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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2016 5:24 pm

Character: Choumei Sue Akamichi
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Weapon Name: Houetsu no Kyouki [ Religious Exultation of Chivalrous Spirit ]
Weapon Type: Naginata/Base String Instrument.

Weapon Height: 80 inches or 6.6 Ft
Weapon Weight: 22Lbs

Description: Houetsu no Kyouki is a legendary weapon among shinto priest that was collected by a Akamichi clan head centuries ago. The weapon was said to be a tool for the spiritual cleansing of the soul used by presumably powerful Shinto priests or possibly priestesses, but the history remains vague. What is known by the Akamichi family is the legend of the holy warrior who slew and sealed away demons to cast them into the cleansing flames of Amatrasu. Thousands of fiends and wicked beast alike fell to this blade and were served to the goddess as tribute to bettering the nature of the world. Through its body, Amaterasu the sun goddess, granted it a cloth that could ward off any entity shrinking in fear of its light through the protection of it's "sunlight (energy) ssh" that stretched as infinitely as the suns rays themselves. The wielder of this weapon was considered a herald of the goddess Amaterasu and with each act in its use they'd be working towards pleasing the wishes of the goddess when working in the service of the Shinto faith.

Though not named after the goddess the weapon was believed to be a item based on the spirit of man and the goddesses respect for their resolve. From this relationship she bore a weapon that granted men of a chivalrous and just mind to wield it to slay any embodiment of evil or harmful intent, and they were considered judged by the goddess herself by these actions. Additions to its frame, such as a guitar strings worked onto the weapons frame were developed over time by the various hands it passed to. With each user different results have been fostered and the Akamichi known as Choumei has been the most recent "slayer" of evil from any of the users prior to her. Yet the item seems to fit her aesthetic, and though not being the one to add the musical feature of the strings to the weapon, she's certain she has a kinship with said individual. The charka steel blade was her only addition, though simple it was a fluent idea into the features of the weapon.

Ability Summary:
• Connected to the hilt of the blade down the staff are four chakra metal alloy strings that run along and around the staffs intricate design to work as base "guitar" strings from any angle. When strummed the vibrations create a piezoelectric energy that builds (mostly harmless for the user) and focuses into the blade. This energy increases the power of the chakra blade when taking on any elemental nature with an static surge added for one [1] attack per post, increasing the power by a descriptive rank by one-sixth [1/6] per post they were played without end or use, building to its height to a full ranks boost to the attack, other wise the attack can simply over power equal ranked ninjutsu and complex Tai/buki by the slightest margin. This energy will natural subside and disperses harmlessly into the atmosphere if the playing ends, taking as many turns as the build up took to ease off as well as going back down in its boost. This boost cannot exceed an S+-rank which has a recoil of paralyzing the user for one [1] turn. (note: this also works with other forms of chakra coating to boost their effect on the blade)
The strings produce a sound that can be heard clearly for a quarter mile on clear day.

• The blade is made of chakra steel and it can take on the elemental nature and effect of either of Choumei's elements. Once applied with any chakra enhancing blade technique (variable by style) it can be persisted as a supplementary, but as it's effect by other jutsu it's power will diminish and will need to be reapplied [Comparatively losing one rank in energy after facing jutsu]. Allowing her ranked Bukijutsu techniques to match Ninjutsu techniques of the same rank.

• Use of the weapon can be considered a method "Observance II
Rank: D" Mission of the Shinto faith due to it's Religious tie ins and history it's mere use and proof of existence expands the acknowledgment of the faith. Yet they only count when used in battle, during another mission, or form of work outside of directly practicing the faith.

• Engraved along the blade is a unique scripture that dictates a primeval ward towards evil. This ward causes whatever the blade comes in contact with to lose ten [10] Stamina/chakra in equal portions per strike landed. This energy isn't just drawn out of the opponent but sealed into the weapon and projected from its other end in the form of a tangerine colored sash, named the "sunlight sash". This sash extends as it's charged with the chakra/stamina of the opponent and acts as a defense as it gains more energy it allows those who wrap it around their bodies (arm most likely) to gain increased physical resistance to physical harm as well as biological impairments. Yet this doesn't last infinitely and only activates when the sash is wrapped around someone.

    – This cloth looks like a bright sunny colored tangerine cloth that faintly glows and extends from the end of the staffs cap. The cloth can grow/retract infinitely as long as there is Chakra/stamina presently being stored in the weapon. This energy actively combats the force or pathogens of what might be aiming to harm the wielder or whomever they wrap the sash about. Expending a relative amount of Chakra/stamina per the ranked level of the attack or hazard. Yet this isn't the same as healing, as it does not seal wounds, but simply prevents them from occurring by warding them off. [The energy it can store is caped at S-Rank 160 Chakra/Stamaina respectively, and this is expended the moment it's forced to ward of an attack of a matching level to it's stores of energy.]

    – This sash in the hands of a Koton [Light Release] use gives their blinding techniques a +1 rank (and following the benefits of said boosts) in effect such as longer duration for blinding techniques.



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Reaper: I'm still trying to work out the mechanics of this just right so I rewrote it removing the "sutra" thing and put in another function also a detail to it's relating to the shinto faith that I didn't notice before but it might be something so I figured why not add it. Also once it's passed here do I have to get it from takumi or some other store or can my character just stat using it?

On the chakra blade bit I'm not sure If I got this right.

Edit: You know I made edits and kinda came to the conclusion that those were the issue from what you already said but yeah. I've got this edit for you to look at. Sorry if it's kinda insistent how I keep editing this thing, but I'm trying to get it to a good place I guess. sweatdrop
 
PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2016 5:47 pm
AD Reaper Elyse
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Character: Choumei Sue Akamichi
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Weapon Name: Houetsu no Kyouki [ Religious Exultation of Chivalrous Spirit ]
Weapon Type: Naginata/Base String Instrument.

Weapon Height: 80 inches or 6.6 Ft
Weapon Weight: 22Lbs

Description: Houetsu no Kyouki is a legendary weapon among shinto priest that was collected by a Akamichi clan head centuries ago. The weapon was said to be a tool for the spiritual cleansing of the soul used by presumably powerful Shinto priests or possibly priestesses, but the history remains vague. What is known by the Akamichi family is the legend of the holy warrior who slew and sealed away demons to cast them into the cleansing flames of Amatrasu. Thousands of fiends and wicked beast alike fell to this blade and were served to the gods as sacrifice and tribute to bettering the nature of mans world. Through its body, Amaterasu, the sun goddess granted it a cloth that could draw in anything that waned in spirit into its "sunlight (energy) sash" that stretched as infinitely as the suns rays themselves. The wielder of this weapon was considered a herald of the goddess Amaterasu and with each act in its use they'd be working towards pleasing the wishes of the goddess when working in the service of the Shinto faith.

Though not named after the goddess the weapon was believed to be a item based on the spirit of man and the goddesses respect for their resolve. From this relationship she bore a weapon that granted men of a chivalrous and just mind to wield it to slay and seal any embodiment of evil or harmful intent, judged by the goddess herself by these actions. Additions to its frame, such as a guitar strings worked onto the weapons frame were developed over time by the various hands it passed to. With each user different results have been fostered and the Akamichi known as Choumei has been the most recent "slayer" of evil from any of the users prior to her. Yet the item seems to fit her aesthetic, and though not being the one to add the musical feature of the strings to the weapon, she's certain she has a kinship with said individual. The charka steel blade was her only addition, though simple it was a fluent idea into the features of the weapon.

Ability Summary:
• Connected to the hilt of the blade down the staff are four chakra metal alloy strings that run along and around the staffs intricate design to work as a base "guitar" strings from any angle. When strummed the vibrations create a piezoelectric energy that builds (mostly harmless for the user) and focuses into the blade. This energy increases the power of the chakra blade when taking on any elemental nature with an static surge added for one [1] attack per post, increasing the powr by a descriptive rank by one-sixth [1/6] per post they were played without end or use, building to its height to a full ranks boost to the attack, other wise the attack can simply over power equal ranked ninjutsu and complex Tai/buki by the slightest margin. This energy will natural subside and disperses harmlessly into the atmosphere if the playing ends, taking as many turns as the build up took to ease off as well as going back down in its boost. This boost cannot exceed an S+-rank which has a recoil of paralyzing the user for one [1] turn. (note: this also works with other forms of chakra coating to boost their effect on the blade)
The strings produce a sound that can be heard clearly for a quarter mile on clear day.

• The blade is made of chakra steel and it can take on the elemental nature and effect of either of Choumei's elements. With simply any amount of chakra applied attacks performed can have the added effect of her elements. Allowing her ranked Bukijutsu techniques to match Ninjutsu techniques of the same rank.

• Engraved along the blade is a unique fuuin scripture that dictates a method to enact a primeval form of fuuinjutsu that only activates through the physical contact of the blade and a ritual chant called a "sutra" (which is a custom technique requirement that assimilates formless slots to be used towards learning "Physical-Fuuinjutsu"). These sutra are jutsu that directly relate to fuuin, and allow fuuin to be learned under formless-slots with only this weapon employed. When a Fuuin is completed the scriptures learned aren't written down by the user, as the sutra and their movements inscribes the jutsus's matrix of chakra into a sash of woven pure chakra energy, where the fuuin's scripture is printed and used for the seal can be released and manipulated from.

    – This cloth looks like a bright sunny colored tangerine cloth that faintly glows and extends from the end of the staffs cap. The cloth can grow/retract infinitely as long as the need/lack for more space for sealed objects, people (must be weakened/defeated, or willing), or seals to effect an area are required. It releases all contents at once when unsealing until appropriate sealing sutra (adapted fuuin) are applied to elaborate more specific selection. This cloth can be used fluidly in battle to tie the weapon to the grip of the user or retrieve it when thrown or swung from it.

    – Though the cloth is made of energy it isn't unbreakable and sections of it are capable of being cut open by chakra blades to release the seal. Yet this may have ill effects on the cutter since it can cause the seal to activate on the cutter and user instantly to release the contents of the seal suddenly without control. The energy weaves about the released section to retain its whole appearance and length and the rules or benefits of learning more elaborate construction of sutra (adapted fuuin) matrices can strengthen the cloth as if weaving them more tightly, durability of the cloth and it's visibly inscribed seals are equivalent to the rank of the sutra (adapted fuuin) in durability requiring equal force to cut. [ "Seal connection" acts like a karabo effect on the strength of the cloths section containing connected seals. Kuchiyose work through either sealing previously written contracts into the naginata's sash or drawing a contract with the blade.]



AandOE
re-submitting a revised version without any jutsu implications just mechanisms to it's design and a requirement for a custom to enact the effect/mechanism of the "sunlight sash".


Perceived mechanisms: If the descriptives part is just acting like normal descriptives, then the first one is fine. For the second, any chakra/stamina interaction must have chakra/stamina applied, so we'll require it as such. If 'sutra' is a jutsu implication: Nothing further to discuss, as you're putting in for some kind of custom instead of asking for ninjutsu: We're aware that your rpc can't learn ninjutsu, so please think carefully. Approved, without any 'sutra'.


1.) yeah I meant descriptives as acting like the normal descriptives int he guild.

2.) So I figure it passively remaining active after application is a no go, or do you mean something else. Either wy I'll just work with it along normal chakra steel principles.

3.) I'm putting this ability behind a custom Jutsu I've yet to make to support it's application and the limitation would rest in my formless slots available. For learning. Yet if the hard set situation is that i cannot learn Fuuinjutsu because it's under the umbrella of ninjutsu indefinitely then I'm I can live with that and rework the mechanics of the sash. Though Just let me know in finite words what the call on that is.

[Alternate 3rd mechanism]
• Engraved along the blade is a unique scripture that dictates a method to enact a primeval method to siphon chakra through contact to flesh. This chakra is drained in increments of ten [10] per cut. As the blade cuts consecutive times into the enemy it builds this chakra in the form of a saffron-golden yellow sash that extends from the cap of the staff. Once the Energy builds enough It can be released into any thrusting buki-jutsu technique extending it's reach and power equal to the amount of chakra stored which caps at that of a [S-rank amount]

    – This cloth looks like a bright sunny colored tangerine cloth that faintly glows and extends from the end of the staffs cap. The cloth can grow/retract infinitely as long as there is Chakra presently being stored in the weapon. Though the cloth is made of Chakra energy it isn't unbreakable and sections of it are capable of being cut open by chakra blades. Yet the chakra blades rank must be higher than the amount of chakra stored into the weapons sash.

    – The uses of this sash are more powerful in the hands of a Koton [Light Release] user giving their blinding techniques a +1 rank in effect and defense.



1) Okay.
2) Simply meant that to have normal chakra interactions, it requires an upkeep after activation. (as in, if a B-rank on the weapon hits a C-rank, the chakra goes down to being only a C-rank, etc)
3) Fuuinjutsu is an extension of Maruton Ninjutsu. Essentially it's considered the 'advanced' version, though the similarities lay mainly in the Inton/Yoton ratios.
 


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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2016 10:34 pm
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Character: Miyamoto Bastet
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Weapon Name: Kirin no Edadzuno [ Antlers of the Qilin ]
Weapon Type: Cestus

Weapon Height: 18"
Weapon Weight: 10 lbs.

Description: A set of gauntlets designed to inflict pain, born in the aftermath of a great tragedy. It has two forms: extended and retracted, referring to the state of its antler-like protrusions.
Retracted: A set of studded white metal gauntlets. Every outward facing edge is sharpened greatly, including the studs themselves. A band of additional armor plating is present around the knuckles. The fingers of the gauntlet end in short, clawlike blades. The glove underneath the armor is made of a specially woven metallic fabric designed to protect the user and conduct Chakra to the rest of the gauntlet, and takes on the color of the wearer's Chakra (defaulting to black if the color is not normally visible, and white if there is no wearer).
Extended: The main body of the gauntlet is covered with white metal protrusions that curve around it and branch outward like antlers. These antlers protrude from the glove both forward and backward, with the backward protrusions weaving together to form an armored sleeve around the wearer's forearms. The forward protrusions are sharpened like blades and end in fine points, making them potent weapons in the right hands. The branching of the forward antlers is different for each gauntlet, allowing the wearer to perform hand seals as normal while they are extended.

Ability Summary:
• The wearer can pay 5 Chakra to extend or retract the antlers on both gauntlets. Doing so consumes no activations, but can only be performed twice per post (one extension and one retraction).
• Wounds inflicted with this gauntlet will bleed until healed by direct medical treatment. Treatment by someone of the appropriate Medic [Job] field can stop the bleeding, but recovery will be very slow if not healed by an appropriately-ranked medical technique. By default recovery from wounds left by these gauntlets takes one week per rank of the damage if not treated with a medical technique.
• Creatures that lack blood but contain another vital fluid lose that in place of blood.
• Anything that takes a hit of at least B-Rank is automatically grappled, as the gauntlet becomes lodged in its body.
• Blocking techniques used while this gauntlet is in extended form also count as disarming attempts. Unless the foe uses an offensive activation to pay stamina at the rank of the blocking technique, this disarm succeeds.
 
PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2016 10:36 pm
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Character: Miyamoto Bastet
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Weapon Name: Kirin no Edadzuno [ Antlers of the Qilin ]
Weapon Type: Cestus

Weapon Height: 18"
Weapon Weight: 10 lbs.

Description: A set of gauntlets designed to inflict pain, born in the aftermath of a great tragedy. It has two forms: extended and retracted, referring to the state of its antler-like protrusions.
Retracted: A set of studded white metal gauntlets. Every outward facing edge is sharpened greatly, including the studs themselves. A band of additional armor plating is present around the knuckles. The fingers of the gauntlet end in short, clawlike blades. The glove underneath the armor is made of a specially woven metallic fabric designed to protect the user and conduct Chakra to the rest of the gauntlet, and takes on the color of the wearer's Chakra (defaulting to black if the color is not normally visible, and white if there is no wearer).
Extended: The main body of the gauntlet is covered with white metal protrusions that curve around it and branch outward like antlers. These antlers protrude from the glove both forward and backward, with the backward protrusions weaving together to form an armored sleeve around the wearer's forearms. The forward protrusions are sharpened like blades and end in fine points, making them potent weapons in the right hands. The branching of the forward antlers is different for each gauntlet, allowing the wearer to perform hand seals as normal while they are extended.

Ability Summary:
• The wearer can pay 5 Chakra to extend or retract the antlers on both gauntlets. Doing so consumes no activations, but can only be performed twice per post (one extension and one retraction).
• Wounds inflicted with this gauntlet will bleed until healed by direct medical treatment. Treatment by someone of the appropriate Medic [Job] field can stop the bleeding, but recovery will be very slow if not healed by an appropriately-ranked medical technique. By default recovery from wounds left by these gauntlets takes one week per rank of the damage if not treated with a medical technique.
• Creatures that lack blood but contain another vital fluid lose that in place of blood.
• Anything that takes a hit of at least B-Rank is automatically grappled, as the gauntlet becomes lodged in its body.
• Blocking techniques used while this gauntlet is in extended form also count as disarming attempts. Unless the foe uses an offensive activation to pay stamina at the rank of the blocking technique, this disarm succeeds.

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PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2016 3:56 am
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Kyomei Nenemaru : Weapon Slots 1/2 : (Weapon Slot Granted By Suna Arc)
Regular Form:

Weapon Name:Chōwa {Harmony} Harmony is a traditional Khakkhara. Otherwise commonly known as a Buddhist monk staff or Shakujou.

Weapon Type:Khakkhara
Weapon Location: Often Carried, If not attached to back.
Weapon Height/Length: 7 Ft
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Number of Rings: 8

Description: Chōwa is a Khakkhara passed down in Kyomei's family. It isn't by any means something that holds great significance in it's current state as there have been many Chōwa before it. The christening of the name given unto every Khakkhara in the family solely because it is a reminder to always follow the way of peace to achieve true happiness in life and that all things despite the good and the bad that occur in them remain in harmony despite what it may seem. When a Shrine Maiden or High Priest of her and many other families similar achieves a certain point in their life The Chōwa becomes something more.
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Enlightened Form:
Weapon Name: Keihatsu {Enlightenment}. When slammed a Chōwa becomes what Kyomei's family calls the Keihatsu or The Enlightenment. It signifies that the wielder has been given or found purpose in life. A Chōwa becomes a Keihatsu when slammed down forcefully and imbued with the wielders spirit. (5-Chakra Per Transition: This Consumes an Activation)
Weapon Type:Khakkhara
Weapon Location: Often Carried, If not attached to back.
Weapon Height/Length: 7 Ft
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Number of Rings: 8

Description: The Keihatsu emits a super natural glow, one that often synchronizes with the user's own chakra. Aside from this glowing the Keihatsu bares no other physical difference from it's previous form as a Chowa.

Ability Summary
►8 Ring Shattering:
Rank: X
Description: The Keihatsu's rings can separate themselves from the the staff they are attached to, they then grow up to an incredible size. Ranging up to Eight feet in diameter. The rings can be freely controlled by the wielder using the staff as a conduit to direct them. (5-Chakra Per Ring. A Total of 40 Chakra For 8: Rings must be sustained whilst in flight.) The rings are then often intended to place a target in their vacant center and contract immediately to restrict the target. If any of the rings are broken the remains turn into a ball of spiritual light and return to the staff as a normal sized ring and is placed in a temporary recovery period (1 Post). If the Keihatsu is ever disarmed all currently floating rings fall to the ground and return to their normal size. The rings can also be used in conjunction with Shakujou styles if logical. The weaponized rings strength is equivalent to the user's amounted expended for stamina with Formless Style: Shakujou.

►Sacred Detainment:
Rank: X {1-rank per Ring}
Type:Special-Fuuin (Special Meaning Fuuin Reductions do not Apply)
Element: N/a
Description: Strange Creatures or spirits with malicious intent when bound by the rings undergo an immediate binding. This seal is treated as an S+ seal if all 8 rings find a way to ensnare their target. The target that meets all the criteria 1:Being A Strange Creature 2:Harboring/Portraying Violent Tendencies cannot use any of their supernatural strength, skills, or powers, and effectively are stripped of all defenses up to the rank of rings used. Sacred Detainment then drains half said X-ranks worth of Chakra each post it is sustained. Sacred Detainment Does Work on Jinchuuriki but to a lesser extent only being treated as one X-ranked amount less and only stripping them of their [ Demon Techniques and Benefits ] equal to the amount of rings detaining them. Rings can be destroyed by an ability one rank higher than the X-rank of rings used or if there are three strength descriptives or higher when against a similar ranking technique.

►Edict of Purification:
Rank: X {1-rank per Ring}
Type:Special- Fuuin
Element: All
Description: When the Edict of Purification occurs the user stands still and begins reciting a mantra. As the Mantra progresses a ring will detach itself grow to it's maximum size and then portray the chinese or kanji symbol of an element. [1 Per Post ] The Elements are
火 [Ka] [Fire] : 風 [Fū] [Wind] :土 [Do] [Earth] : 雷 [Rai] [Lightening] : 水 [Sui] [Water]: 冥 [Mei] [Dark]: 光 [Kō] [Light]: 空[Kū] [Void]. The Mantra Must Be Sustained, Breaking of the mantra causes any rings at that point to fall pointlessly to the ground and return to the Keihatsu. The cost of this technique is progressive per post. [5], [10], [20], [40], [80], [160], [160], [160]. A Total of [640] by the final post. When the Mantra concludes the user spins their staff allowing for one final interruption and then slams it into the ground. All eight symbols glow with light corresponding to their elements fuse together into one giant ring that appears to be an eight sectioned circle with the symbol 真 [Shin] [Purity] in the center. A unfathomably powerful blast that could decimate an entire village if fired downward from the sky shoots forward. However, the beam inflicts no harm to anyone or any structure...unless it is a strange creature, impure of heart, tainted by evil, or wishes to do harm. The technique essentially, even then, does no damage, instead, it places a feeling of tranquility on all evil or violent intentions shutting them away briefly and crossing over any wayward spirits. The option for this technique to cause mass amounts of damage and destruction is possible but is considered Taboo in all accounts and doing so would destroy the weapon and make it's wielder unfit to ever wield another Keihatsu ever again. Even then, such is only achievable by tampering with the chanters rings discreetly carving [Shi] [Death] on each ring. Which no wielder could do themselves as it would make them unfit to wield the Keihatsu. This was only discovered when a former Keihatsu user asking for purity [Shin] to be engraved on the weapon by a blacksmith was accidently replaced with [Shi] the result was labeled in history as [The Black Tragedy]. While it's mark in history was minimal and the small settlement lost wasn't noteworthy the Keihatsu's capability of destruction was discovered that day and only the most heavily versed scholars are aware of it as even many who've unlocked the Keihatsu's abilities are unaware of this. Unfortunately devout historian's because of this are incredibly suspicious of all wielders of the Keihatsu.

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Kumotake Saisho: Weapon Slots : 1/1

Weapon Name: Hinekureta Ito [Perverse Thread]

Weapon Type: Unarmed
Weapon Location: Gloves
Weapon Height/Length: Fitted
Weapon Weight: 0.1 lbs

Description: Hinekureta Ito is a pair of black gloves. The emblem of a jagged spider sewn on the backsides while the palms contain what appear to be the equivalent of small hole like pores. The gloves when worn treat the wearer's hands as if they were complex for interactions with ninjutsu.The gloves allow interaction with chakra structures and the pores on the gloves themselves can produce threading from each fingertip. The threading can then attach to structures allowing them to be manipulated by pulling them. These threads are not unlike chakra threads in strength but are clearly visible. When finger tips are brought together the produced threads can fuse into one leading to garrote wire like executions.

Ability Summary:
►Feeding the gloves 10 chakra allows the users hands to interact with Ninjutsu and treats all physical skills using one's hands as complex for interactions. This does not consume an activation. Duration: (1 Post)
►Feeding the gloves an X-rank amount of chakra will produce wire like threads of equivalent strength.


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Tōsokurui Ashi Hojo: Weapon Slots : 1/1

Name: Modoru gōmō 戻る剛毛(Bristle Back)
Weapon Type: Brush+Varies
Weapon Range: 4-35 Feet
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped to Back.

Description: Upon achieving a more honed physical body Tōsokurui goes into great lengths to find the ideal brush. He finds this incredibly large brush at a shop known as Takumi not having been sold due to its unwieldiness. The brushes head itself is said to be malleable and can be molded by the users chakra into various shapes and sizes. Allowing a variation of large weapon Bukijutsu to be used assuming they're known. Among these being Staff, Polearms,Greatsword,Scythe,Whip and Lance while still retaining the benefits of a brush. The brushes bristles can be damaged, but the own users chakra can be poured into it to repair the brush head. However, this only applies to its bristles not the brush itself.

Ability Summary:
►Passively Modoru gōmō is treated as a brush even when it's form has shifted. Thus it can use ink and be utilized with the Kanboku style in tandem.
►Feeding Modoru gōmō 10 Chakra will change the tip of it's bristles into any form of weapon befitting of it's size. However, any style techniques still require said training to be used efficiently. Style techniques utilized this way aside from Kanboku are treated as one rank less powerful in strength taking into account the bristles are only an imitation and not the real thing. (This Consumes an Activation)
 
PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2016 12:37 am

Character: Sonyo Rue
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Weapon Name: SISS ( Self-Intelligent Sterilization Spider )
Weapon Type: Robot

Weapon Height: 4 inches long by 3 inches tall
Weapon Weight: Roughly around three and a half pounds

Description: Siss is a robotic spider created by Sonyo in order to be helped with multiple medical things such as sterilizing an area for her before she operates and helping with other things such as relaying information. Siss can speak with the words saved in it's database, and new words are stored as it hears them. Sonyo often calls Siss a she even though the spider doesn't have any gender because it's a robot. Sonyo can load Siss with one jutsu by an extra cost of 10 chakra on top of the cost of the jutsu itself. Siss runs on solar power, and only has a battery life of about 5 hours, so Sonyo often has her turned off at night and stored away except for when she needs her. Siss will obey basic commands by Sonyo, but often has a mind and a thought process of her own. Sonyo cannot order the spider to do things that would otherwise danger its existence like jumping in to a fire or self destructing. When not activated, Siss looks like a small metallic ball; however when activated she uncurls and looks something more akin to a disk with a rounded bottom with six long metallic legs. Siss is made from a lightweight stainless steel, like most medical equipment; but because the steel is lighter it's more weak to physical contact. Siss can also store and use poisons/pathogens/cures given to her, allowing for the robot to be somewhat effective in combat situations as well.

Ability Summary:
• Using a special mixture of gas stored inside it, Siss can release the gas in a high-pressured burst and sterilize the surrounding area of about a 10-ft diameter. Siss must then charge for 5 posts to build up the gas again. This gas is non-toxic and non-corrosive, though smells very strongly of chemicals so it might effect those with a strong sense of smell. This works by removing germs, bacteria, viruses, and fungi spores from the surrounding area.
• Siss can store up to her owner's rank cap of an Eiseijutsu technique given to it by Sonyo. These techniques are held in a stasis in the robot to be used at a later time. Siss cannot store more than one jutsu at a time and storing a jutsu mid-battle takes [1] post preparation.
• Siss can store small medical tools for Sonyo, these tools are already pre-sterilized as they're held in the same compartment as the sterilization gas. Tools that can be found here are things like a small roll of gauze, a syringe, or a scalpel. Unless sealed in a scroll, Siss can only hold up to two small tools.
• Siss can fit in to small areas and relay what she's seen to Sonyo, so she can be used for things like spying on an enemy or checking out an area too dangerous for humans.
• Siss can also understand and speak human languages, which get stored in her hardrive for later use. Siss cannot use words or languages she has not yet heard, therefor she is limited when it comes to speaking. Siss, of course, is pre-loaded with a small word database at her making in her owner's native tongue.
• Siss's battery life of five hours deals with her not being turned off at all. If used in moderation at night, Siss can last in till sunrise with no problem.
• Siss is more robust when retracted in to her ball form, being harder to break when retracted
• Siss can store about 10 cc's ( militers ) of any given substance in each leg, and inject said substance via a retracted hypodermic needle in each leg.
• Siss has a voice that is meant to sound soothing to younger and lesser minded individuals, though to higher thinking beings it can seem almost creepy.
• Siss can store small samples of particulates and viruses/bacteria/fungi in a small and safe containment chamber to be retracted later. This chamber has perfect conditions to extend the life span of any living material inside, as it is warm and humid.
 

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PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2016 3:02 am
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Character: Sonyo Rue
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Weapon Name: SISS ( Self-Intelligent Sterilization Spider )
Weapon Type: Robot

Weapon Height: 4 inches long by 3 inches tall
Weapon Weight: Roughly around three and a half pounds

Description: Siss is a robotic spider created by Sonyo in order to be helped with multiple medical things such as sterilizing an area for her before she operates and helping with other things such as relaying information. Siss can speak with the words saved in it's database, and new words are stored as it hears them. Sonyo often calls Siss a she even though the spider doesn't have any gender because it's a robot. Sonyo can load Siss with one jutsu by an extra cost of 10 chakra on top of the cost of the jutsu itself. Siss runs on solar power, and only has a battery life of about 5 hours, so Sonyo often has her turned off at night and stored away except for when she needs her. Siss will obey basic commands by Sonyo, but often has a mind and a thought process of her own. Sonyo cannot order the spider to do things that would otherwise danger its existence like jumping in to a fire or self destructing. When not activated, Siss looks like a small metallic ball; however when activated she uncurls and looks something more akin to a disk with a rounded bottom with six long metallic legs. Siss is made from a lightweight stainless steel, like most medical equipment; but because the steel is lighter it's more weak to physical contact. Siss can also store and use poisons/pathogens/cures given to her, allowing for the robot to be somewhat effective in combat situations as well.

Ability Summary:
• Using a special mixture of gas stored inside it, Siss can release the gas in a high-pressured burst and sterilize the surrounding area of about a 10-ft diameter. Siss must then charge for 5 posts to build up the gas again. This gas is non-toxic and non-corrosive, though smells very strongly of chemicals so it might effect those with a strong sense of smell. This works by removing germs, bacteria, viruses, and fungi spores from the surrounding area.
• Siss can store up to her owner's rank cap of an Eiseijutsu technique given to it by Sonyo. These techniques are held in a stasis in the robot to be used at a later time. Siss cannot store more than one jutsu at a time and storing a jutsu mid-battle takes [1] post preparation.
• Siss can store small medical tools for Sonyo, these tools are already pre-sterilized as they're held in the same compartment as the sterilization gas. Tools that can be found here are things like a small roll of gauze, a syringe, or a scalpel. Unless sealed in a scroll, Siss can only hold up to two small tools.
• Siss can fit in to small areas and relay what she's seen to Sonyo, so she can be used for things like spying on an enemy or checking out an area too dangerous for humans.
• Siss can also understand and speak human languages, which get stored in her hardrive for later use. Siss cannot use words or languages she has not yet heard, therefor she is limited when it comes to speaking. Siss, of course, is pre-loaded with a small word database at her making in her owner's native tongue.
• Siss's battery life of five hours deals with her not being turned off at all. If used in moderation at night, Siss can last in till sunrise with no problem.
• Siss is more robust when retracted in to her ball form, being harder to break when retracted
• Siss can store about 10 cc's ( milliliters ) of any given substance in each leg, and inject said substance via a retracted hypodermic needle in each leg.
• Siss has a voice that is meant to sound soothing to younger and lesser minded individuals, through to higher thinking beings it can seem almost creepy.
• Siss can store small samples of particulates and viruses/bacteria/fungi in a small and safe containment chamber to be retracted later. This chamber has perfect conditions to extend the life span of any living material inside, as it is warm and humid.

I have some issues with this unfortunately.
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Siss is a robotic spider created by Sonyo.

►Unless Sonyo is a Gearsmith a pretty well versed one I can't see her making such a complex device on her own. If she is, correct me because I couldn't seem to find it.
►Aside from this, I think anything falling under the category of robotic on anything with a sentience is less of a weapon and more of a puppet. For the custom puppet section and following under typical device restrictions.
►The technology seems incredibly advanced having an AI built in and a speaker and voice chip to produce a voice. However, in it's defense the UHV have shown to have some pretty advanced constructs themselves.
► I cannot with confidence approve this. However, I'll consult the others about this.
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PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2016 5:15 am
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I meant the idea was created by her, not the actual thing. I should have been more specific on that, huh? Whewps.

Should this not be approved, then that's fine. *Sweatdrop* Though I am willing to make changes to it, if that helps.

As for the sentience thing, golems created by several in suna have their own thought process and sentience. And the speaker can be taken from any comm's unit. Voice chip? Ehh... I could probably figure how that works in... somehow.
 

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PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2016 7:36 pm
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~SISS : ( Self-Intelligent Sterilization Spider )~

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Taking into account after discussion a previous version of this was approved prior and that the Sunagakure shop has a puppet with a similar functionality.  
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:06 pm
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Kyomei Nenemaru : Weapon Slots 1/2 : (Weapon Slot Granted By Suna Arc)
Regular Form:

Weapon Name:Chōwa {Harmony} Harmony is a traditional Khakkhara. Otherwise commonly known as a Buddhist monk staff or Shakujou.

Weapon Type:Khakkhara
Weapon Location: Often Carried, If not attached to back.
Weapon Height/Length: 7 Ft
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Number of Rings: 8

Description: Chōwa is a Khakkhara passed down in Kyomei's family. It isn't by any means something that holds great significance in it's current state as there have been many Chōwa before it. The christening of the name given unto every Khakkhara in the family solely because it is a reminder to always follow the way of peace to achieve true happiness in life and that all things despite the good and the bad that occur in them remain in harmony despite what it may seem. When a Shrine Maiden or High Priest of her and many other families similar achieves a certain point in their life The Chōwa becomes something more.
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Enlightened Form:
Weapon Name: Keihatsu {Enlightenment}. When slammed a Chōwa becomes what Kyomei's family calls the Keihatsu or The Enlightenment. It signifies that the wielder has been given or found purpose in life. A Chōwa becomes a Keihatsu when slammed down forcefully and imbued with the wielders spirit. (5-Chakra Per Transition: This Consumes an Activation)
Weapon Type:Khakkhara
Weapon Location: Often Carried, If not attached to back.
Weapon Height/Length: 7 Ft
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Number of Rings: 8

Description: The Keihatsu emits a super natural glow, one that often synchronizes with the user's own chakra. Aside from this glowing the Keihatsu bares no other physical difference from it's previous form as a Chowa.

Ability Summary
►8 Ring Shattering:
Rank: X
Description: The Keihatsu's rings can separate themselves from the the staff they are attached to, they then grow up to an incredible size. Ranging up to Eight feet in diameter. The rings can be freely controlled by the wielder using the staff as a conduit to direct them. (5-Chakra Per Ring. A Total of 40 Chakra For 8: Rings must be sustained whilst in flight.) The rings are then often intended to place a target in their vacant center and contract immediately to restrict the target. If any of the rings are broken the remains turn into a ball of spiritual light and return to the staff as a normal sized ring and is placed in a temporary recovery period (1 Post). If the Keihatsu is ever disarmed all currently floating rings fall to the ground and return to their normal size. The rings can also be used in conjunction with Shakujou styles if logical. The weaponized rings strength is equivalent to the user's amounted expended for stamina with Formless Style: Shakujou.

►Sacred Detainment:
Rank: X {1-rank per Ring}
Type:Special-Fuuin (Special Meaning Fuuin Reductions do not Apply)
Element: N/a
Description: Strange Creatures or spirits with malicious intent when bound by the rings undergo an immediate binding. This seal is treated as an S+ seal if all 8 rings find a way to ensnare their target. The target that meets all the criteria 1User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.eing A Strange Creature 2:Harboring/Portraying Violent Tendencies cannot use any of their supernatural strength, skills, or powers, and effectively are stripped of all defenses up to the rank of rings used. Sacred Detainment then drains half said X-ranks worth of Chakra each post it is sustained. Sacred Detainment Does Work on Jinchuuriki but to a lesser extent only being treated as one X-ranked amount less and only stripping them of their [ Demon Techniques and Benefits ] equal to the amount of rings detaining them. Rings can be destroyed by an ability one rank higher than the X-rank of rings used or if there are three strength descriptives or higher when against a similar ranking technique.

►Edict of Purification:
Rank: X {1-rank per Ring}
Type:Special- Fuuin
Element: All
Description: When the Edict of Purification occurs the user stands still and begins reciting a mantra. As the Mantra progresses a ring will detach itself grow to it's maximum size and then portray the chinese or kanji symbol of an element. [1 Per Post ] The Elements are
火 [Ka] [Fire] : 風 [Fū] [Wind] :土 [Do] [Earth] : 雷 [Rai] [Lightening] : 水 [Sui] [Water]: 冥 [Mei] [Dark]: 光 [Kō] [Light]: 空[Kū] [Void]. The Mantra Must Be Sustained, Breaking of the mantra causes any rings at that point to fall pointlessly to the ground and return to the Keihatsu. The cost of this technique is progressive per post. [5], [10], [20], [40], [80], [160], [160], [160]. A Total of [640] by the final post. When the Mantra concludes the user spins their staff allowing for one final interruption and then slams it into the ground. All eight symbols glow with light corresponding to their elements fuse together into one giant ring that appears to be an eight sectioned circle with the symbol 真 [Shin] [Purity] in the center. A unfathomably powerful blast that could decimate an entire village if fired downward from the sky shoots forward. However, the beam inflicts no harm to anyone or any structure...unless it is a strange creature, impure of heart, tainted by evil, or wishes to do harm. The technique essentially, even then, does no damage, instead, it places a feeling of tranquility on all evil or violent intentions shutting them away briefly and crossing over any wayward spirits. The option for this technique to cause mass amounts of damage and destruction is possible but is considered Taboo in all accounts and doing so would destroy the weapon and make it's wielder unfit to ever wield another Keihatsu ever again. Even then, such is only achievable by tampering with the chanters rings discreetly carving [Shi] [Death] on each ring. Which no wielder could do themselves as it would make them unfit to wield the Keihatsu. This was only discovered when a former Keihatsu user asking for purity [Shin] to be engraved on the weapon by a blacksmith was accidently replaced with [Shi] the result was labeled in history as [The Black Tragedy]. While it's mark in history was minimal and the small settlement lost wasn't noteworthy the Keihatsu's capability of destruction was discovered that day and only the most heavily versed scholars are aware of it as even many who've unlocked the Keihatsu's abilities are unaware of this. Unfortunately devout historian's because of this are incredibly suspicious of all wielders of the Keihatsu.

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Kumotake Saisho: Weapon Slots : 1/1

Weapon Name: Hinekureta Ito [Perverse Thread]

Weapon Type: Unarmed
Weapon Location: Gloves
Weapon Height/Length: Fitted
Weapon Weight: 0.1 lbs

Description: Hinekureta Ito is a pair of black gloves. The emblem of a jagged spider sewn on the backsides while the palms contain what appear to be the equivalent of small hole like pores. The gloves when worn treat the wearer's hands as if they were complex for interactions with ninjutsu.The gloves allow interaction with chakra structures and the pores on the gloves themselves can produce threading from each fingertip. The threading can then attach to structures allowing them to be manipulated by pulling them. These threads are not unlike chakra threads in strength but are clearly visible. When finger tips are brought together the produced threads can fuse into one leading to garrote wire like executions.

Ability Summary:
►Feeding the gloves 10 chakra allows the users hands to interact with Ninjutsu and treats all physical skills using one's hands as complex for interactions. This does not consume an activation. Duration: (1 Post)
►Feeding the gloves an X-rank amount of chakra will produce wire like threads of equivalent strength.


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Tōsokurui Ashi Hojo: Weapon Slots : 1/1

Name: Modoru gōmō 戻る剛毛(Bristle Back)
Weapon Type: Brush+Varies
Weapon Range: 4-35 Feet
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped to Back.

Description: Upon achieving a more honed physical body Tōsokurui goes into great lengths to find the ideal brush. He finds this incredibly large brush at a shop known as Takumi not having been sold due to its unwieldiness. The brushes head itself is said to be malleable and can be molded by the users chakra into various shapes and sizes. Allowing a variation of large weapon Bukijutsu to be used assuming they're known. Among these being Staff, Polearms,Greatsword,Scythe,Whip and Lance while still retaining the benefits of a brush. The brushes bristles can be damaged, but the own users chakra can be poured into it to repair the brush head. However, this only applies to its bristles not the brush itself.

Ability Summary:
►Passively Modoru gōmō is treated as a brush even when it's form has shifted. Thus it can use ink and be utilized with the Kanboku style in tandem.
►Feeding Modoru gōmō 10 Chakra will change the tip of it's bristles into any form of weapon befitting of it's size. However, any style techniques still require said training to be used efficiently. Style techniques utilized this way aside from Kanboku are treated as one rank less powerful in strength taking into account the bristles are only an imitation and not the real thing. (This Consumes an Activation)




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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2016 9:56 pm

Character: Choumei Sue Akamichi
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Weapon Name: Houetsu no Kyouki [ Religious Exultation of Chivalrous Spirit ]
Weapon Type: Naginata/Base String Instrument.

Weapon Height: 80 inches or 6.6 Ft
Weapon Weight: 22Lbs

Description: Houetsu no Kyouki is a legendary weapon among shinto priest that was collected by a Akamichi clan head centuries ago. The weapon was said to be a tool for the spiritual cleansing of the soul used by presumably powerful Shinto priests or possibly priestesses, but the history remains vague. What is known by the Akamichi family is the legend of the holy warrior who slew and sealed away demons to cast them into the cleansing flames of Amatrasu. Thousands of fiends and wicked beast alike fell to this blade and were served to the goddess as tribute to bettering the nature of the world. Through its body, Amaterasu the sun goddess, granted it a cloth that could ward off any entity shrinking in fear of its light through the protection of it's sunlight sash that stretched as infinitely as the suns rays themselves. The wielder of this weapon was considered a herald of the goddess Amaterasu and with each act in its use they'd be working towards pleasing the wishes of the goddess, when working in the service of the Shinto faith.

Though not named after the goddess the weapon was believed to be a item based on the spirit of man and the goddesses respect for their resolve. From this relationship she bore a weapon that granted men of a chivalrous and just mind to wield it to slay any embodiment of evil or harmful intent, and they were considered judged by the goddess herself by these actions. Additions to its frame, such as a guitar strings worked onto the weapons frame were developed over time by the various hands it passed to. With each user different results have been fostered and the Akamichi known as Choumei has been the most recent "slayer" of evil from any of the users prior to her. Yet the item seems to fit her aesthetic, and though not being the one to add the musical feature of the strings to the weapon, she's certain she has a kinship with said individual. The charka steel blade was her only addition, though simple it was a fluent idea into the features of the weapon.

Ability Summary:
• Connected to the hilt of the blade down the staff are four chakra metal alloy strings that run along and around the staffs intricate design to work as base "guitar" strings from any angle. When strummed the vibrations create a piezoelectric energy that builds (mostly harmless for the user) and focuses into the blade. This energy increases the power of the chakra blade when taking on any elemental nature with an static surge added for one [1] attack per post, increasing the power by a descriptive rank by one-sixth [1/6] per post they were played without end or use, building to its height to a full ranks boost to the attack, other wise the attack can simply over power equal ranked ninjutsu and complex Tai/buki by the slightest margin. This energy will natural subside and disperses harmlessly into the atmosphere if the playing ends, taking as many turns as the build up took to ease off as well as going back down in its boost. This boost cannot exceed an S+-rank which has a recoil of paralyzing the user for one [1] turn. (note: this also works with other forms of chakra coating to boost their effect on the blade)
The strings produce a sound that can be heard clearly for a quarter mile on clear day.

• The blade is made of chakra steel and it can take on the elemental nature and effect of either of Choumei's elements. Once applied with any chakra enhancing blade technique (variable by style) it can be persisted as a supplementary effect, but as it is effected by other jutsu or leveled force it's power will diminish and will need to be reapplied [Comparatively losing one rank in energy after facing 1 jutsu growing weaker in grade of effective rank of power according to the jutsu used to apply the chakra, ex: B-rank Jutsu becomes a C rank after facing a B-rank kage bushin (which they all are since its a B-rank jutsu from start), this continues until an E-rank is diminished. ]. Allowing her ranked Bukijutsu techniques to match Ninjutsu techniques of the same rank, relatively making them complex and the base of the rank of stamina used can level the jutsu's for rank as long as as their is chakra that remains.


• Engraved along the blade is a unique scripture that dictates a primeval ward towards evil. This ward causes whatever the blade comes in contact with skin to lose ten [10] Stamina/chakra in equal portions per strike landed. This energy isn't just drawn out of the opponent but sealed into the weapon and projected from its other end in the form of a tangerine colored sash, named the "sunlight sash". This sash extends as it's charged with the chakra/stamina of the opponent and acts as a defense as it gains more energy it allows those who wrap it around their bodies (arm most likely) to gain increased physical resistance to physical harm as well as biological impairments. Yet this doesn't last infinitely and only activates when the sash is wrapped around someone.

    – This cloth looks like a bright sunny colored tangerine cloth that faintly glows and extends from the end of the staffs cap. The cloth can grow/retract infinitely as long as there is Chakra/stamina presently being stored in the weapon. This energy actively combats the force or pathogens of what might be aiming to harm the wielder or whomever they wrap the sash about. Expending a relative amount of Chakra/stamina per the ranked level of the attack or hazard. Yet this isn't the same as healing, as it does not seal wounds, but simply prevents them from occurring by warding them off. [The energy it can store is caped at S-Rank 160 Chakra/Stamaina respectively, and this is expended the moment it's forced to ward of an attack of a matching level to it's stores of energy.]

    – This sash in the hands of a Koton [Light Release] user gives their blinding techniques at +1 rank (and following the benefits of said boosts) in effect such as longer duration for blinding techniques.

 
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2016 1:18 pm

Character: Choumei Sue Akamichi
Link to profile: Link

Weapon Name: Houetsu no Kyouki [ Religious Exultation of Chivalrous Spirit ]
Weapon Type: Naginata/Base String Instrument.

Weapon Height: 80 inches or 6.6 Ft
Weapon Weight: 22Lbs

Description: Houetsu no Kyouki is a legendary weapon among shinto priest that was collected by a Akamichi clan head centuries ago. The weapon was said to be a tool for the spiritual cleansing of the soul used by presumably powerful Shinto priests or possibly priestesses, but the history remains vague. What is known by the Akamichi family is the legend of the holy warrior who slew and sealed away demons to cast them into the cleansing flames of Amatrasu. Thousands of fiends and wicked beast alike fell to this blade and were served to the goddess as tribute to bettering the nature of the world. Through its body, Amaterasu the sun goddess, granted it a cloth that could ward off any entity shrinking in fear of its light through the protection of it's sunlight sash that stretched as infinitely as the suns rays themselves. The wielder of this weapon was considered a herald of the goddess Amaterasu and with each act in its use they'd be working towards pleasing the wishes of the goddess, when working in the service of the Shinto faith.

Though not named after the goddess the weapon was believed to be a item based on the spirit of man and the goddesses respect for their resolve. From this relationship she bore a weapon that granted men of a chivalrous and just mind to wield it to slay any embodiment of evil or harmful intent, and they were considered judged by the goddess herself by these actions. Additions to its frame, such as a guitar strings worked onto the weapons frame were developed over time by the various hands it passed to. With each user different results have been fostered and the Akamichi known as Choumei has been the most recent "slayer" of evil from any of the users prior to her. Yet the item seems to fit her aesthetic, and though not being the one to add the musical feature of the strings to the weapon, she's certain she has a kinship with said individual. The charka steel blade was her only addition, though simple it was a fluent idea into the features of the weapon.

Ability Summary:
• Connected to the hilt of the blade down the staff are four chakra metal alloy strings that run along and around the staffs intricate design to work as base "guitar" strings from any angle. When strummed the vibrations create a piezoelectric energy that builds (mostly harmless for the user) and focuses into the blade. This energy increases the power of the chakra blade when taking on any elemental nature with an static surge added for one [1] attack per post, increasing the power by a descriptive rank by one-sixth [1/6] per post they were played without end or use, building to its height to a full ranks boost to the attack, other wise the attack can simply over power equal ranked ninjutsu and complex Tai/buki by the slightest margin. This energy will natural subside and disperses harmlessly into the atmosphere if the playing ends, taking as many turns as the build up took to ease off as well as going back down in its boost. This boost cannot exceed an S+-rank which has a recoil of paralyzing the user for one [1] turn. (note: this also works with other forms of chakra coating to boost their effect on the blade)
The strings produce a sound that can be heard clearly for a quarter mile on clear day.

• The blade is made of chakra steel and it can take on the elemental nature and effect of either of Choumei's elements. Once applied with any chakra enhancing blade technique (variable by style) it can be persisted as a supplementary effect, but as it is effected by other jutsu or leveled force it's power will diminish and will need to be reapplied [Comparatively losing one rank in energy after facing 1 jutsu growing weaker in grade of effective rank of power according to the jutsu used to apply the chakra, ex: B-rank Jutsu becomes a C rank after facing a B-rank kage bushin (which they all are since its a B-rank jutsu from start), this continues until an E-rank is diminished. ]. Allowing her ranked Bukijutsu techniques to match Ninjutsu techniques of the same rank, relatively making them complex and the base of the rank of stamina used can level the jutsu's for rank as long as as their is chakra that remains.


• Engraved along the blade is a unique scripture that dictates a primeval ward towards evil. This ward causes whatever the blade comes in contact with skin to lose ten [10] Stamina/chakra in equal portions per strike landed. This energy isn't just drawn out of the opponent but sealed into the weapon and projected from its other end in the form of a tangerine colored sash, named the "sunlight sash". This sash extends as it's charged with the chakra/stamina of the opponent and acts as a defense as it gains more energy it allows those who wrap it around their bodies (arm most likely) to gain increased physical resistance to physical harm as well as biological impairments. Yet this doesn't last infinitely and only activates when the sash is wrapped around someone.

    – This cloth looks like a bright sunny colored tangerine cloth that faintly glows and extends from the end of the staffs cap. The cloth can grow/retract infinitely as long as there is Chakra/stamina presently being stored in the weapon. This energy actively combats the force or pathogens of what might be aiming to harm the wielder or whomever they wrap the sash about. Expending a relative amount of Chakra/stamina per the ranked level of the attack or hazard. Yet this isn't the same as healing, as it does not seal wounds, but simply prevents them from occurring by warding them off. [The energy it can store is caped at S-Rank 160 Chakra/Stamina respectively, and this is expended the moment it's forced to ward of an attack of a matching level to it's stores of energy.]

    – This sash in the hands of a Koton [Light Release] user gives their blinding techniques at +1 rank (and following the benefits of said boosts) in effect such as longer duration for blinding techniques.



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2016 4:00 am


Character:Kyomei Nenemaru
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Weapon Name:Ten Juzu [ Heavenly Prayer Beads ]
Weapon Type: Bracelet

Weapon Height: Varies
Weapon Weight: Varies

Description: This string of decently sized thirty variable marbles is worn like a bracelet and much like those of Shinto priests harbors unique powers and striking similarities to the beads their monks wore. Ten Juzu has it's own chakra pool which consists of [10] chakra per bead for a total of [300] Chakra. The Ten Juzu draws from it's own chakra and it's effects cannot be triggered by the users own. The Ten Juzu recovers [30] Chakra per post within combat and [60] out of of combat. The Ten Juzu's Chakra Pool cannot be used by the user for their own personal techniques. Black Variable Marbles can be sacrificed to add to the size of the Ten Juzu.

Ability Summary:
• Kami no gakki [ Divine Instrument ]
Rank : X
Description : The Ten Juzu detaches itself and separates into each individual bead. They begin to circle the user in a ghostly supernatural manner. They then begin to steadily drain [5] Chakra from their pool over the course of their activation. The user can command the beads to attack as they take formations such as whips or firing off individually like bullets by expending [ x ] amount of chakra from the beads pool to determine their strength. When this effect is active the Ten Juzu do not regenerate Chakra.

• Shifuto seishin [ Shifting Spirit ]
Rank : C
Description: For [20] Chakra Ten Juzu will shift it's chakra affinity becoming any of the five main elements, for a duration of [5] posts. Usually used in conjunction with [ Kami no gakki ] This skills can also be used to increase the Ten Juzu's marble sizes to the size of fists.

• Fūdō [ Wind Tunnel ]
Rank : B
Description: The user opens the palm of their hands which holds the bracelet. For up to two posts anything not of this world below the listed rank is sucked in towards the user's palm and is wiped clean of existence either being exorcised or crossed over or in the case of small bits of rubble and twigs become disintegrated. Living creatures are instead pulled towards the user with a great force similar to having their very soul ripped from them. This covers an expansive area but doesn't usually cause destruction unless used negligibly. The monstrous force of the suction only applies to things that typically are considered to have a soul. The area behind the user is essentially wide open. If a person touches the palm the user can clench their hand locking them in position, and can then send them flying back from whence they came or up into the sky fifty meters with a fierce level of blowback as if having been part of a point blank explosion. Despite the overwhelming impact force the attack itself is non lethal and does no direct damage. While active Ten Juzu does not regenerate Chakra.

• Fūrinkazan [ Wind, Forest, Fire, Mountain ]
Rank : A
Description: The wielder begins to chant and will exclaim to the heavens "Fū-rin-ka-zan!" as four kanji glow individually in order beneath their feet each sporting different colors. This causes a fierce gale of wind, which then brings with it leaves like razors, which then after ignite into tiny flaming explosive bursts becoming ashes which lay on the ground to trigger a powerful earthquake like tremor. Despite all of that all four of the latter incidents do actually very little to negligible damage to an individual and the surroundings and are more or less nuisances than what could be considered attacks. Then with that ceremony complete, for until its use the user is cloaked in what seems to be a white hot holy flame and a menacing scowl. They may then deliver a punch that could level a large house and part the clouds with the arm the bracelet is on. The wind around them is constantly in motion, the ground beneath them seems to jiggle each pebble, the aura itself seems to emanate heat, and small things like branches, and twigs snap upon approach. However, despite it's seemingly tremendous power it's non-lethal. When struck an opponent is sent hurdling up to 100 meters away but are ultimately unharmed from the punch itself. Still it makes for a pretty convincing and somewhat terrifying scenario. While in this state the Ten Juzu does not regenerate Chara until the punch has been discharged.


 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2016 12:35 pm
NecroPlant
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Character:Kyomei Nenemaru
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Weapon Name:Ten Juzu [ Heavenly Prayer Beads ]
Weapon Type: Bracelet

Weapon Height: Varies
Weapon Weight: Varies

Description: This string of decently sized thirty variable marbles is worn like a bracelet and much like those of Shinto priests harbors unique powers and striking similarities to the beads their monks wore. Ten Juzu has it's own chakra pool which consists of [10] chakra per bead for a total of [300] Chakra. The Ten Juzu draws from it's own chakra and it's effects cannot be triggered by the users own. The Ten Juzu recovers [30] Chakra per post within combat and [60] out of of combat. The Ten Juzu's Chakra Pool cannot be used by the user for their own personal techniques. Black Variable Marbles can be sacrificed to add to the size of the Ten Juzu.

Ability Summary:
• Kami no gakki [ Divine Instrument ]
Rank : X
Description : The Ten Juzu detaches itself and separates into each individual bead. They begin to circle the user in a ghostly supernatural manner. They then begin to steadily drain [5] Chakra from their pool over the course of their activation. The user can command the beads to attack as they take formations such as whips or firing off individually like bullets by expending [ x ] amount of chakra from the beads pool to determine their strength. When this effect is active the Ten Juzu do not regenerate Chakra.

• Shifuto seishin [ Shifting Spirit ]
Rank : C
Description: For [20] Chakra Ten Juzu will shift it's chakra affinity becoming any of the five main elements, for a duration of [5] posts. Usually used in conjunction with [ Kami no gakki ] This skills can also be used to increase the Ten Juzu's marble sizes to the size of fists.

• Fūdō [ Wind Tunnel ]
Rank : B
Description: The user opens the palm of their hands which holds the bracelet. For up to two posts anything not of this world below the listed rank is sucked in towards the user's palm and is wiped clean of existence either being exorcised or crossed over or in the case of small bits of rubble and twigs become disintegrated. Living creatures are instead pulled towards the user with a great force similar to having their very soul ripped from them. This covers an expansive area but doesn't usually cause destruction unless used negligibly. The monstrous force of the suction only applies to things that typically are considered to have a soul. The area behind the user is essentially wide open. If a person touches the palm the user can clench their hand locking them in position, and can then send them flying back from whence they came or up into the sky fifty meters with a fierce level of blowback as if having been part of a point blank explosion. Despite the overwhelming impact force the attack itself is non lethal and does no direct damage. While active Ten Juzu does not regenerate Chakra.

• Fūrinkazan [ Wind, Forest, Fire, Mountain ]
Rank : A
Description: The wielder begins to chant and will exclaim to the heavens "Fū-rin-ka-zan!" as four kanji glow individually in order beneath their feet each sporting different colors. This causes a fierce gale of wind, which then brings with it leaves like razors, which then after ignite into tiny flaming explosive bursts becoming ashes which lay on the ground to trigger a powerful earthquake like tremor. Despite all of that all four of the latter incidents do actually very little to negligible damage to an individual and the surroundings and are more or less nuisances than what could be considered attacks. Then with that ceremony complete, for until its use the user is cloaked in what seems to be a white hot holy flame and a menacing scowl. They may then deliver a punch that could level a large house and part the clouds with the arm the bracelet is on. The wind around them is constantly in motion, the ground beneath them seems to jiggle each pebble, the aura itself seems to emanate heat, and small things like branches, and twigs snap upon approach. However, despite it's seemingly tremendous power it's non-lethal. When struck an opponent is sent hurdling up to 100 meters away but are ultimately unharmed from the punch itself. Still it makes for a pretty convincing and somewhat terrifying scenario. While in this state the Ten Juzu does not regenerate Chara until the punch has been discharged.



I'm going to go ahead and deny this one for a couple different reasons. First being the creation of variable marbles. As it stands the process of creating marbles requires at least a B ranked body.

Second standing is, almost every process you listed here is possible just through regular creations of marbles. From them providing a jutsu pool, activations marbles, to using techniques, E-rank marbles (which can be powered up to hold higher level techniques).

As it stands, most of these, while you cannot currently make them, can be purchased in Takumi and connected via an appropriate trade (tailoring to thread them together.)  

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2016 2:07 pm
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Character:Nakicho Genshukuna
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Weapon Name:Ōkabamadara Hirahira [ Fluttering Monarch Butterfly ]
Weapon Type: Katana

Weapon Height: 2.5 ft
Weapon Weight: 0.1 lbs

Description:Ōkabamadara's main selling point is it's incredibly light creation. It allows for the blade to be sheathed and unsheathed with little to no effort. It's secondary feature is its uncanny ability to slice through objects with surgical precision and ignoring their hardness with its unfathomably sharp edge of pure condensed chakra. Floating like a Butterfly and Stinging like a Bee Ōkabamadara Hirahira is not to be underestimated. It's trump card is allowing its user a brief few moments of flight.

Ability Summary:
• Ōkabamadara may store up to an S-ranks worth of Chakra. This Chakra is used for its inherent [Break] ability and it's [Flight] ability only.
• Ōkabamadara's incredibly lightweight treats all techniques used in conjunction with it as [mildly] faster.
• Ōkabamadara's incredibly lightweight allows it to escape from disarm attempts and locking attempts easier reducing the stamina required to escape/evade these situations by [2] ranks.
• Ōkabamadara's incredibly thin and heavily condensed chakra imbued edge allows it to cut through any unattended object with little to no effort. A [Break] attempt occurs when Ōkabamadara makes contact it's [Break] equivalent to the rank of the technique or techniques being used up to the amount of the stored condensed chakra inside. In the event of a custom weapon or armor being used the [Break] will not induce staggering effects as something normally would when colliding with an unbreakable object with great force.
• Ōkabamadara may confer the same effects as the Ninjutsu [Solo Flight] by expending the equivalent amount of chakra. This effect manifests itself by transferring the chakra to the user and manifesting as a pair of butterfly wings. As a result Ōkabamadara loses its [Break] ability for the duration.
 
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