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"Marinetta" - Critique please :D

Synssia

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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:57 pm

Marinetta

A picture of my OC Marinetta that I drew recently. Can you help with some advice? Thanks! biggrin

Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:00 pm

I think I'm just having a little difficulty with the perspective. The up half or her body doesn't quite seem to me to be on the same perspective plane as her legs and it is throwing me off a little. The design looks really good though. From what I can tell the anatomy looks OK too.

Maybe just fix the back leg, make it more like the front leg in size and it will resolve the perspective issues. Just my take on it.

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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:27 pm

Wow the anatomy and shadowing are impressive,though it looks like your shoulders are off balence.

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