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[.Potemkin.]

PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 11:46 am


It's almost impossible to get feedback in here D=

Anyways, since I'm here, why don't you guys C&C on this picture?

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It's not something I'm used to do, but I tried it anyways, how does it look?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 9:12 pm


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I gotta say I laughed pretty hard... xD;;;
I don't really see anything wrong though, aside from the arms looking a bit odd. They don't look seperated enough to me. I don't know how to explain it. XD
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:55 am


Awww, I'll give you feedback! :3

The Cat head looks cool, and the overall picture is interesting but I think you put too many folds in the jacket. It looks way too baggy like a robe instead of a blazer. In a well fitting blazer with the arms crossed the torso should have few if any folds and the material would tighten on the outside of the arm around the bicep and elbow and then pull away from the wrists just a bit. Business Cat looks unprofessional in such an ill-fitting suit.

Also, I think it would look better if you smoothed out the background to make it more glowy rather than chiseled rock.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:46 am


I agree with xena91388, the suit is too baggy. It kinda looks like he's graduating ^-^;
I don't know if it's just me, but the cat's eyes look a little off, like he's spacing out, but his eyes are wandering, each eye in different directions.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:46 pm


haha looks awesome can't go wrong with cats. ^_^
the jacket looks big on him but besides that it has a cool unfinish look with the blocklike background like it was painted or something.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 4:17 pm


That is a beautiful use of grayscale with just the right amount of splash color in the eyes and tie to make it really draw your eyes in

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:29 pm


Tehe, it's a kitteh X3

this is great! I like how the colouring is all smoothed out, and how the backround looks as if it were crumpled like paper, or a chiseled way of lighting. The back looks a little hunched, but I think that adds character. Perhaps you could make the creases in the jacket smaller, or skinnier, if you get what I'm saying. Usually I will stand in the mirror with something of the similar fabric to look as comparison, to see how the fabric will move and and wrinkle in certain areas. so I hope that's helpful advice. Other than that, I'd say follow the critique others have given you, and good job, it looks good for something you don't usually draw. =)


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:59 pm


Thank you all for your great feedback! I really appreciate it!

I know what you mean about the suit, it looks bigger because I went overboard with the wrinkles/foldings of the jacket D=

I will definitely do better next time =D!

[.Potemkin.]

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