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Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 1:31 am

Mr. Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist....

Old sketch...and he looks a bit old in here lol

Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 7:28 pm

eek omfg your good

BlindingOrchid

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Leazard

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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:36 am

The face seems a bit off

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:34 am

Leazard

The face seems a bit off

Where, when how?

Please be more precise dear surprised

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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:05 pm

I see what that person means....it's sorta like the connection between the chin and ear is too short o.o but I'm not sure D: either way amazing *-*

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:42 pm

As always - I love your work.

But the ear needs to be further back, it's too close to the eye and is throwing off the entire face.

Exellent coloring btw!

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wisyuu

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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:05 pm

Critique: Hello c:
First I would like to point out the face first. it seems to be a bit flattened. Even from this point of angle it should still be somewhat round and large.
Next would be the shoulder on the left. unless he is intentionally tensed up it looks rather srcuntched up. The arm extending down from the shoulder should be longer, since most human being's arms extent to the hip when standing erect.

What I like: Your overall shading is splendid! I cannot even dream of doing so, being the novice that I am. I also like the intricasy in the backround as well as the watch.

Overall, it's a very good piece.

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:39 am

Hmm, now I see what you meant surprised

Thank you all for your feedback heart

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