going insain

[shadow_hellchild9756]

i'm sad and depressed so i made this poem


I'M GOING INSAIN
i'm always in pain

why should even be here?
is there more to life than fear?

I'm going insain

i have been raped pysicaly and emotionaly
why must the world be condemed to hipocrisy

i'm going insain
i'm always in pain
there's noting but sadness in my brain

WE ARE ALL GOING INSAIN  

[iLegoBlock]

Im sorry mate, but please spell check.  

[Jellen-chan]

iLegoBlock

Im sorry mate, but please spell check.

Agreed. Nice poem, but it needs spell check. n . n;  

[lgtenos]

Um, cool.

*Insane  

[shadow_hellchild9756]

ok whatever............................... sad  

[finfageek]

*insane *nothing


Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.  

[shadow_hellchild9756]

finfageek

*insane *nothing


Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.

you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............  

[finfageek]

shadow_the_hedghog9756

finfageek

*insane *nothing


Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.

you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............

I'm sorry that happened to you :/  

[shadow_hellchild9756]

finfageek

shadow_the_hedghog9756

finfageek

*insane *nothing


Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.

you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............

I'm sorry that happened to you :/

cry it was awful  

[lgtenos]

Interesting poem, now that I know its origin.

Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors.  

[finfageek]

shadow_the_hedghog9756

finfageek

shadow_the_hedghog9756

finfageek

*insane *nothing


Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.

you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............

I'm sorry that happened to you :/

cry it was awful

Well I sure hope things are getting better for you.  

[finfageek]

lgtenos

Interesting poem, now that I know its origin.

Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors.

Agreed.  

[shadow_hellchild9756]

lgtenos

Interesting poem, now that I know its origin.

Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors.

if you were raped i'm sure you would make a few errors too stare  

[..s.k.i.t.t.l.e.s..]

I think poetry wasn't the best way to go.
If you are still really upset about this, then
you need to go talk to someone. Someone
that you can trust with your words and take
you seriously.

The internet. It's not the place to search
for sensitivity or compassion.

NOT that anyone here was being rude, but
you are obviously upset about them correcting
your grammar and spelling. So instead of displaying
your misfortunes in a place where spelling and
that sort of thing are required, you should probably
just go talk to a doctor.  

[finfageek]

..s.k.i.t.t.l.e.s..

I think poetry wasn't the best way to go.
If you are still really upset about this, then
you need to go talk to someone. Someone
that you can trust with your words and take
you seriously.

The internet. It's not the place to search
for sensitivity or compassion.

NOT that anyone here was being rude, but
you are obviously upset about them correcting
your grammar and spelling. So instead of displaying
your misfortunes in a place where spelling and
that sort of thing are required, you should probably
just go talk to a doctor.

Some winning advice.