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Character: Sebastian Uchiha
Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Blade of the Demon Sage.
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Height: Overall Length: 37 1/2 in.
Handle: 10 1/4 in.
Blade: 27 1/4 in.
Hand guard: Width: 2 3/4 in. Length: 3 3/4 in.
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Description: Long ago lived a man, his name was the Sage of Six paths but this story is not about him. It is about one of his disciples, a bright and strong young man. He followed the sage everywhere he went and they soon gained more disciples. They learned much of the ways of chakra from his teachings. The young man was a model disciple he learned quickly and gained much power. But that wasn't enough for him he wanted to show the Sage that they could become even more powerful. So he began experimenting on live subjects dipping into the dark arts. All in the name of his teacher the Sage. Eventually the Sage caught wind of his experiments and stopped him. He was about to execute him for his crimes against humanity but he decided to simply exile him. The disciple ran he ran so far he just ran he ran all night and day. When he stopped though he was tired he was seething. How could the sage exile him? He just wanted to show how much power they could truly attain! He began to hate the sage of six paths, that rage consumed him and he continued his experiments in a much more secretive manner. After much time his power grew he even began to fiddle with immortality. He knew a bit about seals from what the Sage taught him, he theorized that if he could break his soul and seal a piece of it away into the sword he could manifest himself and live eternally as long as the sword existed. But before he could finish his seals he was attacked by the remaining disciple of the Sage. They had heard about strange going on in the area and came to investigate because it sound like what happened so long ago. They were disgusted at the sight of their former sibling disciple. It was a long battle but eventually he fell under the power of the combined disciples. But right before he died his soul was sucked away into the sword. All his hate, all his rage and his evil went into the sword his very being was sealed away into it. The sword continued to exist as the evil man wanted but he could never manifest himself like he wished. The only thing he could do was channel his power through those that wielded the sword. If they were weak willed he could influence them to do things. The blade now passes through history its real power hidden by the fact that men would be blamed for the atrocities it would influence them to do.
The sword grants the ability to use sage mode through the sword though normal training is still needed to master it. The scabbard acts as the medium for the user and natural chakra, eliminating the need for him to be standing still. Either way, natural Chakra absorption is limited to an A-ranked amount per each post of activeness, & only usable for Senjutsu. Sennin may carry a Senjutsu Beating Stick & Senjutsu Oil. Chakra physically absorbed from a Sennin will cause the absorber to petrify at the end of their next post after absorbing. One may not have a Curse Seal at all, One may not have a Bijuu at all.
In terms of training, Sennin Moodo training lasts for 10 posts, minimum 5 sentences each for those without a summoning.
In terms of bodily enhancements, the user's eyes turn black with yellow irises & a more toned body. The sword covers the body in a armor which make a second skin of sorts. It's as strong as steel and a good defense against physical attacks & always include a large boost to strength, agility, dexterity, or otherwise appropriate to the specific summon.
Chakra limit for absorption is 1/3 of the main body's active chakra limit. This can be temporarily adjusted by the use of clones, which can perform the senjutsu chakra gathering. Going over the 1/3 limit at any time other than that will start the petrifaction process, irregardless of any future self-balancings. (see 'Senjutsu Oil')
Ability Summary:
O n i S a g e A r t S t a g e s:
___Dormant Stage [0]
The passive stage: Access to Senjutsu Chakra & Sage Arts are restricted, as no flow of natural chakra is being interacted with. Consequently, all leftover natural chakra is released & is not usable.
_Basic Effects:
• Passive Stamina increase: +100 Stamina ( Per ninja rank. )
___Awoken Stage [1]
This is the first stage usage of the Sage Arts. This and all stages beyond it are activated / sustained stages. In addition to making use of the state's abilities, the host will also gain a wide array of bodily characteristics, such as eye modifications and skin modifications. Physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, are unusable. Taijutsu, Bukijutsu become more powerful, overpowering other same ranked jutsus but they still retain inferior status to higher ranked jutsus. The user gains the ability to sense chakra around them now, essentially gaining the Sensor Class's abilities while in the Awoken Stage. (Those of the Sensor Class become highly tuned) Because the body's state of Chakra flow is now more freely flowing throughout the host, it will generate one A-ranked amount of chakra per non-moving post. Ending this stage after 5 posts of continual usage entails a penalty of expending all but 100 chakra from the body.
• -Counts as Sage Mode
• -Cannot obtain an animal summon under any circumstance, and animal summons are wary of the evil chakra surrounding the blade and the user.
• -Cannot obtain a Curse Mark
• -Cannot obtain a Bijuu
• + Once astered the sword actively absorbs Natural chakra at an 50 rank per post but the user then consciously stops the absorption once the 1/3 limit is reached. Any extra senjutsu chakra absorbed is instantly dispersed out through the sword.
•armor: requires 80 natural chakra to be in your natural chakra pool to be active.
-armor stops C rank complex buki techniques and ninjutsu
-armor stops B rank physical buki and complex taijutsu
-armor stops A rank physical taijutsu
-armor can be defeated via armor piercing technqiues
-Once a piece of the armor is broken the rest shatters and falls off and does not reform until the next time the user enter sage mode.
•Takes up a custom weapon slot AND a custom Jutsu slot total of 3 custom slots.
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Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 7:53 pm
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Grand Chevalier Haji
Character: Sebastian Uchiha
Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Blade of the Demon Sage.
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Height: Overall Length: 37 1/2 in.
Handle: 10 1/4 in.
Blade: 27 1/4 in.
Hand guard: Width: 2 3/4 in. Length: 3 3/4 in.
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Description: Long ago lived a man, his name was the Sage of Six paths but this story is not about him. It is about one of his disciples, a bright and strong young man. He followed the sage everywhere he went and they soon gained more disciples. They learned much of the ways of chakra from his teachings. The young man was a model disciple he learned quickly and gained much power. But that wasn't enough for him he wanted to show the Sage that they could become even more powerful. So he began experimenting on live subjects dipping into the dark arts. All in the name of his teacher the Sage. Eventually the Sage caught wind of his experiments and stopped him. He was about to execute him for his crimes against humanity but he decided to simply exile him. The disciple ran he ran so far he just ran he ran all night and day. When he stopped though he was tired he was seething. How could the sage exile him? He just wanted to show how much power they could truly attain! He began to hate the sage of six paths, that rage consumed him and he continued his experiments in a much more secretive manner. After much time his power grew he even began to fiddle with immortality. He knew a bit about seals from what the Sage taught him, he theorized that if he could break his soul and seal a piece of it away into the sword he could manifest himself and live eternally as long as the sword existed. But before he could finish his seals he was attacked by the remaining disciple of the Sage. They had heard about strange going on in the area and came to investigate because it sound like what happened so long ago. They were disgusted at the sight of their former sibling disciple. It was a long battle but eventually he fell under the power of the combined disciples. But right before he died his soul was sucked away into the sword. All his hate, all his rage and his evil went into the sword his very being was sealed away into it. The sword continued to exist as the evil man wanted but he could never manifest himself like he wished. The only thing he could do was channel his power through those that wielded the sword. If they were weak willed he could influence them to do things. The blade now passes through history its real power hidden by the fact that men would be blamed for the atrocities it would influence them to do.
The sword grants the ability to use sage mode through the sword though normal training is still needed to master it. The scabbard acts as the medium for the user and absorbs natural chakra, eliminating the need for him to have a summoning partner. Either way, natural Chakra absorption is limited to an A-ranked amount per each post of activeness, & only usable for Senjutsu. Sennin may carry a Senjutsu Beating Stick & Senjutsu Oil. Chakra physically absorbed from a Sennin will cause the absorber to petrify at the end of their next post after absorbing. One may not have a Curse Seal at all, One may not have a Bijuu at all.
In terms of training, Sennin Moodo training lasts for 10 posts, minimum 5 sentences each for those without a summoning.
In terms of bodily enhancements, the user's eyes turn black with yellow irises & a more toned body. The sword covers the body in a armor which make a second skin of sorts. It's as strong as steel and a good defense against physical attacks & always include a large boost to strength, agility, dexterity, or otherwise appropriate to the specific summon.
Chakra limit for absorption is 1/3 of the main body's active chakra limit. This can be temporarily adjusted by the use of clones, which can perform the senjutsu chakra gathering. Going over the 1/3 limit at any time other than that will start the petrifaction process, irregardless of any future self-balancings. (see 'Senjutsu Oil')
Ability Summary:
O n i S a g e A r t S t a g e s:
___Dormant Stage [0]
The passive stage: Access to Senjutsu Chakra & Sage Arts are restricted, as no flow of natural chakra is being interacted with. Consequently, all leftover natural chakra is released & is not usable.
_Basic Effects:
• Passive Stamina increase: +100 Stamina ( Per ninja rank. )
___Awoken Stage [1]
This is the first stage usage of the Sage Arts. This and all stages beyond it are activated / sustained stages. In addition to making use of the state's abilities, the host will also gain a wide array of bodily characteristics, such as eye modifications and skin modifications. Physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, are unusable. Taijutsu, Bukijutsu become more powerful, overpowering other same ranked jutsus but they still retain inferior status to higher ranked jutsus. The user gains the ability to sense chakra around them now, essentially gaining the Sensor Class's abilities while in the Awoken Stage. (Those of the Sensor Class become highly tuned) Because the body's state of Chakra flow is now more freely flowing throughout the host, it will generate one A-ranked amount of chakra per non-moving post. Ending this stage after 5 posts of continual usage entails a penalty of expending all but 100 chakra from the body.
• -Counts as Sage Mode
• -Cannot obtain an animal summon under any circumstance, and animal summons are wary of the evil chakra surrounding the blade and the user.
• -Cannot obtain a Curse Mark
• -Cannot obtain a Bijuu
• + Once mastered the sword actively absorbs Natural chakra at an 50 rank per post but the user then consciously stops the absorption once the 1/3 limit is reached. Any extra senjutsu chakra absorbed is instantly dispersed out through the sword.
•armor: requires 80 natural chakra to be in your natural chakra pool to be active.
-armor stops C rank complex buki techniques and ninjutsu
-armor stops B rank physical buki and complex taijutsu
-armor stops A rank physical taijutsu
-armor can be defeated via armor piercing technqiues
-Once a piece of the armor is broken the rest shatters and falls off and does not reform until the next time the user enter sage mode.
•Takes up a custom weapon slot AND a custom Jutsu slot total of 3 custom slots.
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Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 9:54 pm
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Yo-ko Grand Chevalier Haji
Character: Sebastian Uchiha
Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Blade of the Demon Sage.
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Height: Overall Length: 37 1/2 in.
Handle: 10 1/4 in.
Blade: 27 1/4 in.
Hand guard: Width: 2 3/4 in. Length: 3 3/4 in.
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Description: Long ago lived a man, his name was the Sage of Six paths but this story is not about him. It is about one of his disciples, a bright and strong young man. He followed the sage everywhere he went and they soon gained more disciples. They learned much of the ways of chakra from his teachings. The young man was a model disciple he learned quickly and gained much power. But that wasn't enough for him he wanted to show the Sage that they could become even more powerful. So he began experimenting on live subjects dipping into the dark arts. All in the name of his teacher the Sage. Eventually the Sage caught wind of his experiments and stopped him. He was about to execute him for his crimes against humanity but he decided to simply exile him. The disciple ran he ran so far he just ran he ran all night and day. When he stopped though he was tired he was seething. How could the sage exile him? He just wanted to show how much power they could truly attain! He began to hate the sage of six paths, that rage consumed him and he continued his experiments in a much more secretive manner. After much time his power grew he even began to fiddle with immortality. He knew a bit about seals from what the Sage taught him, he theorized that if he could break his soul and seal a piece of it away into the sword he could manifest himself and live eternally as long as the sword existed. But before he could finish his seals he was attacked by the remaining disciple of the Sage. They had heard about strange going on in the area and came to investigate because it sound like what happened so long ago. They were disgusted at the sight of their former sibling disciple. It was a long battle but eventually he fell under the power of the combined disciples. But right before he died his soul was sucked away into the sword. All his hate, all his rage and his evil went into the sword his very being was sealed away into it. The sword continued to exist as the evil man wanted but he could never manifest himself like he wished. The only thing he could do was channel his power through those that wielded the sword. If they were weak willed he could influence them to do things. The blade now passes through history its real power hidden by the fact that men would be blamed for the atrocities it would influence them to do.
The sword grants the ability to use sage mode through the sword though normal training is still needed to master it. The scabbard acts as the medium for the user and absorbs natural chakra, eliminating the need for him to have a summoning partner. Either way, natural Chakra absorption is limited to an A-ranked amount per each post of activeness, & only usable for Senjutsu. Sennin may carry a Senjutsu Beating Stick & Senjutsu Oil. Chakra physically absorbed from a Sennin will cause the absorber to petrify at the end of their next post after absorbing. One may not have a Curse Seal at all, One may not have a Bijuu at all.
In terms of training, Sennin Moodo training lasts for 10 posts, minimum 5 sentences each for those without a summoning.
In terms of bodily enhancements, the user's eyes turn black with yellow irises & a more toned body. The sword covers the body in a armor which make a second skin of sorts. It's as strong as steel and a good defense against physical attacks & always include a large boost to strength, agility, dexterity, or otherwise appropriate to the specific summon.
Chakra limit for absorption is 1/3 of the main body's active chakra limit. This can be temporarily adjusted by the use of clones, which can perform the senjutsu chakra gathering. Going over the 1/3 limit at any time other than that will start the petrifaction process, irregardless of any future self-balancings. (see 'Senjutsu Oil')
Ability Summary:
O n i S a g e A r t S t a g e s:
___Dormant Stage [0]
The passive stage: Access to Senjutsu Chakra & Sage Arts are restricted, as no flow of natural chakra is being interacted with. Consequently, all leftover natural chakra is released & is not usable.
_Basic Effects:
• Passive Stamina increase: +100 Stamina ( Per ninja rank. )
___Awoken Stage [1]
This is the first stage usage of the Sage Arts. This and all stages beyond it are activated / sustained stages. In addition to making use of the state's abilities, the host will also gain a wide array of bodily characteristics, such as eye modifications and skin modifications. Physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, are unusable. Taijutsu, Bukijutsu become more powerful, overpowering other same ranked jutsus but they still retain inferior status to higher ranked jutsus. The user gains the ability to sense chakra around them now, essentially gaining the Sensor Class's abilities while in the Awoken Stage. (Those of the Sensor Class become highly tuned) Because the body's state of Chakra flow is now more freely flowing throughout the host, it will generate one A-ranked amount of chakra per non-moving post. Ending this stage after 5 posts of continual usage entails a penalty of expending all but 100 chakra from the body.
• -Counts as Sage Mode
• -Cannot obtain an animal summon under any circumstance, and animal summons are wary of the evil chakra surrounding the blade and the user.
• -Cannot obtain a Curse Mark
• -Cannot obtain a Bijuu
• + Once mastered the sword actively absorbs Natural chakra at an 50 rank per post but the user then consciously stops the absorption once the 1/3 limit is reached. Any extra senjutsu chakra absorbed is instantly dispersed out through the sword.
•armor: requires 80 natural chakra to be in your natural chakra pool to be active.
-armor stops C rank complex buki techniques and ninjutsu
-armor stops B rank physical buki and complex taijutsu
-armor stops A rank physical taijutsu
-armor can be defeated via armor piercing technqiues
-Once a piece of the armor is broken the rest shatters and falls off and does not reform until the next time the user enter sage mode.
•Takes up a custom weapon slot AND a custom Jutsu slot total of 3 custom slots.
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 4:15 am
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Grand Chevalier Haji Yo-ko Grand Chevalier Haji
Character: Sebastian Uchiha
Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Blade of the Demon Sage.
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Height: Overall Length: 37 1/2 in.
Handle: 10 1/4 in.
Blade: 27 1/4 in.
Hand guard: Width: 2 3/4 in. Length: 3 3/4 in.
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Description: Long ago lived a man, his name was the Sage of Six paths but this story is not about him. It is about one of his disciples, a bright and strong young man. He followed the sage everywhere he went and they soon gained more disciples. They learned much of the ways of chakra from his teachings. The young man was a model disciple he learned quickly and gained much power. But that wasn't enough for him he wanted to show the Sage that they could become even more powerful. So he began experimenting on live subjects dipping into the dark arts. All in the name of his teacher the Sage. Eventually the Sage caught wind of his experiments and stopped him. He was about to execute him for his crimes against humanity but he decided to simply exile him. The disciple ran he ran so far he just ran he ran all night and day. When he stopped though he was tired he was seething. How could the sage exile him? He just wanted to show how much power they could truly attain! He began to hate the sage of six paths, that rage consumed him and he continued his experiments in a much more secretive manner. After much time his power grew he even began to fiddle with immortality. He knew a bit about seals from what the Sage taught him, he theorized that if he could break his soul and seal a piece of it away into the sword he could manifest himself and live eternally as long as the sword existed. But before he could finish his seals he was attacked by the remaining disciple of the Sage. They had heard about strange going on in the area and came to investigate because it sound like what happened so long ago. They were disgusted at the sight of their former sibling disciple. It was a long battle but eventually he fell under the power of the combined disciples. But right before he died his soul was sucked away into the sword. All his hate, all his rage and his evil went into the sword his very being was sealed away into it. The sword continued to exist as the evil man wanted but he could never manifest himself like he wished. The only thing he could do was channel his power through those that wielded the sword. If they were weak willed he could influence them to do things. The blade now passes through history its real power hidden by the fact that men would be blamed for the atrocities it would influence them to do.
The sword grants the ability to use sage mode through the sword though normal training is still needed to master it. The scabbard acts as the medium for the user and absorbs natural chakra, eliminating the need for him to have a summoning partner. Either way, natural Chakra absorption is limited to an A-ranked amount per each post of activeness, & only usable for Senjutsu. Sennin may carry a Senjutsu Beating Stick & Senjutsu Oil. Chakra physically absorbed from a Sennin will cause the absorber to petrify at the end of their next post after absorbing. One may not have a Curse Seal at all, One may not have a Bijuu at all.
In terms of training, Sennin Moodo training lasts for 10 posts, minimum 5 sentences each for those without a summoning.
In terms of bodily enhancements, the user's eyes turn black with yellow irises & a more toned body. The sword covers the body in a armor which make a second skin of sorts. It's as strong as steel and a good defense against physical attacks & always include a large boost to strength, agility, dexterity, or otherwise appropriate to the specific summon.
Chakra limit for absorption is 1/3 of the main body's active chakra limit. This can be temporarily adjusted by the use of clones, which can perform the senjutsu chakra gathering. Going over the 1/3 limit at any time other than that will start the petrifaction process, irregardless of any future self-balancings. (see 'Senjutsu Oil')
Ability Summary:
O n i S a g e A r t S t a g e s:
___Dormant Stage [0]
The passive stage: Access to Senjutsu Chakra & Sage Arts are restricted, as no flow of natural chakra is being interacted with. Consequently, all leftover natural chakra is released & is not usable.
_Basic Effects:
• Passive Stamina increase: +100 Stamina ( Per ninja rank. )
___Awoken Stage [1]
This is the first stage usage of the Sage Arts. This and all stages beyond it are activated / sustained stages. In addition to making use of the state's abilities, the host will also gain a wide array of bodily characteristics, such as eye modifications and skin modifications. Physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, are unusable. Taijutsu, Bukijutsu become more powerful, overpowering other same ranked jutsus but they still retain inferior status to higher ranked jutsus. The user gains the ability to sense chakra around them now, essentially gaining the Sensor Class's abilities while in the Awoken Stage. (Those of the Sensor Class become highly tuned) Because the body's state of Chakra flow is now more freely flowing throughout the host, it will generate one A-ranked amount of chakra per non-moving post. Ending this stage after 5 posts of continual usage entails a penalty of expending all but 100 chakra from the body.
• -Counts as Sage Mode
• -Cannot obtain an animal summon under any circumstance, and animal summons are wary of the evil chakra surrounding the blade and the user.
• -Cannot obtain a Curse Mark
• -Cannot obtain a Bijuu
• + Once mastered the sword actively absorbs Natural chakra at an 50 rank per post but the user then consciously stops the absorption once the 1/3 limit is reached. Any extra senjutsu chakra absorbed is instantly dispersed out through the sword.
•armor: requires 80 natural chakra to be in your natural chakra pool to be active.
-armor stops C rank complex buki techniques and ninjutsu
-armor stops B rank physical buki and complex taijutsu
-armor stops A rank physical taijutsu
-armor can be defeated via armor piercing technqiues
-Once a piece of the armor is broken the rest shatters and falls off and does not reform until the next time the user enter sage mode.
•Takes up a custom weapon slot AND a custom Jutsu slot total of 3 custom slots.
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2013 8:20 pm
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Character: Ceres
Link to profile: Waiting for app
Weapon Name: Bloody Night
Weapon Type: Katar
Weapon Height: 12 inch blade, 5 inch base.
Weapon Weight: 2 lbs
Description: This Katar was crafted and used by a Assassin whom secretly worked for the majority of the kages killing people through out the world for them. The Katar was created so that there would not be a mess in the assassinations and when in the hands of a professional only needed one strike in the right place. ( That can be said about any weapon ) Ceres had one day ran into this assassin as she was stealing things in the market place, seeing what she was doing the Assassin took her under his wing. He taught her how to be stealthy, kill without a second thought and of course steal. The assassin was quite old by now and decided to retire since he had trained a apprentice and left the weapon to her.
The Katar is quite simple yet complex at the same time. The 'base' of the katar is basically a leather harness that goes around the forearm, wrist and majority of the hand. In the palm of the hand is a handle (Very thin.. enough room to hold something else in the hand as well) that connects to the harness on both sides, this handle has a small button (corner of the handle to objects in the hand do not push it) on it. The top part of the hand (not the finger) and the knuckles have a metal cover with a soft leather underside. The blade of the Katar in its resting position it is on the arm allowing complete use of the hand without having the blade restrict its movements. When the button is pressed the blade launched forward and locks into position (Refer to pic), when the button is pressed agian the blade goes to its resting position.
Ability Summary:
• This Katar has a interesting ability, similar to that of the Chakra Scapel.
When the blade of a katar touches blood the blade becomes intangible, phasing through what it hit for 1 second. (Enough time to go through a arm for example) This is where the effect of the chakra Scalpel comes into effect, when the blade phases through a person it is capable of tearing through muscles and arteries, or breaking bone, without having to actually cut through the arm. Cuts that drew a little bit of blood would normally be seen on the victom of this weapon, the cause of death being internal bleeding.
(Not sure on chakra costs.. >.< or how that would work with this.. chakra scapel is B rank but it lasts until you no longer need it... this only happens on this weapon for 1 second at a time.. so letyou guys figure it out ) |
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 2:16 am
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Character: Jae Ketsueki
Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Bug Worm
Weapon Type: Dual use, modernized and modified Kusarigama
Weapon Height:
• Short Sword : 14 Inches
• Chain : Length 8-10 ft. xxx xxx
Weapon Weight: 4lbs
Description:
There is no significant history on this weapon, it is a design that Jae herself came up with while watching people use scythes as weapons. They were too heavy for her use and they were poor in defense so she began to toy around with a few ideas in order to find a weapon that served her purpose properly. Her Bug Worm resembles a typical feudal Kusari Gama. Instead of a scythe at one end and a bludgeon on the other, a short sword is attached to the bludgeon on one end that can retract when she presses a button. It makes it easier for her to keep her weapon on her person and easier for her to utilize her chain in just defensive purposes when needed. When she needs to draw it she releases the button and it slides out. On the opposite side of the chain Jae has left it as an open chain link. When Jae decides she wants to use that end she has specifically crafted it so that she can mold her bloodline sword, Red Steel, to the end. It gives her two weapons to use and the chain that connects them together gives her ample opportunity to put together many combination attacks.
Ability Summary:
• Red Steel Attachment : Rank A to form weapon + 5 additional chakra to keep it crystalized to the weapon : Offensive/Defensive : Bloodline
Description : In situations where Jae feels it is necessary to use two weapons to her advantage she will form her Saiketsu sword and then attach it to the open link in her chain. This allows her to still use her chain for minor deflecting purposes, tying up her opponents and disarming them as well as attacking them with her short sword and Red Steel. Mainly it is used in order to keep her blades from being knocked out of her hands.
• Winding Whirl : Rank B : Defensive : Fuuton
Description: When Jae is under attack by simple projectiles or elemental projectiles, she can activate her Fuuton energies to quickly allow her to spin her chain around her body in a tight and protective barrier. The chain can deflect basic projectiles while supported by the Fuuton to brush them away.
• Harden : Rank C : Defensive : Bloodline : Continuous
Description : Jae has been recently in the presence of very interesting company with stronger than hell weapons. The chain attached to the bug worm is very thin in order to be light weight and compact. Jae uses an extremely thin layer of crystalized blood to harden her chain when she deflects. It prevents her chain from snapping against A ranked blades. [adding to the impression that custom weapons are already stronger than normal weapons]
• Bind : Rank B : Offensive/Defensive : Fuuton : Lasts 2 posts
Description : In order to efficiently take someone's weapon to disarm them or to wrap any part of her chain around any limb of her opponent, Jae will activate her Fuuton ability simultaneously to connecting with her opponent/weapon of target. The winds presses down, lining the chain and embedding it deeper into her intended target. This creates a sort of suction cup effect where it is extremely difficult to dislodge the chain. In fact, the more one pulls up the harder the wind presses down.
• Porcupine : Rank C : Offensive : Bloodline
Description : For those individuals who are nimble and able enough to grab onto her chain and Jae wishes to dislodge them from it and she has already used harden on her chain, Jae can alter the shape of the malleable crystalized blood that is of her bloodline. The small outer layer around the chain begins to alter. It's shape changes to hard to see spikes that are needle sharp. It can cut into flesh and cloth easily.
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 9:17 am
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After some time spent looking, it's been decided that your weapon needs to be toned down, a lot. Superficial gut rot (to which I'm assuming Eren as a oni isn't actually affected by) isn't a drawback of substantial value, considering that your only other drawback is that he's further affected by genjutsu, while we don't even know the duration of an ogre killer drunkeness.
That you're attempting to grab at a lot for the strength of taijutsu and other techniques, is something that is completely unbalanced. A rank + 2 is on par with forbidden techniques, for all intents and purposes, suddenly. All the while, you're attempting to boost everything not bloodline up a singular rank, which is already pushing the idea of the custom gear into such a broad spectrum. Stats boosted "greatly" is way too much for what you're trying to do, and a stamina replenisher?
It needs to be focused and toned down. |
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 11:09 am
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Mana_ecl Zetsuya After some time spent looking, it's been decided that your weapon needs to be toned down, a lot. Superficial gut rot (to which I'm assuming Eren as a oni isn't actually affected by) isn't a drawback of substantial value, considering that your only other drawback is that he's further affected by genjutsu, while we don't even know the duration of an ogre killer drunkeness.
That you're attempting to grab at a lot for the strength of taijutsu and other techniques, is something that is completely unbalanced. A rank + 2 is on par with forbidden techniques, for all intents and purposes, suddenly. All the while, you're attempting to boost everything not bloodline up a singular rank, which is already pushing the idea of the custom gear into such a broad spectrum. Stats boosted "greatly" is way too much for what you're trying to do, and a stamina replenisher?
It needs to be focused and toned down.
Well, uh, I actually decided against that weapon now. Here's a new one that should be easier to accept.
Character: Eren Oni
Link to profile: Link
Weapon Name: Sound Amplifying Gloves
Weapon Type: Metal Gloves
Weapon Height: Goes on the hand! However big the hand is I guess.
Weapon Weight: 6 lbs
Description: These gloves were originally made by Orin to give him an easier time when fighting against those with weapons. He decided to make it even better by adding in a small sound amplifier to the palms and the back of the gloves so he can use the Kyoumeisen Jutsu. This glove also comes with another trick or two.
Ability Summary:
• The glove might look like a normal leather glove but it's actually heavily reinforced with steel. Gives Eren a little bit of extra power when punching and gives him the ability to more easily deflect blade attacks, although the blunt force behind a strong attack would still hurt... a lot. Thanks to the way these gloves are build however Eren could easily break someone's hand if their fists collided.
• A sound amplifier hidden in the palms and the back of the gloves gives Eren the ability to use Kyoumeisen.
• Poison smoke screen! A mechanism in the glove allows Eren, by punching forward, to release a smoke screen of any kind (can be a normal smokescreen, a poison smoke screen, etc. etc.). Can only be used three times before it has to be reloaded. It can only be reloaded outside of battle.
• A similar mechanism to the one listed above can shoot up to five senbon at once. The gloves can hold up to twenty senbon each.
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:09 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 10:06 pm
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Posting for Reapproval emotion_dowant
Character: Wanryoku
Link to profile: 
Weapon Name: Zangai ("Wreckage")
Weapon Type: Wreckingball
Weapon Height: 3,000" long, 42" diameter
Weapon Weight: 2,000 lbs
Description: The wreckingball known as Zangai was once a living human who was the traveling companion, and brother, to Wanryoku. The man was not known for his intelligence, but his kind heart and blunt personality made him popular with pretty much everyone he met. However, on his final mission as a human during the equivalent of the Chuunin Exams in his lands with Wanryoku, the two came upon a glade where one legion fought against another, and one side was losing. This side was made up of children from six different squads, each having this be their first event, and their opponents were experienced warriors who had tried, and failed, many times to pass. Because of this, the younger warriors were being routed. Wanryoku hesitated for but a moment, but it was a moment far too long for Zangai. The large man charged into battle to defend the younger group, and was quickly aided by Wanryoku.
To say the least, the opposing forces were decimated.
However, in the end, Zangai died. In return for what had been done, one of the younger members, a shaman in her tribe, bound the brother's soul into a hunk of iron that oddly attracted other iron, other objects in the vicinity, forging itself into the iron ball it is now. This was bestowed unto Wanryoku as a thank you gift, and much to his surprise the ball possessed Zangai's mind, except now only his emotions, his feelings, came through to him whenever they were near, and never more would his brother speak. Because of his personality, abilities befitting his personality and jutsu specialty came with the weapon form that he now possessed. It was this that made Wanryoku take up the wreckingball as a weapon, and it has been his weapon for the last five years.
Ability Summary:
• Excessive Gain ~ This is a basic technique, one that requires small amounts of chakra to activate and yet which may well drain one of chakra from excessive use. For each [15] chakra points sacrificed, the weapon will increase (in diamater) 1.5x, (in weight) 2x, and (in length), 2.1x. This does not negate any issues with wielding the device, for one must be of the correct strength, size, and mass to wield such a device for this to take effect. Should the weapon leave the hand of its user, it will revert back to its original shape and more chakra must be used to increase its statistics again. Note, this can only increase the ball twice in size before the limit is reached.
• Excessive Growth → This ability is quite different than the previous power, for instead of increasing the size of the weapon it increases the size of the user. For each [20] points of chakra used, the user may increase their physical size up to 1.5x the original base. This also increases one's physical strength and vitality, but agility is arguably reduced due to the restriction of movement for something that size. If the weapon leaves the hand of Wanryoku, he will immediately be reduced to his original size, and all the damage that was inflicted upon him in his larger forms will be multiplied by a factor matching the number of times his physical body has increased. This particular ability lasts all of ten posts, counting only Wanryoku's posts.
**Note** → Should Wanryoku voluntarily return to his original size, no damage will be sustained. Note, this can only increase Wanryoku's size twice before the limit is reached.
• Empathy → Zangai has an intelligence, which is purely for role play purposes and will in no way effect battle unless the effects of feeling his brother's emotions affects how Wanryoku may act. This ability is permanently active, and cannot be silenced. The emotions can be felt by Wanryoku as long as he is within a fifty mile radius of the weapon.
• Recharge → This is a very situation-based ability. It will only work should Wanryoku discharge one of the above abilities, or rather, disengage the abilities, of his own free will. [10] Chakra Points will be returned to the chakra pool for each successive use of the above abilities.
**note**
All abilities take 6 posts to learn. |
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Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:14 pm
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Character: Jack Harren Snipe
Link to profile: [x]
Weapon Name: Henteko Shinnyo [Strange, Absolute Reality]
Weapon Type: Cane/Flute
Weapon Height: 3 feet + arm length
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Description: Henteko Shinnyo is a device of legend, lost in mystery and illusion for countless millenia. Many strange tales and stories talk of an old nation that once existed that was at the apex of illusion magic, especially the kinds that dealt in sounds and sights. They were feared by many as master of nightmare, of the twisting of reality in such a way that it forced those who came near their home to question reality.
This all ended one day when they, and their entire nation, vanished.
To this day all that stands where the nation was said to be is a deep, dark hole surrounded by haunted, misty woods. On one side there lay steps entering down into the darkness, and any who enter, if they can find this haunted place in the haunted woods, are never heard from again. But the rumor remains, a rumor of a treasure hidden within, and a guardian that is the waking horror of all that mankind fears, awaiting the one entity that can face these horrors, and trials, to master the place and claim the treasure as their own.
Ability Summary:
• All Genjutsu cast by this technique are considered [1] rank higher for Kai purposes.
• All Genjutsu cast are reduced by [10] Chakra in cost, to a minimum of [5].
• Allows practitioner with Musician class that also bears the Grand Performance discipline to play one more Genjutsu at the same time. Must meet requirements of Grand Performance discipline to use.
• While abilities in use, [15] stamina is used per post. If subject runs out of stamina, they fall into a coma that requires Konin or higher medical shinobi to bring out of.
• Just possessing this device costs [50] chakra points to be removed from the chakra pool semi-permanently. The only way to regain this is to destroy the device or have it removed from the owner's possession for four continuous days.
• If user possesses Sakkakugan and it is in use, shadows about the user tremble as if alive and hum with power. This is not optional, and requires [30] chakra per post, and is not an illusion. Has no effect other than dramatic effects.
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