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 Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:37 pm
All are in link form, so they don't stretch the page. Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox Ox OThought I might post these samples, as I do give out freebies if I feel like it. Feel free to offer critique/comments etc.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:33 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:54 pm
I really like your first sample's style, its really cute!
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:08 pm
All of them are really cute
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:41 pm
I would say you have a good start. Your proportions could use some work. That should come with more time/practice though.
Don't be afraid to use references once in a while.
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:47 pm
Angel - Thank you!
Coulor - Thank you, too!
Kara - Yeah, with some the odd proportions are meant to be off.
Personally I like how the heads are just a bit bigger than they should be. It gives me more space for details and eyes.
I don't usually use references as most of these are done at school.
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:04 pm
RosesFallingLikeRain Angel - Thank you! Coulor - Thank you, too! Kara - Yeah, with some the odd proportions are meant to be off. Personally I like how the heads are just a bit bigger than they should be. It gives me more space for details and eyes. I don't usually use references as most of these are done at school.
the head being bigger gives it an almost chibi feel. I think its kinda cute.
Things I was thinking of where more like the leg length, and the bust on your women look like they take up more space on the torso then they should. Another thing I noticed was the hands are pretty small, but that could be a stylistic thing and I think look fine with the large head.
Would you mind if a do a draw over of the first art you posted?
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:07 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:20 pm
^^ k, this is a quick draw over, but I hope you can see what I meant about the bust. I also adjusted the placement of the neck and made the hands a little larger. Click the thumbnail to see the full size. 
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:25 am
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