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Shinsua

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:26 pm
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
 
PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:35 pm
Shinsua
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
No its not ice in any amount anywhere near he can use. Its kinda like frost I guess.  

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Shinsua

Wheezing Gekko

PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:21 pm
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
No its not ice in any amount anywhere near he can use. Its kinda like frost I guess.
Well, call it frost or whatever, but that's still kind of iffy. The section's called materialization, but it shouldn't be anything that could be considered a technique. Something like a chilling film of frost could still be considered something... especially considering the Shinsetsu clan are the only people ( that I know of ) that actually have a temporal chakra.
 
PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:25 pm
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Full Name: Valeyard Sin
Nickname: N/A

Age: Fifteen
Birthdate: Oct 7th
Gender: Male

Height: 5ft 5in
Weight: 108lb

Nindo: "Oh how wrong were we to think immortality meant never dying"
Personality: Valeyard is ultimately selfish and completely absorbed in his goals. Typically unwilling to help anyone, unless it somehow benefits him directly, he would sooner try to gain from their plight than rectify it. Vain, selfish and lacking respect for human life; Valeyard is a dangerous foe to have and possibly an even more dangerous ally.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Medical

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Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton and Doton
Chakra Color: Dark Purple
Chakra Materialization: N/A

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Adv. Battle Tactics
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Fuuinjutsu
Fears:
• Dying
• Crayons

Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster
• Able to learn eiseijutsu.
Personal Attributes:
• Speed Demon: Valeyard's attack speed is increased slightly
• Elementalist: Gains two extra ninjutsu slot

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Cutlass
Weapon Range: 31in
Weapon Weight: 2lb 5in
Weapon Location: Horizontal across lower back


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• Kunai x10
• Bomb Note x10
• Smoke Pellets x10

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Doton


Bloodline


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Juurai Toorima
• {Stage One / techniques learned}

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Velvet Overkill

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:44 pm
Shinsua
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
No its not ice in any amount anywhere near he can use. Its kinda like frost I guess.
Well, call it frost or whatever, but that's still kind of iffy. The section's called materialization, but it shouldn't be anything that could be considered a technique. Something like a chilling film of frost could still be considered something... especially considering the Shinsetsu clan are the only people ( that I know of ) that actually have a temporal chakra.
I see what your getting at now. Ok I will make it something simple then XD  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:45 pm
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
No its not ice in any amount anywhere near he can use. Its kinda like frost I guess.
Well, call it frost or whatever, but that's still kind of iffy. The section's called materialization, but it shouldn't be anything that could be considered a technique. Something like a chilling film of frost could still be considered something... especially considering the Shinsetsu clan are the only people ( that I know of ) that actually have a temporal chakra.
I see what your getting at now. Ok I will make it something simple then XD
Yurp. I'm sure you'll fix it up right, so approved after that change. xP
Then come look at Rouge's profile, heheh.
 

Shinsua

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:51 pm
Shinsua
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
Azeiel The Fallen
Shinsua
I didn't compare the jutsu limits, but I'm sure you know how to do basic math. The chakra materialization into actual ice is a little bit iffy to me, but everything else seems fine.
No its not ice in any amount anywhere near he can use. Its kinda like frost I guess.
Well, call it frost or whatever, but that's still kind of iffy. The section's called materialization, but it shouldn't be anything that could be considered a technique. Something like a chilling film of frost could still be considered something... especially considering the Shinsetsu clan are the only people ( that I know of ) that actually have a temporal chakra.
I see what your getting at now. Ok I will make it something simple then XD
Yurp. I'm sure you'll fix it up right, so approved after that change. xP
Then come look at Rouge's profile, heheh.
Lol oh your an a** XD  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:55 pm
Rouge Summations
APPROVED  

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Ningishzida

Demonic Gatekeeper

PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 3:56 pm
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Full Name: Shouka Uchiha
Nickname: Sho-kun

Age: 17
Birthdate: October 4th
Gender: Male

Height: 6'1"
Weight: 178lbs

Nindo: "Who cares in the end?"
Personality: Shouka is a fairly quiet man in terms of sociable skills. Although he's only quiet with those he does not know as of yet. That is of course if he feels like they can not be friends. Due to this many feel a quiet and mysterious essence; something that is so repellent and attractive. Shouka holds a calm disposition most times, but tends to get angry when his friends are harmed. Fortunately he is not quick to resort to violence unless he or the others raise their fists first. Shouka is quite competitive in terms of sports. Physical skills (Sports, etc.) play a large role in his life and he is always giving his all. Even when sustaining an arm or leg injury, it will not stop him from continuing. When not much noise is being made, Shouka tends to fall asleep. When one gets to know Shouka, its been stated that he truly has a kind heart.

Village: Kumogakure - Village Hidden in the Clouds
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu Main-Class
Subclass: Bloodline Subclass

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Bloodline: Sharingan

Chakra Pool: 270
Chakra Element: Fire, Lightning
Chakra Color: Dark Blue with a violet outline
Chakra Materialization: Encases Shouka in a Dark Blue flame, almost like the Curse Seal but without the spiraling look

Strengths:
• Dojutsu
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Water Element
Fears:
• Losing his comrades
• Failing his village

Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Due to his physical training, Shouka nullifies the rigorous Taijutsu restrictions. (+1 Post to any Rigorous Taijutsu training.
• Can learn one extra Taijutsu Style.
Reductions Condensed:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post's faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post's faster.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 03 / 08 Per Element
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01

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Weapon Type: O-katana
Weapon Range: 58in
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: Diagonal across back


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• Shuriken x10
• Senbon x20
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Raiton


Sharingan/Dojutsu


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Tame Za Kyokudo




Hachimon


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Shigure Souen


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Shouka grew up in a very poor village inside of Rai no Kuni, one that while it lacked money held a large amount of loyalty to each other. They all worked together, creating things and helping when possible. If one person was having trouble, they would all go help out, and vise versa. However Shouka, he was different than the rest. He was quiet, and calm, if he saw someone struggling he would just watch on, indifferent to the situation no matter what. It was a strange thing for the village, who had decided to raise him in place of his parents, who had passed away when he was but a little boy, leaving him alone in the world. The villagers took pity on him, taking him in their homes, one day he'd stay with one villager, the next he'd be with a different. He hated his life-style, always moving from house to house, never settling down. So when a trading caravan, one that was headed to Kumogakure arrived in their village for a rest Shouka decided to sneak on-board their caravan. So he could escape his village, and possibly become a Shinobi. He'd heard stories about Shinobi, people who could jump across rooftops, shoot fire from their mouths, and conjure water from mid-air. He wanted to do that, to be powerful. So he enrolled in the academy, and spent six years wasting his life there, learning things that he already knew from the time he spent in the library. He was almost always reading something, in the library or in the academy, so he was labeled a bookworm. Yet he was also a genius, he was easily able to surpass all others in Taijutsu, and he was even a genius in Ninjutsu, it was frightening to think that a boy who grew up a civilian was so powerful.

Yet he didn't know that he was from the Uchiha Clan, a noble clan that had the Sharingan bloodline, the bloodline that allowed them to copy all techniques, as well as gives them the ability to see everything in slow-motion. How was this possible? He'd never known his parents, but from what he was told they'd never been shinobi, could they have possibly been runaways? It was possible.
 
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 9:46 am
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Full Name: Shadow Spirit
Nickname: The Knife Sannin

Age: 17
Birthdate: May 30
Gender: Male

Height: 5’ 11”
Weight: 175lbs

Nindo: "Fear the Shadows, and the Spirits of other, for true power follows them when they are one."
Personality: Shadow is a strong and dependable person living his life by every small movement of others. None can tell what he is thinking or even if he is all there most of the time but he tries to show them that he is there for them. He is very polite and well-mannered always willing to make friends if they are willing to try as well. Most people in his village would think that he is a man that should never have become a ninja, but he aims to prove them wrong and show them that an outsider can be trusted and strong as well.

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Sensor

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Bloodline: None

Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Katon, Raiton
Chakra Color: Pitch Black
Chakra Materialization: Surrounds him like a cloak while circling around his feet

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Fighting multiple people
Weaknesses:
• Females, he goes out of his way to help them
• Doton ninjutsu
Fears:
• Proving everyone right that he is useless
• Dying alone

Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
• Scout: Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius
Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu [ 1 ] post faster

Personal Attributes:
• Speed slightly increased
• Reflexes slightly increased

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Twin Death Knives
Weapon Range: 7ins (just Blade) 9ins total
Weapon Weight: 1lb
Weapon Location: Rest on his lower back in a double sheath


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• Kunai x15
• Shuriken x15

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Raiton



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• {If none, remove section}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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The life of Shadow is quite boring to say the least, as he lived with his mother and his father like everyone else does. However, there is somethings that are different, as they were nomads traveling from village to village trading good to pay for their life. Once his family reached Kumo they were ambushed, and his parents were killed. However, the bandits didn’t expect them to have actually trained Shadow how to fight. He killed the bandits quickly and without emotions as he stood there alone. Sheathing his knives he made his way to Kumogakure and requested that he be allowed to live in the village as his family was just killed. The Anbu radioed the Kage and she allowed him to live there as he became a part of kumogakure and began to train as a ninja to protect everyone around him like his parents taught him too.
 

Lucifer Lord of Death


Anonymous_Alcoholic

Lunatic

PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 11:44 am
@Snow: We need something in the history section. Also paper bombs are not a starting projectile.

@Joker: Those knives are more like cleavers. And longer than three inches. But whatever I guess. Approved.  
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:28 pm
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Full Name: Lucille Shinsetsu.
Nickname: Luci.

Age: 16 Years Old.
Birthdate: December 30th.
Gender: Female.

Height: 5'9'' Tall.
Weight: 115lbs.

Nindo: "Express Yourself - Never Hold You Back!"
Personality:
Lucille Shinsetsu is a very passionate person in the terms that she never does anything half-hearted. She puts all her soul into her goals and uses everything to her disposal to achieve success. One can find her passion burning it's brightest when in battle as her spirit flows with every blow, especially when she is fighting for something she believes in, mainly the protection of her friends and comrades. However passionate she is though, Lucille does not always display the right emotions. She is described to be Emotionally Confused as her expression hardly ever fits the situation of the moment. There are times when she is seen to frown and show some form of emotion like anger, fear, jealousy, etc. This however is very rare and can only be brought about by certain conditions. Energetic is not a strong enough word to describe Lucille. She is certainly expressive. Lucille is best known for her outgoing and cheery character along with her down right positive outlook on everything. Always found to be smiling, it seems like nothing could bring her down. However this does make her oblivious to the feelings of others. Lucille has a fairly short attention span, this means she gets distracted very easily.

Lucille does have a Bull-Headed streak to her. She does not go against her own creeds. This makes her often a very stubborn person, in short a hard person to deal with. Lucille does not believe in righteous killing. She has the mind set that believes everyone is innocent. If she can avoid killing she will. She would rather bring someone in alive and put them in prison then kill them. To her a persons sins means nothing. This is part of her oblivious side. But not all see it as a weakness. Lucille is always ready to defend and protect her friends and comrades. She's easily take the blunt of an attack.

Lucille is the creative type. She see's the world through different eyes. She can often be found painting, sketching, sculpting, and crafting. Lucille has been known to even create her own paints and coals. Like her personality, Lucille's art is wild and blasting with energy. It's unique.


Village: Konohagakure no Sato.
Rank: Genin.
Main Class: Ninjutsu Class.
Subclass: Bloodline Sub-Class.


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Bloodline: Shinsetsu Clan.

Chakra Pool: [ 250 ] + [ 20 ] + [ 20 ] = [ 290 ] + [ 25 ] - Reserve.
Chakra Element: Yukiton [ Snow ] | Fuuton [ Wind ] + Suiton [ Water ]
Chakra Color: Blizzard Blue with Anti-Flash White Tip.
Chakra Materialization: Chakra appears as a Glowing Aura that Scatters into Snow. Her Chakra is Cold.

Strengths:
Close and Mid Ranged Combat.
Enhanced Chakra Control.
Enhanced Eyesight.
Acrobatics and Flexibility.
Weaknesses:
Faulty at Ranged Combat.
Low Stamina.
Decreased Physical Strength.
Weak Against Katon [ Fire ] and Raiton [ Lightning ] Ninjutsus.
Fears:
Total Darkness.
Drowning.

Class Attributes:
Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
Tsumetai [ Cold to the Touch ] | Bloodline Attribute.
Gives up Ability to Learn Genjutsu for [ 1 ] Additional Taijutsu Style.
Additional [ 20 ] Chakra Pool.


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Ryo: 両 0.
AC: 0.

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0.
C Rank :: 0.
B Rank :: 0.
A Rank :: 0.
S Rank :: 0.


Limitations:
Ninjutsu : : 06 / 02.
Genjutsu : : 01 / 01.
Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02.
Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01.


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Weapon Type: 2 Hidden Switchblade.
Weapon Range: Close Range [ 2-3 Meters ]
Weapon Weight: Light Weight.
Weapon Location: Hidden in Sleeves.
Basic Weapon.

Summoning Type: N/A.
Summon Sage: N/A.
Pacts: N/A.


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10 Kunai | 10 Shuriken Stars | 10 Wired Knives [ Length 10 feet ]


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Maruton:
Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton [ Wind Techniques ]


Suiton [ Water Techniques ]


Shinsetsu [ Bloodline Techniques ]

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Mirror Image Style
S t a g e O n e [1]


Kuro Ashi Kata Style
S t a g e O n e [1]


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Sobagai Deba Sentou Style
S t a g e O n e [1]


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Lucille Shinsetsu was born on December 30th in the Glacial North. Harlow was the only Child born to Shinobi Parents Clio Shinsetsu, Lucille's Mother and Theron Shinsetsu, Harlow's Father. Clio Shinsetsu was a Jounin Ranked Ninja while her Father was a member of the Anbu. Both were skilled and respected by the many members of their Clan. During Childbirth Clio suffered complications which resulted in her death hours after Lucille's delivery. Lucille was born Premature and with damaged lungs, it was believed she would not survive her first day of life. However the Medical Team assigned to her care were able to get Lucille stable, saving her life. Out of the red zone Lucille was still to weak and ill to leave the Hospital, the biggest fear being a relapse in her health. It would be nearly a year after her birth in which Lucille was deemed stable enough to be released. During her time in the Hospital, Lucille's Father Theron was called back into duty and sent off on a Mission only to not return. Theron was considered killed in action. Having no Relative Family left in the Glacial North Lucille was to be sent off to Konohagakure to be raised by her Estranged Grandparents. Lucille's Grandfather was best described as a Military Figure and so from the time she arrived into the care of her Grandparents Lucille was to and would be trained as a Shinobi of the Leaf.

Growing up for Lucille was difficult. Not only did she continuously disappoint her Grandfather in Training but she also became a Joke within the Village. Lucille was small figured, frail, and very clumsy. With every step she took Lucille would cause endless chaos. Because of this the other Children would keep a good distance away from Lucille. She spent many of her younger years alone and depressed. The other Children would often tease Lucille and refer to her as a Curse of Bad Luck. This was how she earned the nickname "Thirteen" the other Children saying she should be named after an Unlucky Number because she was an Unlucky Girl. It was fair to say Lucille had a hard start in life for she only suffered Bad Luck from the day she was born. Lucille was nothing more then a walking disaster. The only light in her life was her Grandmother who unlike everyone else didn't give up on Lucille. Because of her Grandmother Lucille was able to lift herself out of her self pity. No longer wanting to continue on the path she was on, Lucille decided to live her life according to no ones rules but her own. She would be who she was even if the world rejected it. Granted by her new Attitude and approach to life Lucille began to excel in her training and even caused less and less disasters.

At the age of 6 Lucille was entered into the Academy to begin her Shinobi training outside of Family. Her days in School were much like her days outside, lonely. But this didn't stop Lucille from doing what she needed to do. When it came to Academics Lucille was top of her Class but was disastrous at the Physical aspect. But Harlow was able to Graduate from the Academy at the age of 10, in which she would continue her Training with her Grandfather, at this time she did not achieve her headband. As the time passed from age 6 to 10 Lucille had grown more Physically Fit, able to endure more like the average Shinobi of her size and gender. She also displayed excellent skills in Acrobatics and Chakra Control. Now at the age of 15, Lucille would be sent to get her Headband and be placed on a Squad as her Grandfather agreed she was ready to do so. And thus her journey as a Shinobi begins.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:42 pm
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Full Name: Thanatos Hatake
Nickname: Thana

Age: 18
Birthdate: June 26
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 175

Nindo: "I will fufill our dream to become a great shinobi"
Personality: Like a true Hatake he is calm and decisive , he doesn't get as cheery as his brother ever since he lost his eye sight in one eye at a young age. Though he can still show kindness,

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Hatake

Chakra Pool: 270
Chakra Element: Lightning, Water
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization:His chakra appears as an aura of energy around him with electricity jumping everywhere.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Far range combat
Weaknesses:
• Earth
• Wind
Fears:
• Not being able to fufill his brothers and his dream
• Dying

Class Attributes:
•Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
•Class Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased
Reductions:
•Learn Bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
•Learn Ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
•Learn Raiton one [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Thanatos physical training nullifies all rigorous style restrictions. Though the training takes longer (+1 Tai and Buki training)
• Thanatos can learn one extra Bukijutsu Style

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• 10 Senbon

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Lightning


Water


Hatake


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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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The Beginning

Thanatos was born in Kumogakure, when the Hatake exiled themselves many went to Suna, but his parents went to Kumo. They stayed there together and had him. In the early years of his life he wasn't very social. He didn't go and play with other children unless he was invited. That's where he met Demetri, you see Demetri wasn't his blood brother. But that is for later, Now he met Demetri and they almost instantly became friends. They both shared a loyalty to the village and a pride within themselves to be the best. Some people would mistake them for siblings since they both had silverish hair. But Demetri's skin was a tad tanner than Thanatos. Thanatos was glad he had such a good friend someone who was like a brother to him. They made a pact that they would become great shinobi together and would always be there for the other.

The Tragedy

Then one day, Demetri didn't come to the park to play. He found this strange but his mother told him not to worry he might have just been busy. But a week went by and he didn't see Demetri at all. Worried for his friend he headed to his house. When he arrived he knocked a few times, noone answered and he didn't here anyone inside. At first he feared that they had maybe moved away. But he shook his head and knocked one more time. No answer, but suddenly he heard something move. He called out Demetri's name but heard no answer he opened the door and entered. The entire house was dark, the sun was setting and no natural light was showing through the drawn curtains. He turned on a light of the kitchen and he found Demetri sitting at the table alone. A bowl of half eaten rice in front of him, he looked over at the sink and noticed many dishes piled up. This was strange as his mom would always be cleaning."Demetri?" said in a questional tone. He saw something glinting on Demetri's cheeks and it feel to the table. He was crying, in all his years of knowing Demetri he had never seen him cry.He was going to take a step towards him when he finally spoke."They're dead."He said, Thanatos tilted his his what did he mean by that."Wh-"He was cut off before he could ask."MY PARENTS!" He yelled, another thing Demetri didn't usually do in such a manner. It was a feeling of mix anger and sorrow."They were heading to support a team who had asked for backup, when they arrived they were ambushed, their team fought and killed them. But my parents...they didn't survive...I-I don't have any family left." Demetri tears had stopped, but you could feel the anger coming from the boy. Thanatos felt bad for him walked up to his side placing a hand on his shoulder. Demetri looked up at him as Thanatos smiled."Come be a part of my family, you can become my brother." Demetri eyes widened in surprise before he could speak Thanatos added."We will always be there for each other Demetri." Demetri's anger left him, he wiped the wet spots off his face and stood. He followed Thanatos him. His parents warmly and gladly accepted him into their home and family. So Thanatos and Demetri became brothers, and they would smile and laugh when people asked them if they were.


The Incident

But then, an something happened. When they were about 11 they had gotten jobs to make some money for themselves. Simple things like chopping firewood or gathering herbs. One day they had been finishing up various jobs and being paid for them. The last one was delivering firewood to a old man who lived in the forest outside of Kumogakure. Though there parents didn't allow them to leave and go that far off. The man paid well so they wanted to make a little more then they usually do. Everything went fine with the delivery. The man paid and they were on their way. While heading back they were stopped by some bandit. He demanded the money they had, he must have seen the old man pay them. Demetri in an attempt to help them escape picked up a stick and threw it at the man, it hit him in the eye and he yelled in pain. They both ran off, but they weren't fast enough. He cut them off and he was angry."You little brat, I'm gonna cut your eyes out!"he yelled as he pulled out a kunai and slashed Demetri. Thanatos watched as the man attacked his brother. So he pushed him out of the way and took the attack. He slashed his eye and Thanatos screamed in pain, Demetri was instantly by his side trying to protect him from the bandit. They were so scared, they didn't know what to do. They were just kids...but then everything fell silent. The bandit fell dead on the floor. The anbu had arrived after hearing yells from the bandit. The took Demetri home and hospitalized Thanatos. At the hospital Demetri was there when they told his parents that he had lost the use of his eye. When they told the doctor if there son could still be a shinobi. He informed them that he could no longer qualify. Thanatos laid in the bed, pretending to be asleep. He couldn't believe that his dream was over. They wouldn't allow him to be a shinobi even if he tried. After many hours had passed by Demetri finally came up to him, apologizing for ruining his life and his dreams. Thanatos merely smiled and placed his hand on his brothers shoulder."You'll just have to fulfill our dreams Demetri." Demetri looked at him with a surprised look. He then nodded with a look of sheer determination in his eyes.

Two Dreams, One Goal.


And then the years went by, Demetri went to the academy and came back to show Thanatos how to do what he had learn. Then Demetri became a genin and he became increasingly busier, training doing missions all that sort of stuff. Then when he was a chunnin his schedule slowed. But then Demetri returned one day being carried by his teammates. His family was called and told that he was in a Coma and they had no idea when he would wake up. At the time Thanatos began thinking of what Demetri made him promise a long time ago. But he wouldn't consider it as long as his brother had a pulse. He finally woke up one day, he looked physically unwell. But that was probably from the many weeks on inactivity. He had even told him that the doctors said his junk had shrunk! Thanatos was happy Demetri was ok it was good to have his brother alive and well.


Tragedy Repeats Itself


But it seemed, with Demetri history would always repeat itself. And a tragedy fell upon the Hatake family. It seemed like a normal day, Thanatos came back from working out, even though he wasn't a ninja it didn't mean he couldn't be fit. He neared his house seeing someone with a black cloak and a mask at his door talking to his parent. His thoughts instantly fell on Demetri."What did that idiot get himself into this time?"He asked himself with a small smirk, but his smirk was instantly wiped off when his mother fell to the floor. Crying her eyes out, a feeling sunk deep in his being. It was dread. He rushed to his mothers side asking what happened. The Anbu remained silent and his father kneeled next to him."Its about Demetri...He died on a mission...earlier today." Thanatos heard it but it didn't register completely in his mind. He just shook his head."No, you're wrong there's no way." He said completely and outright denying it. The anbu asked them to come and confirm the body. Thanatos wanted his parent to stay while he went but his mother insisted she went. When they arrived at the hospital they were taken to the morgue. A doctor took them to a table that had silver hair coming out of the edges of the cloth. Thanatos mother instantly started crying again. His father holding her tight, the doctor asked Thanatos to confirm the body. And He pulled the cover off, and Thanatos was in disbelief. There lay the body of his brother. His only sibling even though they weren't connected by blood. He fell to his knees he clenched the metal table his brother laid upon. And anger shook his entire body and for the first time ever since they were attacked by that bandit. Thanatos cried it was a silent but angry cry. His tears hit the floor making the sound of water dripping. Only footsteps broke through the dripping sound. He carried Demetri's belonging, his headband, his weapons, and his little orange book. He would always make fun of him for keeping that little thing. It was almost like a diary but he called it a journal. There was also a note Thanatos took the note and opened it reading it too himself."Remember your promise."It said. He closed his eyes remembering the promise he made. It had only been a week after Demetri had entered the academy. He woke up Thanatos late in the night."Thanatos, I'm going to be a shinobi someday...I'll be going on dangerous missions if anything ever happens to me...I want you to have my eye." Thanatos was struck mute by this he didn't know what had brought this to his brothers mind. He tried to reason with him but Demetri merely shook his head and told him to promise. Thanatos promised that he would take his brothers eyes. To fulfill their dream of becoming a great shinobi. Thanatos opened his eyes to find the medic shinobi holding another note dressed to the hospital."This is Demetri's final wish...I'm sure it corresponds with the note you received, Are you ready?"Thanatos wiped away his tears and nodded. They immediately took him and Demetri into another room for the surgery to began the implantation. Thanatos laid against the operating table as a mask was placed over his mouth and nose."Demetri...You'll become my eye, and I'll see the future for you, I shall become a great shinobi, for both of us!"


The Last Beginning

With his brothers eye now replacing the eye he lost so long ago. Thanatos has received permission to become a shinobi. Being too old to attend the academy but because of his brother he passed the exam with flying colors. Wearing Demetri's mask and the headband he wore as a shinobi which covers his real eye while leaving Demetri's green eye exposed for the world to see. He wanted them to know, that a great shinobi died. And he was to take his place and become even better fulfilling their dreams.
 
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:50 pm
Luciania

1st Personal Attribute: To reduce your bloodline post by 2 you must increase your posting +1 for another type of jutsu such as genjutsu or ninjutsu

2nd Personal Attribute:The max I could give ya is 20 + Chakra

Items: The advanced art kit doesn't really need to be there and accounted for since it isn't a weapon or projectile.
Summoning Scrolls must be bought in Takumi so you will have to remove that sorry~  

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 6:46 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji

I edited my Profile.
Also, I just wanted to mention that despite her Advanced Art Kit being a Non Weapon Item, she could actually use them as Weapons or even Medical Equipment. That's why I added it.
 
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