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 Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 6:32 pm
So, I'm not so great with character design, so I opened a freebie kind of thing in a different guild where I draw people's avatars for them. This is the first person's I've done, so C&C please.
http://caliber-mengsk.deviantart.com/art/jaggedbubbles-freebie-May-12th-163854628
I would like to say thanks to posemaniacs.com for the pose help ^_^. Anyway, can't wait to see what people think.
Oh, and do you guys think I should finish it the rest of the way? (digital ink and color?)
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 8:50 pm
There is a lack of fingers... I think this picture looks too serious to go with a mitten hand... uh... unless those are mittens...
The pose looks well done. The arms seem kinda blobbish/fat. The shoulders, jaw, and neck thickness look kinda masculine. You should avoid showing those muscles between the neck and shoulders so strongly unless the character is supposed to be muscular. For a thinner person, it just ramps up like that a little bit at the base. The goggles are closer together than the eyes, so they wouldn't be very effective. With this angle, the nose should appear closer to the farther eye (i.e. the eye to our right). The string thing looks good, but the hammer seems sorta flat. Clothing flattening on the floor looks good.
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