for someone with little drawing experience you've made the clothes look pretty convincing... Just make the lines which follow the inside of the sleevs stop a little shorter, (and I usually draw a very light seam following up from it over the shoulder to make it look more 3D, unless I plan to colour it in.) (I put that in brackets because it's not really useful) And hoods give me nightmares...
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:30 pm
It's alright, but you still need a lot of work. With the eyes, and the shirt.
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 9:33 am
Just draw more often, you'll get better during time.
Either way, we all have different styles, you don't have to do anything. heart
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