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I ARTED SOME PYRAMID HEAD

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Xahmen

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:36 pm


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I know it's s**t.

Anyways, it's the first thing I've done in a long time.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:41 pm


You could use some work but honestly? I love your style.

Addykat

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:42 pm


I expected it to be s**t because you said you haven't done art in over a year and I was surprised.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:45 pm


You're really good at shading. Why the hiatus? Keep going!

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Xahmen

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:48 pm


Adryk
You could use some work...

You should elaborate on this and give me some pointers.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:50 pm


I don't think this is s**t, I like it. :>

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Athigail

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:01 pm


I loooooooove the way you shade/sketch.
LOOOVE.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:03 pm


Randomly Greek
I loooooooove the way you shade/sketch.
LOOOVE.


WHAT SHADING?!

Xahmen


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:05 pm


Zahthan II
Adryk
You could use some work...

You should elaborate on this and give me some pointers.
I think she means just practice in general more? Work on anatomy work on folds. But it's not at all s**t.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:08 pm


MORE DRAWRING, MORE ARTS.

Diuy


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Dapper Krampus

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:38 pm


Sorry if I'd seen there were replies I woulda elaborated! Like I said in the PM I didn't wanna just nitpick it to pieces if you didn't want it. XD

OKAY FIRST OF ALL I REALLY DO LOVE THIS

And I would commission you avatar art if you felt like you could do it. Srsly. ANYWAY.

Basic anatomical issues really; he looks kinda like a stick but in reality his chest should pop out - moreso even 'cause Pyramidhead is ******** RIPPED.

His hand kinda looks like it could be upside down. x3 But that's an easy one to fix. I can already tell you draw hands better than I do.


I WANT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR ART, b***h. <3
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:58 pm


Adryk
Basic anatomical issues really; he looks kinda like a stick but in reality his chest should pop out - moreso even 'cause Pyramidhead is ******** RIPPED.

I was gonna say this but I don't really enjoy criticizing.
Uhm. Not a big issue but it looks like he's bending backwards. Like, sticking his hips forward.

But it is really amazing.

Apqle


PetreyDish

PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:25 am


YAY

I missed your awesome drawings.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:35 am


BECAUSE YOU FORCED ME TO:

I LIKE IT. I LIKE IT A LOT.

BUT yeah okay, he's a little too skinny and his hand looks maybe backwards as addy said.
uh basic proportions are pretty good.
work on clothing folds and some anatomy?
keep practicing, everything else will come to you in time anyway.
oh and copy pictures and stuff, it helps you get a sense of how things look irl and what not.

BUT YEAH I LIKE IT.

<3

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Aniconda

PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:34 pm


Pretty good considering a year long hiatus. Also, kudos for trying to draw him from the side. It's a bit trickier to draw. I think it would look cool, how he's bent backwards slightly but you need to bulk him up more and pay more attention to anatomy and proportions. It's just a bunch of stuff that'll work itself out with practice.
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