Erm... Apropriate for school, or no?

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--

Okay.
The way we do things at my school is that we get a project sometime during the semester called a summative, worth 10-15% of my mark.
The semester has barely gotten kicked off, but I'm prepping for my drama summative.
More than likely, I'll have two minutes in front of the class to do whatever I please, as long as it is in the realm of apropriate.
I plan on asking the teacher, but I wanted to know:
If you were my audience, would you view this as apropriate or no?

My idea is a monologue of sorts.
In essence, it is one person. One person with an alter ego or two. here's a lot of chatter etc.

I plan to make this incredibly dark, creepy etc.

But the idea is basically the girl and her Ego(s) to be talking about whether she is insane, should go to a psychiatrist/psychologist, and the consequences of doing such.
She talks about violent images in her head and feeling disgusted that such thoughts are part of her.

I wouldn't normally ask, because I've done something similar, but not with this audience, and this one is planned to be creepy, and if I can manage, somewhat frightening.

--...Flowers painted on her back, centerfold erotic--

 

[broken_bleeding_angel]

Well I've taken drama all through high school. I figure if your audience is able to handle it then sure. It sounds like it would be a great performance. Like a Jekyll and Hyde scene of sorts. It'r rather intriguing.  

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--

Thank you!
I came up with the idea a couple days ago.

A couple people have told me that it could be very well done if I can act it out well enough.
But that's not much of a problem.
I know I can.

--...Flowers painted on her back, centerfold erotic--

 

[broken_bleeding_angel]

Good. I like your confidence. D:<
Good luck. I know you'll do well.  

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

broken_bleeding_angel

Good. I like your confidence. D:<
Good luck. I know you'll do well.

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--


Thanks. ^-^
I don't need to worry about it until the end of the school year, but still, I want to get a head start.

--...Flowers painted on her back, centerfold erotic--

 

[Sioga]

...sounds like you want to be gollum.

just kidding. That is a really good idea. I have done it with myself a few times, and it's pretty hard.  

[Lady Kira X]

Have you done any research on Alter Egos?

 

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--

Kira - Yes, and as previously stated, I've done this before, and pulled it off 'very well' according to my teacher.

Genie - XD Kinda, if Gollum is now a teenage girl and an overly british optimist.
I find that it's not very hard, but I say that with almost anything when it comes to actng.

--...Flowers painted on her back, centerfold erotic--

 

[-PrimaCzarina-]

[[If it you keep in the area of violent and not take it to a sexual place, then I think it's fine.

I mean, I don't know about your school but around here skinned humans are okay while sodomy is not.]]

 

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--

Well, last semester a girl on a mandolin sang a song about a phallus.
I'm thinking sexual isn't going to do much XD

But yes, there isn't anything sexual. Just her talking about violent images.

--...Flowers painted on her back, centerfold erotic--

 

[u nd i]

I'd say it's fine.

For our English Language coursework, we have just had to write and perform a monologue and I wrote from the perspective of a psychologically damaged, split personality serial murdering transvestite.

And everyone loved it. cool

My teacher suggested I see a therapist because I wrote it so well, but if you can pull it off, you should go all out! I know how fun it is to write something like that!  

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

Ananobot

I'd say it's fine.

For our English Language coursework, we have just had to write and perform a monologue and I wrote from the perspective of a psychologically damaged, split personality serial murdering transvestite.

And everyone loved it. cool

My teacher suggested I see a therapist because I wrote it so well, but if you can pull it off, you should go all out! I know how fun it is to write something like that!

--Anorexic beauty queen, with painted eyes so toxic...--


Just for reference, what grade are/were you in?
I'm grade eleven.

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[u nd i]

I don't understand American grades sweatdrop

I am in college doing my AS levels, that is primarily for 16-17 year olds.

But in America college means university, right? College for us is after we leave secondary school but before we start univeristy, it's a two year course (sometimes more).

Edit: I'm English.  

[Muffin of Magic]

This idea sounds... fun. ._. Just kidding! If you write with style, and I'm sure that you do, you will have a very captivated audience. Mental disorders are a pretty big literature theme right now, so I'm sure that your teacher won't mind.  

[Meaty Plush Stuff]

i don't think it will be a problem, i would watch it, it sounds like a good idea