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 Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 12:41 pm
Haven't asked for crits in a while... I'd appreciate crits as long as they aren't too harsh. Long, detailed crits are great but unfortunately pointing out a lot of mistakes last time sort of lowered my motivation to draw, and I've been going through a terrible art block. So... preferably, I'd like anatomy crits. >A<; Sorry.
This is a WIP of my avatar as a gunner. Sort of. It was drawn out of boredom and it turned into this, so I'm hoping it can help break my art block.
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 2:20 pm
better than my own work.....when i actually draw anyways xD but i think you could have drew a better gun =P guys would appeal to it more i think >< but everything else is pretty shipshape ;D
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 6:37 pm
I think the arms are too short; on normal humans, if the arms were parallel to the body, the finger tips would reach about mid-thigh. The elbow should also reach about the waist.
But otherwise, pretty nice sketch so far! Just make sure to use a line-tool or something similar when working with the gun. C:
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:28 am
The ears seem too high to me, or I think her face isn't low enough and chin not rounded enough if her head is supposed to be angled downwards. No offense, but those curved lines at the bottom of her dress-thing make her look a bit pregnant to me.
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