*Nonexistant talent. No need to look here*

[Kiki Traum]

Don't take this the wrong way, but I don't think you should make fancharacters.
I say this to everybody, because when you make your own characters, you create the universe they exist in, and you aren't limited to what's possible in that universe.
I used to make fancharacters years ago, but I got bored quickly because ... well, they're just fancharacters.

P.S. I don't really like bishounen.  

[Namikikyo]

You asked for an opinion and she gave you one, Don't be a d**k about it.

If you didn't care what anyone thought about your art, then you shouldn't have asked. I personally thought she made a very valid point.

On the flip side, I'd like to say that the heads look very malformed. But it looks like you're getting better, which is good. MS paint is very tricky.

 

[Narricissa]

Seeing as how most people hate my art, and how I can't delete this topic, I am no longer posting here.
Consider this not even here.