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11. ✿ - - - Poems And Writing

Everything I am

Mtodamax

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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 4:57 pm

I am strong
Yet I am weak.
I am the song
That cannot speak.

There is a rythm
All must follow.
There is a bosom
Above each hallow.

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.

I am the sorry pun,
farewell bright sun.

~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 6:56 pm

At least you're writing one. I can't even get myself to write a sonnet. LOL.

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Mtodamax

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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:41 am

SmileUponMyStar

At least you're writing one. I can't even get myself to write a sonnet. LOL.

SOme sonnets are hard to make because you have to have ending rhymes and ake it sound logical, mine however does not sound logical. But good attempt right?

Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 7:52 am

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.

~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat

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Mtodamax

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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 7:59 am

tanqela

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.

~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat

Thanks for the tip smile

Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 8:09 am

Angela_flames14

tanqela

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.

~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat

Thanks for the tip smile

no problem c:

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Darling

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