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-Your chakra is up by 75 points, so I'm figuring that it comes from training, if that's the case then the +75 would also pertain to stamina. So your stamina should be 125
- Your first trait is really convoluted. The point of him not using any element doesn't workout the same as actually losing slots to gain slots. Either way you're technically giving him 8 free jutsu, and 4 being customs, 2 maruton, and 2 genjutsu. This is way~ over powered as a trait. 1. if he doesn't wish to use an element then since this isn't a ninjutsu class user you could do that of your own volition and it wouldn't give you reason to get this many jutsu, mind that any customs slots beyond maybe two extra and that would be that entire trait spent if you did that. This trait is just flat out denied as it is now.
-your second trait is fine but "perceive" isn't quite the word to describe what you mean here. It would be "notice" or "recognize" that tweak would just straighten out the meaning.
- You should have at chuunin 11 ninjutsu, 16 genjutsuthe customs stand the same at 8 per person until you resolve to decide on exactly what you want to replace this trait with.
(I know your situation,but I would of loved to have the links to all those jutsu)
- you should have 6 ninjutsu, and you made a mistake i think and placed the two for your taijutsu onto your buki. (simple quirks)
-technically class attributes are being replaced by the discipline so you should removes those.
- Question: did you by those explosive tags?You should link to when you purchased them if you did. If you didn't then those should be removed they're not considered a projectile
Approved
- can't accept either of those traits, the first dips into specialty traits which we of the crew have to deliberate whither it's fair to allow those specialty techniques to simply be learned by those without the class.
-The second is just the same as a rank reduction of the cost and we don't allow that. You could reduce the cost by 5-10 point no lower than 5 points in cost but that's about it.
It's 355 , and 155 before the disciplines are added in. you should just leave the bonus from the disciplines as marked in the parenthetical.
Tweak it and approved.
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Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 7:23 pm
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Reaper Elyse -Your chakra is up by 75 points, so I'm figuring that it comes from training, if that's the case then the +75 would also pertain to stamina. So your stamina should be 125
- Your first trait is really convoluted. The point of him not using any element doesn't workout the same as actually losing slots to gain slots. Either way you're technically giving him 8 free jutsu, and 4 being customs, 2 maruton, and 2 genjutsu. This is way~ over powered as a trait. 1. if he doesn't wish to use an element then since this isn't a ninjutsu class user you could do that of your own volition and it wouldn't give you reason to get this many jutsu, mind that any customs slots beyond maybe two extra and that would be that entire trait spent if you did that. This trait is just flat out denied as it is now.
-your second trait is fine but "perceive" isn't quite the word to describe what you mean here. It would be "notice" or "recognize" that tweak would just straighten out the meaning.
- You should have at chuunin 11 ninjutsu, 16 genjutsuthe customs stand the same at 8 per person until you resolve to decide on exactly what you want to replace this trait with.
(I know your situation,but I would of loved to have the links to all those jutsu)
I'll fix the other parts in a moment. The trait I remade back to the original 4 Custom slots, and while he has no element he is still able to use Maruton, as those are element-less jutsu. But that's where he's limited from there. That was the original accepted, anyway.
And did I really miscout the jutsu limit that bad? Holy s**t! Okay, I'll fix that.
And yeah, alot of the places I trained in were dele ted, so I'm SOL there. |
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Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 7:46 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:22 am
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Full Name: Reaver Eisen Schwarz
Nickname: Reave, Schwarz Regen
Age: 18
Birthdate: July 19
Gender: Male
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 215lbs
Nindo: "I'll live this life until this life won’t let me live here anymore"
Personality: Reaver is a very cheerful person, always trying to see the positive side of things. He's upbeat despite his past and always tries to cheer people up or help people out. He tries to make friends with everyone and what friends he does make he considers them very precious to him. There is another side to Reaver the side that enjoys killing his enemies brutally with a smile on his face. Due to an event when he was younger Reaver has a split personality that is sadistic and cruel and only comes out when he is fighting someone he truly doesn't like or deems an enemy.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Sensor
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Bloodline: Kōton
Chakra Pool: 365
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element:Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Purple
Chakra Materialization: Drips like water off his arms and face and raises like smoke from his shoulders and head.
Strengths:
• Swordsmanship
• All Ranger
Weaknesses:
• His personality changes
• Women
Fears:
• The female figure
• Drowning
Class Discipline:
• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active (fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both.)
Reductions:
• Learn Genjutsu [1] post faster
• Learns Bloodline [2] post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Coup De Grâce – Learn Genjutsu [1] post less
• Fähigkeit der Toten - Learns Bloodline Jutsu [1] Post Faster
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Ryo: 0 両
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Taijutsu : : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu : : 00 / 01
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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 3'
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Weapon Location: Reaver's Hip
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• Kunai x15
• Shuriken x15
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Shigure Soen Ryu
• Stage One
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Xing-Yi
• Stage One
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Not much is known about reaver as he tends to keep his past hidden. All that is known is that he's killed before, and that he grew up in a small village in water country.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:35 am
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Full Name: Myurai Hattori
Nickname:
Age: 16
Birthdate: December 2nd
Gender: Male
Height: 69"
Weight: 153
Nindo: "He will win who knows when to fight and when not to fight."
Personality: Myurai is quite dynamic. His personality varies from smug and cocky to disquieted and depressed after a major defeat, but shows himself to be an incredibly serious and determined fighter when confronted with an actual threat. Willing to fight, kill, and die for whatever he believes in, Myurai is a dangerous man to those who stand in his way.
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Chunin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Hyouton
Chakra Pool:335
Stamina Pool: 320
Chakra Element: Fuuton, Suiton
Chakra Color: Emerald Green
Chakra Materialization: Forms a bright green aura around him.
Strengths:
• Omni Combatant (can fight at any range)
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Strong Taijutsu
• Physical Strength.
Fears:
• Dying alone.
• Running out of options
Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
Bloodline Attributes:
• All Hyouton users have Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] as chakra elements.
• All Hyouton users are capable of performing techniques with a single hand.
• Hyouton ice is very difficult to melt. ( More in [ Hyouton ] technique description. )
• All Hyouton users learn Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] jutsu one [1] post faster.
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
• Learn Suiton and Fuuton one [1] post faster.
• Learns Bukijutsu two [2] posts faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Chakra Control: All Ninjutsu and Bloodline jutsu B-Rank and below cost ten [10] chakra less. Down to a minimum of five [5] chakra per jutsu.
• Swordsman: Learns Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
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Ryo: 両1600
AC: 002650
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 5
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 1
S Rank :: 0
Chakra Training Missions:
Genin
• Basic Chakra Training: Meditate [x]
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• Ninjutsu : : 8 / 8
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
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• Kunai: 5
• Shuriken: 5
• Flash Tags: 5
• Smoke Bombs: 5
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [ Shadow Shuriken Technique ] D-Rank [X]
Suiton
• Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu [ Water Shuriken Technique ] D-Rank [x]
• Mizu Tate no Jutsu [ Water Shield Technique ] D-Rank [x]
• Suimenka no Kisoku [ Breathing Underwater Technique ] D-Rank [x]
• Takitsubo no Jutsu [ Waterfall Basin Technique ] C-Rank [X]
• Suiryuudan no Jutsu [ Water Dragon Projectile Technique ] B-Rank [x]
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Fuuton
• Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu [ Wind Levitation ] E-Rank [x]
• Boufuu Kyuuzou [ Gale Surge ] D-Rank [x]
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Hyouton [ Ice Release ]
The act of combining wind and water chakra in order to generate water-composed ice. This method can be performed on existing bodies of water, or by manipulating the minute amount of water molecules in the air, either way, it is an impressive and powerful feat that requires only a single hand. Ice created this way lays dormant- they are not attacks on their own.
The ice created in this method is very compact, often melted only by fire and demon techniques two [2] ranks higher than them.
It should be noted, however, that the ice can still be shattered or sliced by physical forces strong enough, one [1] rank higher. Unnamed attacks cannot damage the ice.
___Rank D: Small to medium amounts of water to ice. ( Deep puddles, pools, etc. )
___Rank B: Large amounts of water to ice. ( Ponds, etc. )
___Rank S: Massive amounts of water to ice. ( Large Lakes, etc. )
• Requires [10] posts to learn.
• Must learn before proceeding to other techniques.
• If you cannot learn a certain rank of technique, you cannot create ice equal to that amount. ( A genin cannot learn A ranked jutsu, so he cannot turn massive amounts of water into ice. ) LEARNED
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Myurai grew up in a normal shinobi family though his family originated in the Land of Mist he himself grew up in Kumogakure. His father was a very intelligent strategist and taught Myurai everything he knew about squad tactics. His mother taught him to be a well rounded shinobi and to make up for his weaknesses. Though this he has begun practicing all the arts of a shinobi and seeks to be a master of ninjutsu one day.
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[color=#0040FF][align=center][b] Myurai Hattori [/b][/color]
[color=#04B431]￥ Kumogakure ￥ Bukijutsu/Bloodline ￥[/color]
[color=#0040FF][b]￥ Suiton ￥ Fuuton ￥[/b] [/color]
[color=#04B431]￥ Chunin ￥ Hyouton ￥[/color]
[color=#0040FF][b]￥ Ryo: 01600 ￥[/b][/color][color=#04B431] AC:00002650[/color] [b]￥ Chakra :335 ￥[/b]
[color=#04B431]￥ Stamina :320 ￥ [/color][/align][i]
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 7:26 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:47 pm
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Full Name: Kenji Ayame Saiketsu
Nickname: Kenji
Age: 15
Birthdate: Dec 21st
Gender: female
Height: 5.1 ft
Weight: 123 lbs
Nindo: "I will paint a picture from the blood of my enemies...or friends."
Personality: Kenji has learned to hide the fact she is a saiketsu by acting 'happy' even though her thoughts are very different and certain things could set her into her original saiketsu mood of anger and bloodlust.
Village: yukigakure Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijustu
Second Class: Sensor
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Bloodline: Ketsueki
Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton and Katon
Chakra Color: salmon pink
Chakra Materialization: its like a creepy ballerina dance around her
Strengths:
• Bloodlust [ determination ]
• Sensory abilities [ 5 mile radius : genin ]
Weaknesses:
• Doton [ Mud ]
• Being angered [ Low Temper ]
Fears:
• Being arrested
• Her clan
Class Disciplines :
• Weapon Specialist
• Oracle
Reductions:
• Bukijustu -1 posts
• Suiton -1 posts [ Ketsueki ]
Personal Attributes:
• Can perform Suiton with one handseal
• Can regenerate blood quickly
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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
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Weapon Type: twin mini katana's
Weapon Range: medium
Weapon Weight: light
Weapon Location: on her back
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon "My true flame"
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Suiton "Something to put the fire out."
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Ketsueki "It's paint I swear~"
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• {If none, remove section}
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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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One day in the heart of winter, a little girl was born to a poor family, mistaken for a boy because of the lck of education her parents had, and money for girl clothes, they made her dress as a boy for years to come. Being poor ment they had to survive, her mother worked long hours at the market selling stolen goods, her father was the person who stole the goods so the mother could sell them. When Kenji was just five, her father and mother were arrested for thieving a great jewel from the Mizukage, vent on blaming the theft on their daughter, they got free and ran out, the daughter hid for many years to protect herself and change her appearence over time. She is still a thief when she entered the academy at seven, she was welcomed by men because she was pretty and clumsy, making up for not so smart self. |
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 1:20 am
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Submitting my character Zero for the class change. Fully trained Suna jounin but the compacting of bukijutsu and samurai means switching to taijutsu dropping a few buki styles and changing for taijutsu. All previous training is there but the new styles i wish to keep cause to be honest I dont want to spend another week kicking logs. Az, Yoko, and AOE could all confirm this character's stuff if another mod gets to this first.
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Full Name: Unknown
Nickname: Zero
Age: 21
Birthdate: Unknown
Gender: Evidently male
Height: 5ft 5in
Weight: 162 lbs
Nindo: "I never cared about justice, and I don't recall ever calling myself a hero. I have always only fought for the people I believe in. I won't hesitate... If an enemy appears in front of me, I will destroy it!"
Personality: A gentlemen as well as a pervert, he is polite but blunt and to the point. Fiercely protective of his family now that he has one again. Particularly his little sister. He feels his partner can take care of himself. Respects other users of the blade to a certain extent. Rather adaptive with his skills, shifting them and manipulating them in different ways to use them to the fullest. No matter what his enemies do to him, he is always able to come up with a retort. He also shows a great distaste for innocent deaths.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Jounin
Main Class: Bukijutsu ( Mystic Hero )
Subclass: Taijutsu ( Brawler )
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Chakra Pool: 775
Stamina pool: 955
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Fiery red
Chakra Materialization: Seeps and rises like a dim fire.
Strengths:
• Swordplay.
• Able to keep a level head in stressful situations.
Weaknesses:
• Being caught in a far-range fight.
• Being completely overpowered.
Fears:
• Being without purpose.
• Being unable to save the innocent.
Class Attributes:
Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu two [2] posts faster.
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Personal Attributes:
• Dedicated Blade: When protecting innocents, Zero's strength moderately increases.
• Will to Protect: Zero can live through and heal from near-lethal wounds, much more so than a normal person.
• Iron Avenger: If an innocent is harmed while defending them, all physical aspects increases moderately. ( Due to the very specific trigger )
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Ryo: 両 3450
AC: 9800
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 7
C Rank :: 3
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 3
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 9/ 9
• Genjutsu : : 0 / 0
• Taijutsu Styles: : 03 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03 / 03
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Weapon Type: Sabre
Weapon Range: 33in
Weapon Weight: 2.5 lbs
Weapon Location: Scabbard tied around back.
Custom:
[ Corpse Bone Armor: } Description: Taken from the body of a Kaguya genin, these bones are in a permanently hardened state due to the method of the bearer's death. Through various scientific methods, the first Kazekage was able to interlace and shape these bones specifically for Zero's usage and form; covering his chest in its entirety, while the bones guarding vital organs seem to be instinctively thicker. Taking various remnants from the original holder, Zero will be able to repair this armor using a method that mimics the actual Kaguya clan technique.
Ability Summary:
• Provides great defense to the general chest and back areas. ( Roughly constant B-Rank protection. )
• Provides significant defense to the heart, lung, kidney, and spinal areas. ( Roughly constant A-Rank protection. )
• This armor follows the same rules as the Kaguya bloodline.
• Armor can be repaired by the original owner's blood, which is currently in the Kazekage's possession. ( Process takes roughly 24 hours. )
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• 30 shuriken
• 13 kunai knives
• 50 yards worth of Nanoparticulated wire
• Camera hidden in a buttoned sleeve on his arm.
•2 snake tounge kunai
•30 snowflake shurriken
•10 wafer kunai
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
•Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ]
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•Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Crow Clone Technique ]
•Senei Jashu [ Hidden Shadow Snake Hands ]
•Mandara no Jin [ Myriad Snake Net Formation ]
•Hari Jizou [ Underworld Guardian Spikes ]
• Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [ Wild Lion's Mane Technique ]
Raiton:
• Nagare Tensou no Jutsu [ Current Transfer Technique ]
• Kiiro Ryuu no Tameiki [ Sigh of the Yellow Dragon ]
• Raiton no Yoroi [ Lightning Armor ]
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Custom Jutsu
Technique Name: Sougenmu (Twin Phantasms)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Null
Description:Creates a shadow copy of himself that mimics his actions and doubles his hits from attacks. Different from a shadow clone in that it must mimic the action of the user and stands in the shadow of said user at all times. Form is a grey version of the user.
[ Genmu Zero: ]
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu Complex
Rank: E
Zero leaps up and pivots himself before launching a vertical wave of concentrated chakra from his sabre. At its bare minimum, the wave stretches to half the user's height, travels three {3} yards before dissipating, and is only capable of cutting into Earth. However, depending on the amount chakra focused into the weapon, the wave's size, distance, and strength can all be modified. The user simply feeds additional chakra to their blade, effectively increasing the technique's rank by one {1} in proper order ( D/C/B/A/S ). For each additional rank of chakra spent, the wave stretches two {2} feet taller, travels two {2} yards more, and possesses cutting power equivalent to that rank. ( If the user cannot learn techniques of a certain rank because of their level, they cannot increase Genmu Zero's power to that level either. For example, genin cannot make this an A rank technique, as they cannot learn A rank techniques. )
• Zero must train for two {2} posts per rank before being able to increase this technique's power to that rank. ( In order to use D rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, in order to use C rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, and etc. )
Character: Zero
Technique Name: Rekkouha (Rending Light Supremacy)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Zero slaps his hand to the ground causing a salvo of rainbow-colored lightning pillars to dance around him. Although it only forms a perimeter of roughly two feet, used at proper distance, this can be both a powerful offense and defense
Technique Name: Demonic arts: Heaven viewing technique
Rank:C
Type: Genjutsu: Seduction
Description: A perversion on the origional hell viewing technique this attacks a target in a different manner. The target is subjected to their wildest erotic fantasies as they seem to live them out. This can have several implications in combat and has a number of other uses. (Will keep it within the guild rules on actually using this...)
Duration: 3 rounds
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
The Kaiser Fist
• Heavy Punch
• Stimulating Armor
• Kaiser Crown
• Crumbling Overhead
• Sudden Straight
• Elbow Bolt
• Guillotine Drop
• Iron Backhand
• Meaty Punch
• Breaking Lariat
• Golem Missile
• Invigorating Armor
• Liger Bomb
• Kaiser Fist
• Bulky Punch
• Bolstering Armor
• Kaiser Cannon
• Kaiser Armor
Sazanami
• Footing one
• Parry
• Footing Two: Horse Stance
• Bell Ring
• Sweeping Strike
• Half-Step
• Spin Step
• Attack Redirection: Upper Body
• Attack Redirection: Lower Body
• Hummingbird’s Flight
• Cross Split
• Third Footing (Back Stance)
• Flat Step
• Sword Drawing Skill
• Fourth Footing (Cat Stance)
• River Flow
• Hawk Dive
• Palm of Heaven
• Rising Star
• Falling Star
• Ripples on the Water
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Shunkan no Hagane}
Stage one:
•Basic Chop
•Forward Step
•Backward Step
•Basic Block
~~~Training link for all of stage one.~~~
Stage Two:
•Pivot Block
•Forward grind
•Deflection one
•Disarming one
Stage Three
•Calligraphy
•Extension
vThread walking one
•Solid Footing
Stage Four
•Swordslinger
•Illusory double
•sensory information
•Twin blade
•Brush Stroke
•Hydra strike
•Disarming two
•Deflection two
•Advance of steel
Stage Five
•Shearing
•Thread Walking Two
•Crescent Block
•Defense of Steel
•Sword Drawing Technique
• Final Words
• Vorpal Blade
• Movement of Steel
• Offense of Steel
• Instant of Steel
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{Flash of Flesh and Steel}
• Stage one
•Shikyuu Koushin [ Pressing Lips ]
•Iori Seppun [ Retreating Kiss ]
•Seppun no Hoppeta [ Kiss on the Cheek ]
Stage two
•Kowakuteki Nameru [ Alluring Lick ]
•Ueito Seppun [ Waiting Kiss ]
•Shita Seppun [ Tongue Kiss ]
Stage three
•Furue Koushin [ Trembling Lips ]
•Fuki Seppun [ Accidental Kiss ]
•Kisumaku [ Hickey ]
•Boushi Shita [ Spinning Tongue ]
Stage four
•Shitsuren no Seppun [ Broken Heart's Kiss ]
•Kyuu Seppun [ Sudden Kiss ]
•Iki-jisan Seppun [ Breath Taking Kiss ]
•Oritatami-shiki no Koushin [ Folding Lips ]
Stage four training posts
Stage 5
•Retsu Koushin [ Cold Lips ]
•Arai Seppun [ Rude Kiss ]
•Nushi no Shita [ Lover's Tongue ]
•Kuuso Seppun [ Futile Kiss ]
•Wakare no Seppun [ Farewell Kiss ]
{Tetsu no Ryu}
Stage one
•Iaido
•A decade of peace
•Ryūtsuisen [ Dragon Hammer Strike ]
Stage two
•Ryūtsuisen: Zan [ Dragon Hammer Strike: Tragedy ]
•Turning Swallow Cut
•Chakra Scabbard
•Twin Dragon Strike
•Twin Dragon Strike: Lightning
Stage three
•Form Manipulation
•Pressure Wave
•Drying Pole
Stage one two and three training link
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
The entity known only as zero has lived in suna for quite some time. He has become One of the kazekages most reliable shinobi in the fact it never questions orders and always completes missions. Zero has never told anyone his actual name though and that includes the kazekage. It has be the cause of various rumors circulating that he could be a missing nin from another village, wanted in the bingo book,. No one is really sure. Only that he now goes by zero.. .
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:51 pm
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((Pending clan approval. Also, bonus 45 chakra comes from Rokubi, which is approved by both Azeiel the Fallen and CanoodlingFlibbertyJibbit.))
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
-----F u l l • N a m e || Shadowseeker Húnyistír
-----N i c k n a m e || Shadow
-----A g e || 10
-----B i r t h d a t e || April 17
-----G e n d e r || Male
-----H e i g h t || 51 in (4’3”)/129.5 cm
-----W e i g h t || 55 lbs/24.9 kg
-----N i n d o || At this point, Shadow has not found his purpose.
▬▬┤|P e r s o n a l i t y
Creator and Loner
As a member of the Ukyo who focus on the arts to bring them to life, Shadow has the qualities as a person and an artist to match. With a perfect memory of things he sees and a wild imagination, anything from recreating past events to creating something completely from scratch is easy for him. With this quality, he is also highly observant without even realizing it. Though most see him as cold and aloof, those that get to know him can have a glance at the enthusiastic child within, and he takes pride in letting people see his creations.
Shadow’s greatest downfall is his distance from reality, and he will go out of his way to detach himself from others. He is quite happy in his own imagined world and will often daydream, easily being absorbed in his ideas. Likewise, he is not very sensitive to others. In fact, he is oblivious to them more often than not, and is passive in the face of tragedy. This gives people the impression that he has no ambition or care for anything. He does not want to be with others and lacks the social skills required to be with them.
This does not mean he is a hopeless case. He just requires someone willing to take the time to get to know him and earn his trust.
Mute
Shadow’s mutism makes it no easier to get close to him. It is not entirely clear why he stopped talking, but it started well before his family died. Those that knew him assumed it has something to do with his inability to sleep. His mustism has nothing to do with being shy. In fact, he is very confident, almost too confident, and is perfectly able to understand and speak. He is just unwilling to speak to any but a few specific people.
This trait may eventually disappear, but it will take time and patience.
Insomniac
Just as insomnia is defined, Shadow has always had an inability to sleep uninterrupted. Sometimes he simply cannot sleep. Because of this, he is rarely ever fully rested and always tired, shown by the seemingly permanent dark circles around his eyes that look like bruising. He also has fairly poor health as compared with others his age, and he is small for his age as well. It is uncertain what exactly is causing the insomnia, whether it is fear, stress, or anxiety.
It also leads to him napping several times during the day if there is time to try to make up for the lost sleep.
After every sleep post, a 4-sided die is rolled to determine how much sleep he got:
• 1 – 100% chakra/stamina restored (meaning 100% of the 25% restored)
• 2 – 50% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 50% of the 25% restored)
• 3 – 25% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 25% of the 25% restored)
• 4 – 0% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 0% of the 25% restored)
-----V i l l a g e || Kirigakure
-----R a n k || Genin
-----F i r s t • C l a s s || Ninjutsu
-----S e c o n d • C l a s s || Puppeteer
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
-----C l a n || Ukyo
-----C h a k r a • P o o l || 495
-----S t a m i n a • P o o l || 050
-----C h a k r a • E l e m e n t s || Doton + Katon
-----C h a k r a • C o l o r || Gold
-----C h a k r a • M a t e r i a l i z a t i o n || A wisp of an aura around him flickering like tongues of golden flames, but it feels to have a much larger presence than it appears.
▬▬┤|S t r e n g t h s
----------• Perfect memory and perfect recreation in drawing
----------• Curse gives him enhanced hearing
----------• Proficient in Ninjutsu and with a bow
▬▬┤|W e a k n e s s e s
----------• Insomniac
----------• Inability to communicate well with others
----------• Physically inept with Taijutsu
▬▬┤|F e a r s
----------• Primal fear of death
----------• The unknown
----------• The thought of losing those close to him again
▬▬┤|C l a s s • D i s c i p l i n e s
----------• Ninjutsu :: Elemental Dual Wielder
----------• Puppeteer :: Army of One
▬▬┤|R e d u c t i o n s
----------• No reductions.
▬▬┤|P e r s o n a l • A t t r i b u t e s
----------• Perception :: Thanks to his curse, he has moderately enhanced senses, hearing and smell especially. He is also very good at tracking.
----------• The Cursed’s Call :: Thanks to exposure to and focus on Fuuinjutsu, he can learn Fuuinjutsu techniques two (2) posts faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
-----R y o || 両0
-----A C || 0
▬▬┤|M i s s i o n s • C o m p l e t e
----------• D Rank :: 00
----------• C Rank :: 00
----------• B Rank :: 00
----------• A Rank :: 00
----------• S Rank :: 00
▬▬┤|L i m i t a t i o n s
----------• Kugutsu :: 00 / 07
----------• Ninjutsu :: 00 / 14
----------------- Fuuinjutsu :: 00
----------------- Doton :: 00 / 06
----------------- Katon :: 00 / 06
----------------- Maruton 06
----------• Genjutsu :: 00 / 03
----------• Clan Techniques :: 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
-----W e a p o n • T y p e || Composite Bow
-----W e a p o n • R a n g e || 15-25 yards/45-75 feet
-----W e a p o n • S i z e || 48in (46in strung), 22in draw at 24lbs
-----W e a p o n • W e i g h t || 1.5lbs
-----W e a p o n • L o c a t i o n || Slung across back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
▬▬┤|B a t t l e • R e l a t e d
----------• Ukiyo Mizo
----------• Composite Bow
----------• 15 Stone Arrows (handmade)
----------• 15 senbon
----------• 10 shuriken
----------• 5 kunai
▬▬┤|O t h e r • I t e m s
----------• Sketchbook
----------• Several pencils and pens
▬▬┤|P u p p e t s
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
-----M a r u t o n ||
----------• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
----------• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
----------• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
----------• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
----------• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
----------• Kai [ Release ]
-----K a t o n ||
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-----D o t o n ||
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▬▬┤|C l a n • T e c h n i q u e s
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|F u u i n j u t s u
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Shadow's birth has always been unknown to him, even to his adoptive parents, and no one has bothered to tell him about it--not that he has had that much interest. He knows he was born on April 17 somewhere in Mizu no Kuni, and when he was old enough to understand, he was told the village he was from was destroyed by the Rokubi, the six-tailed demon. His birth mother brought him to another family, a family of farmers who grew and caught their own food, to keep him safe. He does not know what happened to his birth parents, but they left with him an Ukiyo Mizo, the short blade of the Ukyo Clan.
The boy started drawing almost as soon as he could hold a pencil, and while the drawings were crude, they were amazingly accurate in details a boy of three should not have noticed, let alone remembered. He became focused on his drawings, obsessed with them, and he stopped paying attention to reality. He drew scenes from books he read or news he heard, drew horrific and beautiful creatures alike. By the time he was five, not an inch of wall space could be seen in his room, and his art had improved to look as though someone twice his had drawn it.
Thanks to his overactive imagination and the nightmares that haunted his dreams, he has never been able to sleep well, and it has always been obvious through his health.
On top of the insomnia, his parents never realized he was mute until they took him into the city to meet relatives of theirs. He would not say a word to them. In fact, it seemed more like he ignored their presence. Even children of his age he would not speak to, and he was ridiculed for it by child and adult alike.
Needless to say, Shadow did not go to the city with them again.
Nothing spectacular happened for the next couple of years. Since his family grew and caught their own food, Shadow was taught how to use a bow, something that distracted him from his drawings for a while. The utter calm he was known for helped him learn to hit in or near the center of a target seven times out of ten, and practice on moving animals improved this further.
His peaceful life turned upside down when he was eight.
Shadow "A man came to our house looking for a place to stay for the night. Mother and Father agreed to let him stay when he paid them, but something felt strange about him. There was something dark... frightening. I knew he was watching me.
"But nothing happened, not that evening, or that night, or even when he left the next morning.
"It wasn't until a month later, when he showed up again, that everything changed. He wasn't there to stay the night. He shoved Father out of the way, and Mother, too, when she got in the way. He was after me, I knew that.
"Everything that happened after is a blur. He grabbed me, screaming, "Give it to me, or else". All I could do was cry. I didn't understand,
"Then I watched him stab Mother. I saw her fall to the floor, her eyes wide and staring at me, but I knew she was dead. Father came at the man with an axe, but the man moved faster than I thought was possible, and suddenly Father was dead, too.
"The man grabbed me again, but seeing my tears only made him angrier. He used something, a scroll, I think, and there was a flash of light and suddenly the world seemed overwhelming to my senses. I heard him say that no one would listen to me now. I don't remember anything after."
When Shadow next woke, hoping it was a dream, he found his parents just as he had seen them before. Afraid that the man would still be there, he ran. He knew the road led to other people, where he might find help. However, the moment people saw him, he was chased away, being called a demon. Confused, afraid, and alone, he was forced to wander just outside of the village.
Later he realized why they were afraid of him. He had a long, thin tail, like a cat, and ears like one too.
The next couple of months were the hardest time of his life. Shadow knew how to hunt, but had no supplies for much of anything else, and he was too afraid to go home. Frequently, he was forced back into the village to acquire things he needed, and every time he was chased away again. He was beaten several times, but he always managed to get away.
One particular time was especially bad, and he may have been killed if someone hadn't stepped in. The boy hadn't really said anything, but looked at them, said some gibberish, and they ran off. The boy helped Shadow back to his feet and led him back to his house, which was apparently outside the village.
Jack Harren Snipe quickly became the only one Shadow knew he could trust, and was the first one outside his family the young boy would speak to, though that took time as well. About a year or so later, Jack suggested that Shadow join the academy in Kirigakure, telling him he had potential and that it would prove to others his 'curse' was a boon, not a weakness.
Now, age ten, Shadow has just graduated as a genin.
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2013 11:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2013 8:50 am
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