☆ Custom / Human Puppets

[Shinsua]

-_-_-_-_-C u s t o m
-_-_-_-_-P u p p e t s

Custom puppets are a bit more difficult than custom jutsu and weapons; they require you to follow a strict outline to prevent ridiculous and overpowered tools from being constructed.
Custom puppets must be accepted here- for full validation.

___☁ R u l e s:
☆ All submitted work is susceptible to change.
☆ Only those of the Puppet Class can create puppets.
☆ Custom puppets must be created in either [ Sunagakure ] or [ Takumi ] and within their respective shops.
☆ Custom puppets physically 'Crafted' by one's self, using our Crafting system, are not limited by the mechanisms count. This thread is for the quick 'n easy route.
☆ Ammunition not supplied.

• You may have up to five [5] custom puppets. ( Referred to as custom puppet slots. )
• When creating puppets, keep them within reasonable sizes. ( No giants and no micro-puppets. )
• Custom puppets cannot be given bloodline abilities. ( Human puppets only. )
• Custom puppets may have a combination of four [4] different mechanisms. ( Two hidden blades and two weapon launchers; or no hidden blades and four launchers; etc. )

○ After approval, post your puppet in your custom jutsu log.
___[ Custom Jutsu :: Crew ]
___[ Custom Jutsu :: Members ]

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[b]Character:[/b] (Who will use this puppet?)
[b]Link to profile:[/b] (For a few clarification purposes.)

[b]Puppet Name:[/b] (What will it be called?)
[b]Puppet Appearance:[/b] (Description if you have no picture.)

[b]Puppet Description:[/b] (A brief explanation of the puppet- what it's made of, where it came from, what it does, etc.)

[b]Mechanism Summary:[/b]
• (Hidden weapons and abilities bulleted.)
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[Shinsua]

-_-_-_-_-H u m a n
-_-_-_-_-P u p p e t s

Human puppets are even more difficult than custom puppets, jutsu, and weapons; they require not only that you follow a strict outline, but that you always claim a kill, and salvage that body.
Human puppets must be accepted here- for full validation.

___☁ R u l e s:
☆ All submitted work is susceptible to change.
☆ Only those of the Puppet Class can claim human puppets.
☆ You must learn [ Hitokugutsu no Jutsu (Human Puppet Technique) ] before you can claim a human puppet.

• Human puppets take up two [2] custom puppet slots.
• You must participate in the killing and salvaging of a roleplay character in order to claim his/her body as a puppet.
• Human puppets can retain up to six [6] nin or genjutsu.
• Human puppets can retain up to one [1] tai or bukijutsu style.
• Human puppets can retain their bloodline, and all techniques of it they knew, if they had one.
• If you choose to have your human puppet retain its bloodline, it can retain only two [2] other nin or genjutsu.
• Human puppets may have a combination of three [3] different mechanisms. ( Two hidden blades and one weapon launcher; or no hidden blades and three launchers; etc. )

○ After approval, post your puppet in your custom jutsu log.
___[ Custom Jutsu :: Crew ]
___[ Custom Jutsu :: Members ]

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[b]Character:[/b] (Who will use this puppet?)
[b]Link to Profile:[/b] (For a few clarification purposes.)

[b]Enemy Character:[/b] (Who are you turning into a puppet?)
[b]Link to E. Profile:[/b] (Link to your future puppet's profile.)
[b]Link to Kill:[/b] (To confirm that you took part in killing and salvaging.)

[b]Puppet Appearance:[/b] (Description if you have no picture.)
[b]Puppet Description:[/b] (A brief explanation of the puppet- what it's made of, where it came from, what it does, etc.)

[b]Bloodline:[/b] (Are you keeping his/her bloodline? If so, put the bloodline's name.)
[b]Bloodline Techniques:[/b]
• (See rules for ability regulation.)

[b]Ninjutsu:[/b]
• (See rules for ability regulation.)
[b]Genjutsu:[/b]
• (See rules for ability regulation.)
[b]Taijutsu:[/b]
• (See rules for ability regulation.)
[b]Bukijutsu:[/b]
• (See rules for ability regulation.)

[b]Mechanism Summary:[/b]
• (Hidden weapons and abilities bulleted.)
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[solanik]

Character: Hazama Iori
Link to profile: linky

Puppet Name: Akazaki
Puppet Appearance:

Puppet Description: This puppet has been given an amazing amount of detail to make it seem almost lifelike it can be used to attempt to impersonate a person the user has seen but by itself it still is known as a puppet. it made of very durable oak as well.

Mechanism Summary:
• retractable katana blade attached to the right arm.
• chakra strings are invisible
• can be tranformed into the appearance of a previously met person but cannot speak or copy abilities
• smog screen machine built into puppets mouth
 

[Shinsua]

Mmm... looks good to go.  

[Je suis GoreWhore]

Character: Rin Akasuna
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20134077&page=41

Puppet Name: Akita
Puppet Appearance:

Puppet Description: Akita is made from a thick, durable, oak-like wood that isn't easily destructible. She looks more like a doll, from the way she's stitched up, but the only cloth on her is the drab wooden dress that falls to her knees. Other than that, from a distance, Akita looks like a broken and dirty little girl, and even up close, she looks innocent and poor.

Mechanism Summary:
• Poison Senbon
• Iron spikes
• Chakra strings that emit from mouth like tentacles
 

[Azeiel The Risen]

APPROVED  

[Bassoon Ninja]

Character: Miyuki Date
Link to profile: [x], First Post

Puppet Name: Mitsuhide
Puppet Appearance: [x]

Puppet Description: Mitsuhide is made from the sturdiest of wood. Each limb was crafted carefully, and it is practically a human. His (Miyuki finds herself referring to Mitsuhide constantly as a person) hair is created from real human hair (not as creepy as it sounds). Miyuki covers him in thick layers of clothing and a mask so that he looks like a normal human samurai from a distance. Without his mask or clothing on, the joints are very obvious and he is very much a puppet. In addition to the thick layers of clothing, Miyuki garms Mitsuhide in a thick armor which also protects him as it would a human. Overall, between the sturdy wood and armor, Mitsuhide is practically indestructible. Another of Miyuki's fancies, she didn't really put any sort of traps or anything of the sort inside of Mitsuhide. His puppet strings are very obvious, but he fights with a katana and a tower shield, as a samurai would more so than a puppet would. In short, Mitsuhide is Miyuki's best friend and she cares for him as she would if he were her own child.

Mechanism Summary:
• Katana sheathed at waist
• Tower Shield on back
• Shuriken and Kunai can be launched from the right arm
 

[Shinsua]

A p p r o v e d
Just make yourself a post in the custom jutsu log, and you're good to go.
*Points back at first post's links*  

[Bassoon Ninja]

Character: Miyuki Date
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Masaru
Puppet Appearance: [x]

Puppet Description: Masaru is like the decked out little brother of Mitsuhide. He is made of a lighter wood, which helps him to have more "toys". Overall, he is quite deadly. But, do to his weaker wood, he cannot be used apart from Mitsuhide and the two brothers must be used together. Mostly, Mitsuhide does the frontal assault while Masaru sneaks in from behind to do his more deadly "cheating" techniques.

Mechanism Summary:
• The ribcage can separate & expand with internal blades for capture and/or kill
• Wire within chest to pull an enemy into them
• Has specialized juggling balls which can crack and emit a poison mist, with effects that cause an opponent's lung to literally disintegrate if inhaled, causing a slow and painful death of coughing out one's lungs
 

[Shinsua]

The poison from the balls would need some sort of incubation period, or something of the like.
Perhaps-
Trigger: 2 posts of consecutive breathing
Pain: Posts 3-5
Crippling Pain: Posts 5-7
Death: Post 8?  

[Bassoon Ninja]

Ah, thanks for that. I went to quickly and didn't think through it much. This better?

Bassoon Ninja

Character: Miyuki Date
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Masaru
Puppet Appearance: [x]

Puppet Description: Masaru is like the decked out little brother of Mitsuhide. He is made of a lighter wood, which helps him to have more "toys". Overall, he is quite deadly. But, do to his weaker wood, he cannot be used apart from Mitsuhide and the two brothers must be used together. Mostly, Mitsuhide does the frontal assault while Masaru sneaks in from behind to do his more deadly "cheating" techniques.

Mechanism Summary:
• The ribcage can separate & expand with internal blades for capture and/or kill
• Wire within chest to pull an enemy into them
• Has specialized juggling balls which can crack and emit a poison mist, with effects that cause an opponent's lung to literally disintegrate if inhaled, causing a slow and painful death of coughing out one's lungs
Trigger: [2] Posts of Inhalation
Pain: [3] Posts of Inhalation
Coughing Blood: [5] Posts of Inhalation
Coughing out Lung: [7] Posts of Inhalation
Death: [8] Posts of Inhalation

 

[Shinsua]

All good to go. c:  

[Azzurro Skyde]

Character: Akane Haruka
Link to profile: Link

Puppet Name: Thantas
Puppet Appearance: [[Puppet]]

Puppet Description: Thantas is created of a durable layering of Redwood and a lighter more durable and flexible wood inside as a skeleton, this can make the puppet absorb more powerful blows and makes it lighter. There is are thin metal plates bolted on his forearms and leggings. His legs are one piece so they are unable to move so easily but are flexible to a little extent. He is covered in a rubber like fixture which creates a higher friction and stick ability (eg: Much like tires spinning on a road, if he kicks someone.). He wears a suit over the chest and arms that conceals the chains that are hidden in a compartment. He wears a thing on his back that looks like a coffin that has been folded out. It is made of Metal and is the heaviest part of the Puppet, this is also it's casing. Thantas can go into a fetal like position and the pieces will fold around him hiding him or putting him away. He can also rip it off and capture people in it... There are small slits on the side which can allow blades to be stabbed into the coffin. On the bottom of the feet it is able shoot out Senbon, and all limbs can fold and detach.

Mechanism Summary:
• Capture Coffin [Carrying Case]
• Hidden Chest Chain [Seal for Coffin]
• Senbon Shooter in Feet [Range: 100ft, x25]
• Limb Detachment/Joints: All limbs can come detached from the main body [For Storage and Strategy]
• Hidden Blades in sockets of arms [Length: 1ft]
 

[Shinsua]

Looks... scary. ' . '
All good.  

[GetShiggyWithIt]

Character: Aluvan Greene Oni
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Tankā
Puppet Appearance: Tankā is a extremely large ((approximately 7 feet in height)) puppet who has an imitated muscular appearance. Attached to the puppets arms are two weapon launchers -- utilizing needles -- that have 3 barrels each and 2 needle belts [containing 50 needles each] hanging out of each barrel [AKA, 300 Ammo Per Launcher]. Each launcher can be separately, but if the puppeteer makes the puppet squeeze both launchers then both will fire. Every belt of the needles are used simultaneously in one launcher, and every belt's backbone is made of leather -- meaning that fire jutsu can completely destroy the ammo capabilities of the puppet and force the user to use"Shiirete Siru (Replenishing)" to restock. In the interior of the weapons, small senbon are continually turned every time the puppet closes its hand. Upon the puppet closes its hand, these turning senbon are aligned to actually dig into the groves in between the needle cartridges and propel more rounds into the launcher. This leads to an appearance of a fully automatic nail-launcher. This weapon is fairly accurate within 25 feet, and has a maximum range of 153.5 feet; however, as the weapon aims at putting massive quantities of nails downrange, even at 150 feet an opponent is likely to be hit by 1 out of 10 nails. Though the amount of hits on an opponent may vary, the wide spread on the nails makes some defensive technique almost necessary for an opponent. However, another important note of the weapon is that -- due to the nails smaller size and the mechanism used for firing -- these nails can not be engraved with fuuinjutsu.

Puppet Description:
Tankā was designed with one idea in mind -- a great amount of firing to completely overwhelm attackers. Gaining its inspiration from the jutsu "Hitei Mushou (Flying Nail Mist Pierce)," the primary two weapons utilized are guns that shoot nails at a ridiculous quantity. It is important to note that, due to the massive rate of fire, every 15 shots (which can be put out in one post) a launcher makes it must cool-down for 1 post. Each nail is approximately 2 inches long, and this small size is perfect for puncture wounds. In addition, as the nail is not an altered weapon, "Shiirete Siru (Replenishing)" can be used; however, due to the massive amounts of ammo it takes twice the amount of chakra to replenish the puppet's ammunition. To defend against these nails, most of the time whole-body defense or Fuuton jutsu is the best opportunity for enemy's to live as both can either greatly stop the attack or at-least reduce it to a much slower speed. As an opportunity for other classes to also disable the dangerous puppet, there is one additional opportunity to weaken Tankā. As the weapon is attached to its arm, the puppet can not grab things. Therefor, if one were to pull the ammo cartridges out of the two nail launchers -- which requires a great deal of force due to the enemy having to break the many small senbon used in turning the ammo into the launcher -- not only would the user have to use Replenishing to fix the interior senbon issue, but he would also have to place each ammo back into the proper slot in each barrel (takes one whole post where the puppeteer is completely open to attacks and can not avoid).

Two additional features were installed with the origin of the puppet to make it much stronger. First, as speed is not a concern due to the long-range focus, the whole puppet is constructed with metal. Though this makes the max speed of the puppet just a bit above walking speed, the power of this type of flesh makes it incredibly difficult to deal with. In addition, as a secondary weapon to defend against the puppet's ammo-based supplies' weakness of someone pulling the ammo cartridges out, a flamethrower [range of 6 feet] was installed in the puppet's mouth -- and this weapon can also be utilized to light some Saketon Jutsu on fire. However, one issue that this weapon did not recognize is that the ammo cartridges are put on a belt made of leather, meaning that the puppeteer must move the arms of the puppet a good deal away from the flame every time he uses flamethrower or risk completely destroying the ammo of his puppet.

Mechanism Summary:
• Completely Made of Metal -- Detailed In "Puppet Description" Section (2nd Paragraph)
• 2 Launchers Attached to Arm -- Launcher Mechanics Detailed In "Puppet Appearance" Section, Primary Weaknesses Of These Launchers Detailed In "Puppet Description" Section (1st Paragraph)
• Flamethrower in Mouth -- Detailed In "Puppet Description" Section (2nd Paragraph)