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The_9th_Doctors_Rose Crew
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 Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:10 am
Today is not a holiday
Today is a black, black day
Today is a day that has screwed me up infinitesimally
You'll never know how much
Today is the day I dread
Today is a black, black day
Today is a day that changed my life forever
The day with a dark, dark touch
Today is the day my mother died
People love it
Its so great there is candy and there is cake
Hurrah for for ******** Halloween
Today is the day my world fell down
I don't love it
Its not great despite the candy and the ******** OFF ******** HALLOWEEN....
And just for the record I don't care if this poem sucks or not I just ******** want to scream right now...so yea...venting with retarded poetry hurrah... -_-
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 5:36 am
*hugs*
I think it's a very touching poem & you have every right to express yourself.
I hadn't even thought of what today might mean for everyone.
I'm so sorry to hear about your loss.
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The_9th_Doctors_Rose Crew
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:44 am
*hug* Thank you. It was really just to vent honestly.
I think everyone else should have a good time today....but I'm not even attempting it...
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:08 am
I like the symmetry in the first few lines, and how it dissolves in the raw emotion in the last few. I like how you clearly set the very strong emotional tone by doing that.
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The_9th_Doctors_Rose Crew
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:20 am
Otawan I like the symmetry in the first few lines, and how it dissolves in the raw emotion in the last few. I like how you clearly set the very strong emotional tone by doing that. Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. <3 I had forgotten I had put this up here... it was just my way of getting through the day.
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 10:56 am
RainbowPop26 Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. <3 I had forgotten I had put this up here... it was just my way of getting through the day. No worries, it was an interesting poem to read, so thank you for posting it. I'm glad it got you through the day. :3
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 2:31 pm
Really liked how you expressed yourself in this poem. I dont like Halloween much. I think it a creepy day.
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 2:36 pm
You uploaded this a while ago but I do wanna say
I'm sorry for your loss. *internet hug*
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The_9th_Doctors_Rose Crew
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 3:39 pm
Thanks. I don't see it as creepy... I used to love Halloween but now... I just can't.. Thanks you emotion_hug I appreciate your kind thoughts. Its hard to deal with but I get through.
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