What I meant by that part was that since I had three strength boost PA's it manifests as that 1 rank increase. I just didn't know how to word it into one proper PA so I put it into that. I'm good for all 4 attributes btw cause no bloodline. I'll try my hand at wording it into one PA though for simplicity's sake. How's this?
• Kaolin has a monstrous level of strength comparable to someone many times his size (and he was already pretty big to begin with) thanks to good genes and obsessive training. This manifests as all taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques performed by him acting as if they were one [1] rank higher than usual thanks to the amazing force behind them. (Costs 3 attributes.)
That's pretty much everything. Thank you for your time. Forget approving it for now I've changed my mind about certain things.
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 7:13 pm
Pixie Yui
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kagami Lilly Destiny Nickname: N/A
Age: 14 Birthdate: November 15 Gender: Female
Height: 5'1 Weight: 80 pds
Nindo: "Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. Its about learning to dance in the rain. " Personality: Kagami is your typical happy shout randomness kind of girl. She can be loud and outgoing, but soft and nice when meeting others. She loves to make friends and is very cheery and happy around them. Though she is 15, she still acts like a little kid, running around all hyper, eating candy, and shouting random things.
Village: Konahagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Genjutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}
Chakra Pool: 275 Stamina Pool: 225 Chakra Element: Fire and Lightning Chakra Color: Pink Chakra Materialization: The chakra appears as an aura
Strengths: • Can see well in the dark • Very speedy Weaknesses: • Far combat • Slow reaction time Fears: • Heights • Storms
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up. • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster. • Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Physical defense increased • 2 additional ninjutsu slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0両 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 01 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Sword Weapon Range: 4.5 ft Weapon Weight: 3 pds Weapon Location: In a sheath attached to the back of her shirt.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x 5 • Kunai x 10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} • Fire
{Your second element's name} • Electric
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ When Kagami was three, her parents would care for her like any other parent would. But they would always yell at each other about stuff Kagami had no idea about. It would go on for hours on end, and sometimes even turned into someone throwing something at the other like a table. Kagami felt terrified because of this and would always hide under her bed, shaking from fear. But through all of their fighting, there was one thing that always seemed to comfort her, her stuffed animal. It seemed to make her fears go away and her sadness fade away. The stuffed animal was her only true friend. Her parents bought it for her when she was one years old, and that was when they never fought one another. It was a black kitty doll. Eventually, it was time for school. Kagami was happy to go but also nervous no one would like her. And those fears were true, she brought her stuffed animal in to school everyday and everyone mocked her for it, they all made fun of her and even pushed her to the ground, sometimes in mud. She'd come home all dirty and had scars and bruises everywhere. Her parents were too busy fighting to even notice their own daughter hurting. She cried day and night, wondering why bad things seemed to always happen to her, even though she tried her best to avoid them. When she turned five, her brother came home instead of her parents. He took care of her everyday but when she asked where mom and dad were, he nearly broke down but held it in and said they were away on a trip. Everyday was the same, but her brother was the one to notice her coming home from the academy all hurt. He asked her what happened, a look of concern in his eyes, he obviously cared. When she told him some kids were picking on her, he became furious. She told him who the kids were, and the next day he went to the academy himself, and told the boys not to pick on his sis and punched them both to the ground. Soon the bullying had stopped and Kagami was happy. But the same day when she returned from school, she came home to her house on fire. It was raging bad, and she knew her brother was always home when she came back. She broke down crying and ran away from home, her heart broken, no one could fix it. But when she went back to school the next day, a boy took her in and took care of her, just wanting to help her even though she could not feel any happiness. But as the days passed and she was ready to move on, he stopped her before she could leave and told her to pay up, that his house is not of free service. The girl tried to tell him she didn't have any money, but the boy wouldn't take no for an answer. He started to attack her, not allowing her to leave until she payed him the money. She somehow found a way out, running as fast and far away as she could. It would seem she could trust no one at this point. She began to live in the woods until finally Kagami had turned eight and she graduated, though she felt so much pain, she smiled. She smiled on the last day through everything that happened. And she never told a soul her past. No one, not even the boy who took her in. She just told him that her family was away so he would not worry or pity her. That was when she tried to ignore all her misery and hide it by becoming a totally different person. She became happy and laughed alot, wanting no one to ever figure out her past. Now she was ready to live on her own, and protect the world from pain and misery.
You have you classes listed as nnjutsu// genjutsu, but possess two ninjutsu specialties, please alter your class and or specializations to reflect your choices accurately, and make sure your chakra stamina, and jutsu slots accurately accurately reflect them.
I deleted the second specialization. Im not sure how to check if the chakra stamina and jutsu fit though. :/ Does it look ok now?
Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 7:12 pm
Pixie Yui
you need to pick a specialization from genjutsu and one from from ninjutsu. then add the base chakra and staminas together from the two classes, along with any bonuses.
you get two classes and two specializations
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 12:11 am
Pixie Yui
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kagami Lilly Destiny Nickname: N/A
Age: 14 Birthdate: November 15 Gender: Female
Height: 5'1 Weight: 80 pds
Nindo: "Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. Its about learning to dance in the rain. " Personality: Kagami is your typical happy shout randomness kind of girl. She can be loud and outgoing, but soft and nice when meeting others. She loves to make friends and is very cheery and happy around them. Though she is 15, she still acts like a little kid, running around all hyper, eating candy, and shouting random things.
Village: Konahagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Genjutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}
Chakra Pool: 275 Stamina Pool: 225 Chakra Element: Fire Chakra Color: Pink Chakra Materialization: The chakra appears as an aura
Strengths: • Can see well in the dark • Very speedy Weaknesses: • Far combat • Slow reaction time Fears: • Heights • Storms
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up. Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster. • Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Physical defense increased • 2 additional ninjutsu slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0両 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 01 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Sword Weapon Range: 4.5 ft Weapon Weight: 3 pds Weapon Location: In a sheath attached to the back of her shirt.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x 5 • Kunai x 10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} • Fire
{Your second element's name} • Electric
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ When Kagami was three, her parents would care for her like any other parent would. But they would always yell at each other about stuff Kagami had no idea about. It would go on for hours on end, and sometimes even turned into someone throwing something at the other like a table. Kagami felt terrified because of this and would always hide under her bed, shaking from fear. But through all of their fighting, there was one thing that always seemed to comfort her, her stuffed animal. It seemed to make her fears go away and her sadness fade away. The stuffed animal was her only true friend. Her parents bought it for her when she was one years old, and that was when they never fought one another. It was a black kitty doll. Eventually, it was time for school. Kagami was happy to go but also nervous no one would like her. And those fears were true, she brought her stuffed animal in to school everyday and everyone mocked her for it, they all made fun of her and even pushed her to the ground, sometimes in mud. She'd come home all dirty and had scars and bruises everywhere. Her parents were too busy fighting to even notice their own daughter hurting. She cried day and night, wondering why bad things seemed to always happen to her, even though she tried her best to avoid them. When she turned five, her brother came home instead of her parents. He took care of her everyday but when she asked where mom and dad were, he nearly broke down but held it in and said they were away on a trip. Everyday was the same, but her brother was the one to notice her coming home from the academy all hurt. He asked her what happened, a look of concern in his eyes, he obviously cared. When she told him some kids were picking on her, he became furious. She told him who the kids were, and the next day he went to the academy himself, and told the boys not to pick on his sis and punched them both to the ground. Soon the bullying had stopped and Kagami was happy. But the same day when she returned from school, she came home to her house on fire. It was raging bad, and she knew her brother was always home when she came back. She broke down crying and ran away from home, her heart broken, no one could fix it. But when she went back to school the next day, a boy took her in and took care of her, just wanting to help her even though she could not feel any happiness. But as the days passed and she was ready to move on, he stopped her before she could leave and told her to pay up, that his house is not of free service. The girl tried to tell him she didn't have any money, but the boy wouldn't take no for an answer. He started to attack her, not allowing her to leave until she payed him the money. She somehow found a way out, running as fast and far away as she could. It would seem she could trust no one at this point. She began to live in the woods until finally Kagami had turned eight and she graduated, though she felt so much pain, she smiled. She smiled on the last day through everything that happened. And she never told a soul her past. No one, not even the boy who took her in. She just told him that her family was away so he would not worry or pity her. That was when she tried to ignore all her misery and hide it by becoming a totally different person. She became happy and laughed alot, wanting no one to ever figure out her past. Now she was ready to live on her own, and protect the world from pain and misery.
Very sorry about that. Had posted here last extremely late into the sleeps time. I had thought I had responded to you but It would seem I have not. But plan to fix that now. Winter covered the bases of what you need to do in order to make it legal. But one more thing as a heads up. You are allowed to gain up to 10 ninjutsu via 1 PA and given the non bloodline choice you made. You are allowed up to 4 PA's to better aid your character if you choose. You would be slightly gimping yourself in terms of what you are allowed to have.
Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:59 am
Winterwolf78
Ok I believe those should be edited in now. (: Not sure about bonuses but the rest I think. So is there anything else I need to edit? ^ . ^
Kazuraii
Its fine dont worry. [: Ah ok I think I edited those in. Thank you. ;D
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kira Nara Nickname: N/A, but open to being given some
Age: 24 Birthdate: Dec 21 Gender: Female
Height: 60in (5ft) Weight: 110lbs
Nindo: "The night is cold and dark, but even there, can you find warmth and protection." Personality: Quiet and respectful, but sarcastic and easily annoyed, she tends to stay to herself, mostly because she grew up with little interactions with others, and tends to be awkward around other people.
Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Medical
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Nara
Chakra Pool: 425 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Lightning (Raiton) Chakra Color: Black and Silver Chakra Materialization: It takes the form of a shadowy monster like figure surrounding her small frame.
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. Reductions: • Learns Raiton two (2) posts faster • Learns bloodline Jutsu two (2) posts faster • Learns Eiseijutsu two (2) posts faster • Learns Fuuton two (2) posts faster • Learns Bukijutsu one (1) posts faster
Personal Attributes: • The Hierophant: Due to her seclusion from society, she has studied extemely hard learning the ways of her elements. This enables her to learn any jutsu of her elements three posts faster, at the cost of her ignorance to the physical arts. Taijutsu is unable to be learned • Mesmerized by Weapons: Once living with the two legged humans she gains a love for mostly all weapons. If its sharp and pointy, she loves it. Gains one Bukijutsu slot as well as one post reduction to Buki. at the expense of her mental stability. {Not quite at the standard level of intelligence of the average Nara, but also not entirely sane}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Kisari-Gama Weapon Range: Ten (10) Foot from center (wielder) Weapon Weight: Two (2) pound blades (2x) Eight ( 8 ) pound chain, ten (10) pounds total Weapon Location: • Coiled on her left hip
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shurikin • 5 Kuni
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Raiton •
Eiseijutsu •
Kageton • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kira was born to a branch of Naras while they were traveling outside of the gates of Konoha, her mother had gone into labor when they were attacked by bandits on the road, who later killed both her mother and father. She was a small child, premature, and all but one bandit wrote her off as dead when she was so quiet after her birth. The one bandit that didn't, picked her up and took her to a spot in the woods, where a mother wolf was awaiting the birth of her cubs. He figured either it would be a quick death, or the wolf would care for the babe. The wolf did, in fact, take the newborn in and care for her, just like she would her own cubs once they were born. Growing up among wolves, she learned quickly how to take care of herself, but she knew she was differenet from her pack, and as such, anytime a traveler would pass through, she stole something from them, a little food, a book here and there, scrolls, and sometimes even clothing if what she’d stolen last was too small of shreaded. She taught herself to read, taught herself how to dress wounds and sew her own flesh together. It was through these scrolls and books that she gained her curiosity, she started to explore her forest home, looking for where these two-leggers kept coming from. Her wolf mother let her be, but the Alpha, her wolf-father, was not pleased, especially when she expressed her desire to explore the word of the two-leggers. This is where her story as a Konoha shinobi began.
Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 12:18 pm
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kira Nara Nickname: N/A, but open to being given some
Age: 24 Birthdate: Dec 21 Gender: Female
Height: 60in (5ft) Weight: 110lbs
Nindo: "The night is cold and dark, but even there, can you find warmth and protection." Personality: Quiet and respectful, but sarcastic and easily annoyed, she tends to stay to herself, mostly because she grew up with little interactions with others, and tends to be awkward around other people.
Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Medical
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Nara
Chakra Pool: 425 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Lightning (Raiton) Chakra Color: Black and Silver Chakra Materialization: It takes the form of a shadowy monster like figure surrounding her small frame.
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. Reductions: • Learns Raiton two (2) posts faster • Learns bloodline Jutsu two (2) posts faster • Learns Eiseijutsu two (2) posts faster • Learns Fuuton two (2) posts faster • Learns Bukijutsu one (1) posts faster
Personal Attributes: • The Hierophant: Due to her seclusion from society, she has studied extemely hard learning the ways of her elements. This enables her to learn any jutsu of her elements three posts faster, at the cost of her ignorance to the physical arts. Taijutsu is unable to be learned • Mesmerized by Weapons: Once living with the two legged humans she gains a love for mostly all weapons. If its sharp and pointy, she loves it. Gains one Bukijutsu slot as well as one post reduction to Buki. at the expense of her mental stability. {Not quite at the standard level of intelligence of the average Nara, but also not entirely sane}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Kisari-Gama Weapon Range: Ten (10) Foot from center (wielder) Weapon Weight: Two (2) pound blades (2x) Eight ( 8 ) pound chain, ten (10) pounds total Weapon Location: • Coiled on her left hip
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shurikin • 5 Kuni
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Raiton •
Eiseijutsu •
Kageton • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kira was born to a branch of Naras while they were traveling outside of the gates of Konoha, her mother had gone into labor when they were attacked by bandits on the road, who later killed both her mother and father. She was a small child, premature, and all but one bandit wrote her off as dead when she was so quiet after her birth. The one bandit that didn't, picked her up and took her to a spot in the woods, where a mother wolf was awaiting the birth of her cubs. He figured either it would be a quick death, or the wolf would care for the babe. The wolf did, in fact, take the newborn in and care for her, just like she would her own cubs once they were born. Growing up among wolves, she learned quickly how to take care of herself, but she knew she was differenet from her pack, and as such, anytime a traveler would pass through, she stole something from them, a little food, a book here and there, scrolls, and sometimes even clothing if what she’d stolen last was too small of shreaded. She taught herself to read, taught herself how to dress wounds and sew her own flesh together. It was through these scrolls and books that she gained her curiosity, she started to explore her forest home, looking for where these two-leggers kept coming from. Her wolf mother let her be, but the Alpha, her wolf-father, was not pleased, especially when she expressed her desire to explore the word of the two-leggers. This is where her story as a Konoha shinobi began.
A female Nara, That alone has me impressed. Everything seems to be in order. Those PA's though are a bit larger than normal, but those sacrifices are large as well. That and I do not see anything over powered from it down the road.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Emi Hyuuga Nickname: none yet
Age: 19 Birthdate: December 13th Gender: Female
Height: 5'6" Weight: 140
Nindo: "The person who says something is impossible should not interrupt the person who is doing it." Personality: She is a very strong willed headstrong girl and can be a bit on the sarcastic side; maybe a little too much. She dislikes being told she can't do something just because of her gender.
Village: Konoha Rank: genin First Class: Genjutsu Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Hyuuga
Chakra Pool:365 Stamina Pool: 135 Chakra Element: Suiton, Raiton Chakra Color: Midnight Blue Chakra Materialization: It appears around her in specks flickering like stars
Strengths: • Close Combat • Bloodline Techniques Weaknesses: • Fighting against those of her own clan • Struggles to restrain herself in a fight Fears: • Blue bunnies • Spiders
Class Disciplines : • Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent. • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Reductions: • Learns Genjutsu 1 post faster • Learns Bloodline Techniques 1 post faster Personal Attributes: • Those Eyes: able to learn sight triggered genjutsu 1 post faster • Heir Apparent: bloodline techs take 10 less chakra to activate
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bow Weapon Range: 180 to 249 yards Weapon Weight: 4lbs Weapon Location: Across her back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 7 Shuriken • 8 Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
Hyuuga • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬Emi was raised in a strict house with two older brothers. While they stuck to the rules, Emi was the one to rebel. She caused many issues for her parents even one time destroying her side of the house as she trained. Her parents weren't too happy about that. She didn't want to be a lady of the house cooking and cleaning and raising kids. She wanted to be better than her elder brothers and show them exactly what for. So she trained in secret, joined in the academy, and even passed with flying colors. She is diligent in her training and although she has gotten many "lessons" , more so beating, from her brothers but she is tougher for it. She despises them now, but they are family. Maybe if they were to be nicer to her and think that women weren't just there to do their bidding she would like them.
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 2:45 am
Kazuraii
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu Nickname: ---
Age: 18 Birthdate: Jan 1 Gender: Male
Height: 6ft Weight: 190lbs
Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it." Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.
Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Tamer Second Class: Ninjutsu
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Full Name: Mangix (Species : Red Panda) Nickname: ---
Age: 2 Birthdate: Jan 1 Gender: Male
Height: Head and body, 32in ; Tail, 26in Weight: 37lbs
Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Katon | Fuuton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Great teamwork with Kaolin • Deceptively quick and agile despite looking like a fat housecat Weaknesses: • Reliant on ninjutsu • Small size makes physical combat difficult Fears: • Losing Kaolin • Losing Sunagakure
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Training Reports (Empty link at the moment) Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Fuuton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Competent combatant at nearly everything • Fast thinker • Can fight on his feet Weaknesses: • Has potential for genjutsu, but hasn't developed it at all. • Average stamina • Overthinks at times Fears: • Death, as a result he also fears growing old • Lack of power to do what he wants
Class Disciplines : • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by 10 points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with six [6] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) Reductions: • Learns ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • --- Personal Attributes/Animal Attributes: • Multi-talented: 3 bukijutsu styles in exchange for giving up all the ninjutsu slots from Tamer class and chopping off 2 ninjutsu slots off the maximum (at Sannin, he pays for it as soon as possible though) from Maruton and Genjutsu and 3 slots from Doton and Raiton. • Wind country folk: Fuuton - 5 slots • Samurai in spirit: Kaolin's spirit is so strong, that he can utilize his physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Creative: 2 custom slots • Genin animal trait: Red pandas are your average nocturnal little critters. They have quick reflexes, good speed, and have nightvision. Kaolin has been with Mangix for so long that these aspects of himself have increased moderately to match Mangix.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両1050 AC: 700
Mission Reports Missions Complete: D Rank :: 7 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} ---------• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 17 ------• Maruton : : 00 / 04 ------• Doton : : 00 / 03 ------• Raiton : : 00 / 03 ------• Fuuton : : 00 / 05 ---------• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 ---------• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01 ---------• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Name: Basic Sword Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 21in Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs Weapon Location: Back Weapon Description:Your sword since you were a wee' lad. Still in perfect condition thanks to Suna's fine smiths.
Summoning Type: ---
Summon Sage: --- Pacts: ---
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shuriken (Back pouch) • 5 Kunai (Other back pouch) • Mokujin, Personal Trainer : A modified Mokujin puppet. By feeding it [50] chakra, one can use this automaton to help with their physical training. ( Learning Taijutsu and Bukijutsu takes one less post. ) •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Maruton • • • •
Doton • • •
Raiton • • •
Katon • • • • •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Hsing-I Pakua • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Shunkan no Hagane • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four Kiss of Flesh and Steel • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four Kaze no Zougenotou • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Hard Physical • • • • • • {D-rank Slots} • • {C-rank Slots} • • {B-rank Slots} • • {A-rank Slots} • • {S-rank Slots} • • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ While Kaolin's parents are Satetsu, and Kaolin is indeed their flesh and blood, he is in no way able to make use of their special abilities. Kaolin was born prematurely, and during his stay at the incubator in the Sunagakure hospital some shady folk subjected him to medical experiments in the dead of night that were supposed to make him the most powerful Satetsu in existence. The experiments backfired however and messed with his genes enough that Jiton was an impossibility for the boy.
Years later after graduating from the academy and spending some time running errand missions and training as a fresh genin, Kaolin can be found running around the village from the dojo to the academy to his house. He strives hard to become the strongest ninja for the sake of the village he loves. Till now he still hasn't realized his body cannot use Jiton, since during his academy days his body has instead leaned toward taijutsu and bukijutsu
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 8:40 am
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Emi Hyuuga Nickname: none yet
Age: 19 Birthdate: December 13th Gender: Female
Height: 5'6" Weight: 140
Nindo: "The person who says something is impossible should not interrupt the person who is doing it." Personality: She is a very strong willed headstrong girl and can be a bit on the sarcastic side; maybe a little too much. She dislikes being told she can't do something just because of her gender.
Village: Konoha Rank: genin First Class: Genjutsu Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Hyuuga
Chakra Pool:365 Stamina Pool: 135 Chakra Element: Suiton, Raiton Chakra Color: Midnight Blue Chakra Materialization: It appears around her in specks flickering like stars
Strengths: • Close Combat • Bloodline Techniques Weaknesses: • Fighting against those of her own clan • Struggles to restrain herself in a fight Fears: • Blue bunnies • Spiders
Class Disciplines : • Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent. • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Reductions: • Learns Genjutsu 1 post faster • Learns Bloodline Techniques 1 post faster Personal Attributes: • Those Eyes: able to learn sight triggered genjutsu 1 post faster • Heir Apparent: bloodline techs take 10 less chakra to activate
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bow Weapon Range: 180 to 249 yards Weapon Weight: 4lbs Weapon Location: Across her back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 7 Shuriken • 8 Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
Hyuuga • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬Emi was raised in a strict house with two older brothers. While they stuck to the rules, Emi was the one to rebel. She caused many issues for her parents even one time destroying her side of the house as she trained. Her parents weren't too happy about that. She didn't want to be a lady of the house cooking and cleaning and raising kids. She wanted to be better than her elder brothers and show them exactly what for. So she trained in secret, joined in the academy, and even passed with flying colors. She is diligent in her training and although she has gotten many "lessons" , more so beating, from her brothers but she is tougher for it. She despises them now, but they are family. Maybe if they were to be nicer to her and think that women weren't just there to do their bidding she would like them.
Approved but please change the jutsu limits to their appropriate amount. I would wait for you to resubmit but I am just about out of time. (Don't want you waiting 2 days)
Unless you already have some jutsu learned. I understand it was late lol. Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
Everything else is good. Be sure to make that your limitations and you can proceed to the village =D
Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 8:42 am
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu Nickname: ---
Age: 18 Birthdate: Jan 1 Gender: Male
Height: 6ft Weight: 190lbs
Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it." Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.
Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Tamer Second Class: Ninjutsu
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Full Name: Mangix (Species : Red Panda) Nickname: ---
Age: 2 Birthdate: Jan 1 Gender: Male
Height: Head and body, 32in ; Tail, 26in Weight: 37lbs
Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Katon | Fuuton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Great teamwork with Kaolin • Deceptively quick and agile despite looking like a fat housecat Weaknesses: • Reliant on ninjutsu • Small size makes physical combat difficult Fears: • Losing Kaolin • Losing Sunagakure
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Training Reports (Empty link at the moment) Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Fuuton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Competent combatant at nearly everything • Fast thinker • Can fight on his feet Weaknesses: • Has potential for genjutsu, but hasn't developed it at all. • Average stamina • Overthinks at times Fears: • Death, as a result he also fears growing old • Lack of power to do what he wants
Class Disciplines : • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by 10 points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with six [6] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) Reductions: • Learns ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • --- Personal Attributes/Animal Attributes: • Multi-talented: 3 bukijutsu styles in exchange for giving up all the ninjutsu slots from Tamer class and chopping off 2 ninjutsu slots off the maximum (at Sannin, he pays for it as soon as possible though) from Maruton and Genjutsu and 3 slots from Doton and Raiton. • Wind country folk: Fuuton - 5 slots • Samurai in spirit: Kaolin's spirit is so strong, that he can utilize his physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Creative: 2 custom slots • Genin animal trait: Red pandas are your average nocturnal little critters. They have quick reflexes, good speed, and have nightvision. Kaolin has been with Mangix for so long that these aspects of himself have increased moderately to match Mangix.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両1050 AC: 700
Mission Reports Missions Complete: D Rank :: 7 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} ---------• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 17 ------• Maruton : : 00 / 04 ------• Doton : : 00 / 03 ------• Raiton : : 00 / 03 ------• Fuuton : : 00 / 05 ---------• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 ---------• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01 ---------• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Name: Basic Sword Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 21in Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs Weapon Location: Back Weapon Description:Your sword since you were a wee' lad. Still in perfect condition thanks to Suna's fine smiths.
Summoning Type: ---
Summon Sage: --- Pacts: ---
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shuriken (Back pouch) • 5 Kunai (Other back pouch) • Mokujin, Personal Trainer : A modified Mokujin puppet. By feeding it [50] chakra, one can use this automaton to help with their physical training. ( Learning Taijutsu and Bukijutsu takes one less post. ) •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Maruton • • • •
Doton • • •
Raiton • • •
Katon • • • • •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Hsing-I Pakua • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Shunkan no Hagane • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four Kiss of Flesh and Steel • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four Kaze no Zougenotou • Stage One • Stage Two • Stage Three • Stage Four ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Hard Physical • • • • • • {D-rank Slots} • • {C-rank Slots} • • {B-rank Slots} • • {A-rank Slots} • • {S-rank Slots} • • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ While Kaolin's parents are Satetsu, and Kaolin is indeed their flesh and blood, he is in no way able to make use of their special abilities. Kaolin was born prematurely, and during his stay at the incubator in the Sunagakure hospital some shady folk subjected him to medical experiments in the dead of night that were supposed to make him the most powerful Satetsu in existence. The experiments backfired however and messed with his genes enough that Jiton was an impossibility for the boy.
Years later after graduating from the academy and spending some time running errand missions and training as a fresh genin, Kaolin can be found running around the village from the dojo to the academy to his house. He strives hard to become the strongest ninja for the sake of the village he loves. Till now he still hasn't realized his body cannot use Jiton, since during his academy days his body has instead leaned toward taijutsu and bukijutsu
Sorry for the wait on this approval. Approved, The PA is a bit odd in terms of sacrifice for what you get, but it all seems to add up.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2014 2:53 am
This is a resubmission, changes in spoiler at the bottom
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hikari Akira/Chi (Hidden Persona) Nickname: The Bright Medic
Age: 13 Birthdate: February 14 Gender: Female
Height: 60 in./150 cm. Weight: 96 lbs./43.5449 kg.
Nindo: "Life is precious, guard it well." Personality 1: Hikari is very clever and can be very sharp when in a tough spot. She prefers to stay in the back and not draw attention to herself, but will always try to be one of the first to help a person in need. Whether it be emotional or physical stress or injury, Hikari is always willing to help. If she is left alone in an unfamiliar place for too long, or sprayed by blood, it will trigger her second personality, Chi. Being wounded will also cause Chi to appear.
Chi is a personality hidden within Hikari. When it is triggered to come out, she becomes loud, rash, and maniacal. She will not attack her allies, but will tend to play with the corpses of her enemies, and will be more aggressive in combat. Her fighting style during this time is dexterous, and unpredictable. Although she wont directly attack her allies as Chi, she will not take measures to indirectly attack allies when attacking enemies.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Medical Class Second Class: Medical Class
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: No Bloodline, but has Power Package (+2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank)
Chakra Pool: 445 (the +20 from PA, and +25 from Power Package) Stamina Pool: 125 (the +25 from Power Package) Chakra Element: Earth and Wind Chakra Color: Light Green Chakra Materialization: A soft, wispy glow
Strengths: • Eiseijutsu • Ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Taijutsu • Bukijutsu • Is a klutz, more susceptible to being tripped (Hikari Persona Only) Fears: • Being alone • Allies/Friends dying
Class Disciplines : • Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated and utilized medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all medical techniques. • Specialist (Healing): The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. Reductions: • Learns Eiseijutsu 4 posts Faster (including the +2 from ninjustu) • Learns Ninjutsu 2 posts Faster (from PA) • Learns Genjutsu 1 post Slower (from PA) Personal Attributes: • Learns Ninjutsu in 2 less posts, learns Genjutsu in 1 more post • +20 increase in Chakra • Resistance to poison (Power Package) • -5 reduction to Chakra spent when using Eiseijutsu (Power Package)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Dagger Weapon Range: 34 in. / 86 cm. (from shoulder, counting one arm's span) Weapon Weight: 1/2 lbs./ 0.226796 kg. Weapon Location: Strapped to right thigh
Summon Sage: No Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x15
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Fuuton •
Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hikari's mother, Chie, and father,Isao, retired together, after both being medical ninja in sunagakure for 15 years. They met in the academy, and have been comrades since then. After they settled in, they built a clinic, and got married. 3 years later, they had a daughter whom they named Hikari, but Chie died during childbirth. Isao, although devastated, cared for Hikari until she was 5. Hikari learned to take care of herself, as her father was too busy working, trying to support her. As an only child, she would often entertain herself in her parents' library and taught herself many things. By age 8, Hikari was reading medical books meant for full grown adults. A few years later, she entered the ninja academy to become a medical ninja. She wasnt too great at genjutsu and was okay at ninjutsu, but her overall knowledge is what set her apart from the rest of the class. As a prodigy she was shunned by the rest of her class.
At age 11, her father was killed. Hikari's second persona Chi, which until now had not emerged, murdered Isao and dissected his corpse. Afterwards, Chi passed out and her persona Hikari returned. During the investigation, Hikari was interrogated, but knew nothing, other than that her father was now dead. She was let off the hook half a year later due to a lack of motive. Afterwards Hikari returned to the academy, and graduated a year late, due to the investigation, at age 13. Chi had not appeared a second time since the incident, and no one knows she exists. Hikari is striving to be a master of surgery, like her father, and a master of eiseijutsu, like her mother.
EXTRA NOTES
Hikari has been changed in the following ways since her last submission: Character name added Personality updated and expanded Weaknesses and fears updated Discipline changed Backstory expanded
Also, this is Chi:
Chi's Image will not go on the profile once approved.
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:53 am
GalagaHero
approved, and welcome to Suna, see the kage for your headband and join the fun!
