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YayAuLait

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:41 am


Whooow it's been a while since I've been here... But since I almost get no critique anywhere else, I come here for support! * ___ * I remember coming here all the time for crits ahheeh eue;;

http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/#/d2uh6au

Please critique mostly on anatomy, and critique as harsh as you'd like I won't cry over it ; V ; Redlines are also welcome.... and if you could, give me coloring/CG advice? orz;;; I like the hair, but everything else looks so... plain ]: I really need some CG tips augh;; The pose is so boring orz;; :C

Thank you >U<)9~
PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:49 am


I'm really not fond of this new Pokémon, but I think you pulled off putting it as a Gijinka quite well.

I think her left (our right) arm looks a bit long, and stiff. I like what you've done with the other hand, and I don't really see anything wrong with it.

The dress doesn't seem to connect correctly to her body at the top. It looks like it was just slapped on. A strapless dress would normally hug the body to stay on it. No one wants a wardrobe malfunction. User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

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