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PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2021 11:09 pm
Backup Performance: Allows Ito to use her Susano'o as a trigger for her Genjutsu


Character: Ito Hoshi
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Susano'o Rampage
Category:Enchantment
Rank: S
Primary Sense: Sight
Additional Senses: Chakra Sense, Touch
Base Duration: 15 Posts
Upkeep: 40 Chakra
Trigger: Handseal
Source: Touch Phantasm
Status Effect: Mental Stress
Description: Once this Genjutsu is triggered, it will appear as if Ito summons her Susano'o. If her Susano'o is already summoned then the Genjutsu goes forward. Ito will cast the black flames of Amaterasu as spikes that stab into the target from every angle, pushing them up from the ground until they are hanging in the air. Ito will use the scythe on her Susano'o to disembowel or dismember her target. Wounds inflicted in this manner will heal while inside the Genjutsu, allowing for repeated torture. This Genjutsu inflicts Tiered Mental Stress and is immune to the pain release version of Kai. Due to the usage of Amaterasu in this Genjutsu, the target will suffer from Tiered Burning until the Genjutsu is Kai'd from

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2021 11:13 pm
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Approved.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 6:14 pm
jake23482
The only thing I won't allow for this is changing the stamina to chakra for grappling. The rest seems fine though.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2021 5:29 am
Brooy
jake23482
The only thing I won't allow for this is changing the stamina to chakra for grappling. The rest seems fine though.


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Fixed it. Since it's already petrifying/tenketsu-rotting. You're right. Stamina based breaking seems totally fine.


Character: Koharu Ichikaru
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Petrified Wood Style : Fossil Coffin [ Kodai-no-Kiton: Kaseki-Kan ] | Rank X | Bloodline [ Petrified Wood ]|[ Spiritual ]
Koharu can cause her lithified wood chakra element to slither up from the ground onto her target. The chakra continues to move and envelope them slowly. As the stony wood encases the target, it begins to replace the organic material in the target's body with minerals, capable of rapid fossilization. If the wielder takes two posts to set up the technique for one combat action each then the chakra can encase the whole body and deal [1] tier higher of full-body petrification based on rank. The other method is the faster but less effective option of using one post to grip only a single limb and apply petrification of equivalent tier to the rank of the coffin.
Note: As a Petrified Wood Jutsu it applies Tenketsu Rot based on Rank [According to Petrified Wood Manipulation's Chart]. It's Cost cannot be Reduced by any means. - If the target is grappled by Penitent Snare or another Petrified Wood Jutsu the post prior to this jutsu, it is considered the first post in the two post set up for this technique.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2021 10:36 pm
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I'll edit in Japanese names at some point, probably when I add them to my profile.
--- Uh, mind the Miyuki profile link. She's Seiryu right now, but I'd like to respec to Void if these can get passed.

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Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Monochromatic Dreamscape | Rank B-S+ | Bloodline [Ink] / Human Sage Keystone | Spiritual
Wispy ink flows from Miyuki from any method (paint brush, mouth, simply manifested from her body) but it seems to expand beyond its volume due to the potency of the human sage chakra contained in it. The ink is initially like a phantasm, moving through all people and weapons and other entities in order to coat the battlefield (entire topic). The entire environment is rendered black and white. There is nothing visibly hidden to those inside the topic. The prowess of Evergreen enables Miyuki's ink to function as a great equalizer, neutralizing many combat elements to render the environment a new natural state. Aesthetically, all techniques performed, once leaving the body of its user (if applicable), are rendered grayscale, except any Rainbow Ink techniques from Miyuki (or another Ukyo if learned from Miyuki).

• No chakra can be expended in this area. Chakra already in existence when this technique activates remains, but those that are optionally extended by a renewed/upkeep cost are unable to be extended because the cost cannot be paid. Bijuu forms, sage modes, curse marks, golden dragon seals, and summons remain, but no chakra can be utilized. As such, only simple tai/bukijutsu or basic combat strikes can be utilized.
All overwhelming is negated.
• Lasts for one post cycle at B, two at A, 3 at S, and 5 at S+.
• Technique usage can be divvied up across rank durations but cannot exceed [6] posts total.

• [ Vantablack Assassin PA ] All sensory techniques fail outside the topic to sense within the topic. (Of course, because the ink covers the entire environment, this complete lack of sensory feedback will alert sensors to something being amiss.)

Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Reflection | Rank X | Bloodline [Void] / Bloodline Keystone Augment | Spiritual
Void release techniques absorb status effects of one technique they move through, not impacting the rank or resource of the opponent's technique. As a bloodline specialist, the second effect is that the next bloodline technique that Miyuki uses will inflict those status effects. The technique absorbs all the status effects of one technique and adds them all to one casted technique. The cost of this technique is paid when the ability is used on a bloodline technique Miyuki casts, at the rank of the absorbed technique, but the jutsu whose status effects are absorbed is stated when absorbed.

Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Iridescent Ink | Rank C | Bloodline [Ukyo] | Spiritual [ Augment ]
Miyuki's artistic vision doesn't exclusively incorporate black ink. This blend of ink incorporates Miyuki's innate chakra manifestation (iridescent in color) and furthers the vantablack assassin pa, meaning ink creations of this variety are visibly rainbow/iridescent but they can't be sensed by any form of active or passive sensory chakra/technique. As such, infinite perception's dodge reduction is negated, and all similar functions based on sensory are negated. Again, these creations are visible to the naked eye, but chakra-sensing of the doujutsu or sensory or sage or other variety receive no information.

Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Phantasm Ink | Rank C | Bloodline [ Ukyo ]| Spiritual [ Augment ]
This ink blends Ukyo and Void chakra perfectly, a love letter to Miyuki's heritage. This ink is black, with the slightest glow like void chakra. If you stare at it long enough, you can nearly see wispy, nearly formless movement within. This ink moves quickly because the void chakra within allows it to move with Miyuki's will as much as her brush or fingers. This rapid movement allows this type of ink to be utilized in the heat of combat. Thus, using this ink allows the Ukyo to paint in the middle of combat more easily and negates Ukyo bloodline techniques that offer a disadvantage for doing so.

Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Mark of Silence | Rank X | Bloodline [ Ukyo ] | Spiritual
All allies bearing Miyuki's ink, or affected by her void release, can be rendered intangible for one post using this technique. The rank of the technique is dependent on how many allies are being put into this intangible state. Allies can reject this intangibility, which refunds the chakra expenditure to Miyuki. However, allies that accept it are able to pass through jutsu coming their way for their post; like void release, though, these allies are unable to generate offensive jutsu during this post where they can traverse through jutsu and physical obstacles. This ability can be used no more than three times in battle, and costs one rank per ally, starting at D.
 
PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2021 8:25 am

Character: Achana Sonozaki
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Mind Crush: Thousand Eyes [ Kokoro Oshitsubusu: Sen no Me]
Category: Enchantment [Genjutsu Specialist Keystone]
Rank: X
Primary Sense: Sight
Additional Senses: Sound, Touch, Chakra, Smell
Base Duration: 4 Posts
Upkeep: 5/10/20/40/80/160 Chakra [Based on Rank Technique was used at]
Trigger: Eye Contact [Sakkakugan, Byakugan, or Sharingan/Their Evolved States]
Source: Visual Phantasm
Status Effect: Mental Stress
Description: The caster of the enchantment looks at their foe with their Doujutsu Activated. If eye-contact is established, the target begins to feel immediately as if they are being watched from all sides. Constantly under the scrutinizing gaze of the caster, no matter which way they look. Though, in reality they are simply staring right at the user of the technique, unable to look away. This causes the afflicted to begin to feel paranoid, making it harder for them to focus. The number of eyes and the severity of the paranoia are based on the rank of the jutsu. This creates a possible fear and uncontrolled muscle reaction that inflicts Paralysis based on the rank of the technique.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 05, 2021 4:42 pm

Character: Zaishin noMachigai
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                        ▰ Description:
                        While the art of quick draw is a known style by plenty others, this style specifically is unique to Machigai in it's use. As opposed to the normal, single sword quick draw Machigai combined it with the use of his 5 katana, allowing him to combine the art of quick drawing and rapidly switching which of his swords he is using on a moments notice.

                        ▰ Notes:
                        •Due to the nature of this style, for narrative purposes certain movements executed from techniques can not be seen. However techniques of this style may always be reacted to regardless.

                        ▰ Style Creation Credits:
                        • Ichengo Angelus


Stage One

                        Five Sword Iai Stance | Rank E | Simple
                        The user of this technique takes a stance where their upper body is slightly lowered, their non-dominant hand grasping the sheaths just below the hilt of their five katana, and their dominant hand hovering over the hilts ready to grasp any of the five katana. Bukijutsu Techniques activated from this stance are executed at +1 Speed , and the blade used is returned to it's sheath regardless of if the attack successfully hits, is blocked, or is dodged giving the user the appearance as if they never moved.

                        Twin Strike | Rank X | Simple
                        The user of this technique will execute a slashing blade strike that looks as if it is one blade strike. However it is actually two strikes from two separate blades where the first is executed quickly enough that the blade is returned to the sheath and another is drawn to execute the second strike. This technique is executed at +1 Speed, and if the first strike hits the second strike also hits.


Stage Two

                        Shredding Strike | Rank X | Spiritual
                        The user of this technique will cover their blades in chakra, then quickly unsheath and resheath them while striking at an oncoming strike or chakra construct in order to shred and destroy it.

                        Forward Motion Strike | Rank X | Simple
                        The user of this technique executed Shunshin level speeds in order to move quickly behind their opponent. During this motion the user may use a striking bukijutsu technique without using an activation. The rank of this technique must be greater than or equal to the rank of the striking technique used during this technique. This technique consumes a shunshin activation for combat.


Stage Three

                        Tri-Strike | Rank X | Simple
                        The user of this technique executes three strikes in three different locations from three different blades within one second. The effectiveness of this technique is determined by the combat situation. When used against a single opponent each strike is considered the power rank of this technique as only one strike may hit a single opponent, in combat with multiple opponents each strike is 1/3rd as effective as the power rank of this technique. An opponent can only ever be hit by one of the three strikes from this attack.

                        Fissure Ripping Strike | Rank X | Complex
                        One of the only techniques that only uses a single blade from this style, the user will cover their blade in chakra and then quickly unsheath and swing their blade vertically beginning from below, then resheath it just as quickly. The strike executed sends a wave of chakra through the ground ripping the ground open. The ground is always ripped 10 feet apart, however the length of the fissure created is 5 feet per rank of this technique used. The wave of chakra does no damage however the strike itself may.


Stage Four

                        Quad-Strike | Rank X | Simple
                        The user strikes at each of an opponent's limbs with different blades within the time it takes for a single strike. If the opponent's limbs are struck by this technique a cripple effect is applied to them based off the rank of this technique. Cripple is simply Paralysis. E-B is Tier 1 Paralysis A-S+ is Tier 2 Paralysis. This cripple effect lasts 2 posts.

                        Multi-Buki Strike | Rank B | Training
                        The user's training has allowed them to learn to incorporate multi attacks into their other bukijutsu. When using a striking sword based bukijutsu the user may use the exact technique again for no activation happening at the same time as the first technique. This can only be done once per 3 posts.



Stage Five

                        Quint Strike | Rank X | Complex
                        The user covers their blades in chakra then strikes with all five blades in the time it would normally take to strike with one. Each blade releases a crescent wave of chakra that is 10 feet in length, and each blade is either above or below another giving the waves of chakra an almost claw like appearance as they fly through the air. They can travel up to 10 feet per rank used.

                        Harmless Stance | Rank A | Simple
                        The user takes on a stance which looks as if they're completely unaggressive. However from the stance they remain capable of executing techniques to catch their opponents off guard. Bukijutsu Techniques executed from this stance are harder to dodge, by 5 resource per rank of the technique in question. This increase is applied after reductions.



Stage Six

                        Star Point Strike | Rank S-S+ | Spiritual
                        The user of this technique will cover their blades in chakra, they will then slash each blade in a different way, but as if they were drawing a star on a paper easily. The air in front of the user has a star shape for a moment then the chakra star shape travels forwards for 100 feet at S rank or 150 feet at S+ Rank. The star is 10 feet from it's highest point to lowest point and farthest right point to farthest left point. The user's movements when doing this are fast enough that it appears almost as if the star appears from nothing.

                        Unending Onslaught | Rank S+ | Complex
                        This technique uses all three activations of a post and lasts the entirety of the post. It may be paid in cost again next post and continue. The user unleashes an onslaught of strikes continuously from each of their five blades. Constantly moving towards their opponent while doing this. For the duration dodging is impossible, if the user is forcible stopped by an opposing technique their activations and chakra are not refunded in anyway. When activated the cost for this technique is paid 3 times for one post.

 
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2021 8:20 am

Character: Koharu Ichikaru
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Sage Art: Lifestream Manifestation - Evergreen Rampart [ Senjutsu : Raifusutorīmu Kengen - Joryoku Joheki] | Rank B-S+ | [Crystal-Mokuton] [Human Sage Keystone]| Cost [ Spiritual ]
Upon activation of this technique; Koharu can harness the raw lifestream energy of the planet to instantly create a crystalized fortress wall of pure Nature-Chakra infused Shoton in front of her which then quickly expands covering [30] + [10] per Rank above B] Feet Across and [150]Feet tall. It stands as a tall wall of jade that takes the impact of an attack. This shields her and anyone else that stands behind it from the force, diverting all shockwaves and air-pressure around it with a safe zone directly behind the wall. Being comprised of a mixture of her unique bloodline combination and the pure energy granted to her by her goddess, Evergreen, in this Sage Mode... it is extremely dangerous to the touch, and particularly effective against the unnatural.
- Spiritual Attacks of Equal or Lesser Rank that impact the wall are Crystalized as per Shoton Rules and lose "Overwhelming" against this technique.
- Simple/Complex Tai/Buki Techniques of equal or lesser rank are blocked and it applies Tenketsu Rot [20 for B-Rank, 35 for A-Rank, 50 for S-Rank, 70 for S+] to the limb/weapon hand that struck it. [They can avoid the Tenketsu Rot by immediately Spending Chakra equal to the rank of the barrier]
- Attacks using Demon Chakra or Curse Seal Corrupted Nature Chakra are treated as 1 Rank Lower for purposes of this shield's defense.
- Simple/Complex Tai/Buki Attacks using Celestial Chakra or Nature Chakra ignore the tenketsu rot part of contacting the shield, but are still blocked. Spiritual Attacks are still crystalized.
- This Shield takes 1 Offensive Action and 1 Defensive Action to Cast; Against multiple attacks in a post; The user can spend Chakra and each additional Defensive Action granted by Swarm rules to defend against them, provided the first technique, and any subsequent technique, against it did not break the barrier.



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2021 10:49 am
▰▰▰ Mee [Greenman] User Image
Rank D | Chakra: 800 | Stamina: 300
Str: 0 | Spd: 0 | Agi: 2 | End: 0

Mee is a Greenman sprite, a special yokai of nature in service to the Goddess Evergreen. Greenman, in particular, are attuned to the spiritual flow of nature and are often the unseen carriers of seeds. They often are tasked with planting new plants at night and leaving as stealthily as they came. Their body is composed of green leafy buds on a skeleton made of sticks. Mee sports a lilypad hat and two floral eyes. He has a cute tail of twin leaves and wears a small Tanigakure headband plate that he merged into his body (Given to him by Koharu as a sign of their bond). Greenmen are tiny, and Mee is no exception, standing at a meer 10 inches tall.

Ability: Nature Provides
When Mee is summoned as part of a Toxicology, Pharmacology, or Medical Career mission; He provides the summoner with needed herbs and plants to complete their task without requiring them to go search for them by simply growing the needed items from his body. This reduces the overall paragraphs required per missions in those areas by 1 [Minimum 1]

Toxic Bloom | Rank: D | Cost Chakra.
Mee sprouts a purple flower with green spots, and then blows it at his target, causing the petals to scatter. These petals produce a toxic pollen, that if inhaled, begins to tax one's chakra reserves and drain their stamina, making them progressively more and more lethargic. [Drains 10 Chakra and Stamina per Post until Cured.]

Purifying Bloom | Rank: D | Cost: Chakra
Mee sprouts a yellow flower with white spots, and then blows it at an ally, or eats it himself. The spores contained on the petals remove 1 status effect of a poison the target is suffering from. In addition, they provide a minor adrenal boost, preventing the recipient of the blooms from being afflicted by the removed status effect from the same poison for 1 post.

Life Seed | Rank: C | Cost: Chakra
Mee gathers up chakra before spitting up a green bean-like seed. He then takes and projects it into his target's mouth or lets it absorb into the skin via contact with an injury. The seed will sprout once it makes contact with the injured, and vine-like regeneration occurs; Any stamina lost through trauma of tier one or two is automatically restored to the patient. - If used on the uninjured, they are granted a slight boost to their [+2] Strength for 2 Posts.


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Koharu used Scroll Crafting for her D-Rank Custom summon. Wasn't sure where to post this, so threw it here. Since there's not a topic for custom summons.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2021 4:07 pm

Character: Gea Hatake
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Purifying Lightning | Rank S | Hatake/Bloodline [ Raiton ]| Supplemental [ spiritual ] [ She'll get this when she becomes part of TORO ]
After becoming part of the TORO and handed the lantern, Gea studied for nights and days. She was able to change her lightning color and purpose, when it strikes the target of Yokai they will suffer tier 2 burns. If it hits a human, they will experience tenketsu rot where the bright white lightning has struck.

Conduction plants | Rank B | Bloodline [ Mokuton/Raiton ]| Supplemental [ spiritual ]
The dual lineage Gea holds has brought her to evolving her clan abilities to work in tandem. Using an active wood technique or remaining wood/plants on the battlefield, Gea can promote their creation of moisture, allowing her to cast a Hatake technique through the wood as if conducted through the water. Gea needs only pay the cost of this technique and requires no additional action on top of the Hatake technique she channels. In addition to its other effects, Wood techniques that actively sustain that this jutsu is used one inflict tier 2 drench to those struck the round this is used on said wood technique.

Cistren's Man Tracking | Rank B | Sensory [ Suiton ]| [ Spiritual ]
By channeling her chakra through the active field of the illustration grid, she becomes able to use the rains to detect any disruptions in its flow to locate people’s positions or the like, one person in a single topic or group may be tracked in a given topic accurately as a result of this, able to discern any and all chakra signatures in its area of effect. This jams opposing sensory jutsu by applying tier 2 jamming. Outside of the village, this technique has a reduced range down to a 40ft radius (not including Discipline range increase.)

Sky Sector Sphere | Rank A | Sensory [ Suiton ]| [ spiritual ]
Gea uses the water from within or around the Amegakure to manipulates it into a clear sphere of water. Using this sphere she can create a three-dimensional map of the topic she is within when within the rain village (when used outside its range limited by rank and bonuses.). This sphere pinpoints the chakra signature of Yokai entities and those who carry bloodlines or special chakra types for it detects that which is unnatural from the norm, though only differentiates if they are human or Yokai. While inside the village she may change which topic is being viewed once a post as part of sustaining the technique, the technique lasts 4 posts before costing an upkeep two ranks below casting and requires action and hand to maintain. (If this jutsus topic wide range within the village is considered unreasonable, the range will fit a A-ranked sensory jutsus.)

Massive Thank you to Prince for helping me with this!!


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2021 3:27 am
Brooy
Keisei is an inking method which inherently doesn't use activations but it takes two activations one for molding and the other for rank in collisions. So essentially yes. One act could be spent making something huge but in turn a simple kunai could pop it or vise versa.

Ika-henge suffers I suppose from old termi because half is what the rank difference is between rank 160 S is half of 320 S+ assuming the rest are fine I will now proceed with phase two. But one new custom for now. 60+ more to think about later.


▰ Getaway Ink: Act of Deviancy [ Tōsō inku: Itsudatsu kōi ] | Rank: C | Bloodline [ Hojo ]
An extension of the parent technique Getaway Ink. By imposing an additional C-rank cost to a technique the user can have the portion of themselves they have submerged in the ink appear in a similar colored area within the limitations of Getaway ink. Essentially this allows partial bodily transportation such as limbs to appear in a distant location without the caveat of consuming a shunsin for full transportation.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2021 3:49 pm

Character: Hokinsha
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Insect:Bug blade trappings | Rank E - B | Bloodline [ N/A ]| Insect [ Spritual ]
When using techniques involving throwing and projectiles she can use a special breed of insect she cultivated called “Blade bugs” for simplicity. These insects form together and go inert which makes them incredibly solid, taking in the shape of a wanted weapon, Hokinsha able to pay up to a B-rank quantity of her insects for each projectile she uses for no action, allowing her to stealthily apply her insects to the battlefield in the form of weapons which can come apart to be used for an insect technique at any time. An opponent unable to defend one of these weapons will be harmed like normal and immediately set upon by the insects, additionally having the ranked amount of chakra drained. These weapons don’t give off chakra until the insects cease to be inert and go into action.



Character: Hokinsha
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Insect:Blade bugs | Rank X | bloodline [ N/A ]| Passive [ Spritual ]
A special form of insect Hokinsha has created that have a similar appearance to dark, metallic moths. Despite this appearance these insects are incredibly hard and powerful for their size, wings like razors and their limbs so strong that parting two from one another requires immense strength. Despite being a special insect she can always access them as she always needs to have an active lineage of them or the will go extinct. These insects act like normal but have the additional trait of being able to damage equipment each post they reside on it and if managing two posts of damage to a special weapon they are able to inherit its traits, requiring two steps of damage to gain the stat bonus and elemental value of said weapon if it has any, then the abilities of the weapon after a third application of damage. If she forms or reforms a weapon with said blade bugs the weapon will then carry the abilities that were replicated, the insects able to replicate the chakra normally used with the weapon and therefore able to use any of its abilities until combat ends. The creation of blade bugs requires her pay a rank beneath the jutsu cast in additional insects to a minimum of 5, this is due to blade bugs size, this can also be paid in chakra to force a low number to breed. Blade bugs that are a part of her own custom weapons may retain their normal custom abilities on top of the stolen ones, however a single weapon created from blade bugs may only hold a single stolen weapons abilities, meaning that if two weapons were degraded then she could make weapons with their traits separately but not one weapon with all the traits.




Character: Hokinsha
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Sonic release:Rejection | Rank X | Bloodline [ Speed/Sonic ]| Cost [ Complex/spiritual]
This technique can be paid for and used as either spiritual or complex. In its spiritual form she may raise a hand into the path of a chakra based technique and just as it would touch her, she implants an equal amount of speed chakra that the cast technique and forcibly accelerates it in an alternate direction, usually back into the target. This prevents her from suffering harm from the attack but will take any non trauma oriented status affect on the palm of that hand as she still makes contact no matter how minute. In its complex form it is an attack involving placing the flat of her hand against an opponent and unleashing a blast of sonic chakra through a localized part of their body, this accelerates only the area contacted away from her hand at high speeds, dragged by the force of this attack and sensing to opponent flying away 5ft per rank. Her current speed is used as opposed to strength and the opponents endurance is ignored due to the main amount of the techniques damage being internal, this technique is one that someone should dodged as using a weapon to block it means the weapon would instead be accelerated and the instant her hand makes contact the chakra is released. Opponent sent flying by this technique are normally sent flipping from the sudden acceleration of only part of their body, forcing the rest of them to get dragged with. (I may split this into two separate jutsu in need be.)



Character: Hokinsha
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Insect:Hidden arrival | Rank X | Bloodline [ N/A ]| Passive [ Spritual ]
Giving a command to a group of her insects Hokinsha may always at the beginning of combat release up to S+ rank quantity of insects secretly into the environment for no activation, usually climbing out of her pants legs or into shadows, burrowing and travelling through cracks and coverage to stay hidden. At any point in combat they may be called upon to reveal themselves for use in an attack, this allows the jutsu used to have its insects paid for by the ones on field and makes the opponent unable to avoid the sudden surprised attack, requiring the opponent fight of and destroy the insects to defend themselves from the used jutsu.




Character: Hokinsha
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Touch of plague | Rank B | Medical [ N/A ]| [Tai/Buki augment [ Spritual ]
Suffering from a viscous virus like affliction that’s eats chakra and organic matter that she can push into being active and inactive Hokisha can always pay a B-ranked amount of chakra in a round she performs non spiritual Tai/buki-jutsu techniques, exacerbating her symptom by kicking her virus into becoming more active and transmissible through physical contact. This kicks her passive tier 1 disease into tier 2 for the rest of combat, this techniques cost ignoring the increase from her own disease status. This causes her to give off a wave of infectious air around her while fighting that coats her person and weapon, making it so that a person who makes contact with her catches her diseases, causing five posts of Tier 2 Disease and trauma as a result. this can only be applied once per target and unless the opponent parries with a weapon or blocks with Medium or greater tier armour they will conduct this disease, meaning parrying with a weapon or dodging is required to evade catching this disease, medics able to simply pay the cost of this techniques and no action to protect themselves if they aware of it. People made aware of this affect can also pay the cost to protect themselves, however require someone of medical nature to make them properly aware, this technique is most dangerous when used defensively. Curing the disease status cures the trauma status of this jutsu and protects them for a full additional round for being able to contract it.

 

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2021 6:48 pm
jake23482
Petrified Wood Style : Fossil Coffin is approved.
Mind Crush: Thousand Eyes is approved.
Sage Art: Lifestream Manifestation - Evergreen Rampart can't get rid of overwhelming.
Toxic Bloom needs a duration and you need to define what 'curing' is in this technique.
Purifying Bloom can only removed up to T1 status effects.
Life Seed is approved.



ghostfinch
Monochromatic Dreamscape. I don't really like the getting rid of overwhelming all together. It also can't be topic range at the B and A rank version of it. Those are my main gripes.
Reflection can't be stacked. So you can't like just keep absorbing status effects until you give someone 10 T4 statuses.
Iridescent Ink is approved for now.
Phantasm Ink is fine for now. I'm going to read Ukyo more to understand what the implications of this technique are.
Mark of Silence is approved.


Ichengo Angelus
Quick Draw is approved.



Jenni Deer
Purifying Lightning is approved.
Conduction plants is approved.
Cistren's Man Tracking regardless of the illusion grid, this can't have a topic wide range unless it's a higher rank.
Sky Sector Sphere is approved.


NecroPlant

Getaway Ink: Act of Deviancy is approved.


Prince_yureil
Insect:Bug blade trappings is approved.
Insect:Blade bugs is not gonna be able to replicate the abilities of another weapon. Maybe with an addendum of only one ability of the weapon.
Sonic release:Rejection can't simultaneously be complex and spiritual. It's two techniques from what I can tell. I also don't like the idea of it ignoring endurance entirely.
Insect:Hidden arrival needs an activation.
Touch of plague quote me when you first use this.
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2021 8:42 pm
Brooy
Changed as discussed!

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Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Monochromatic Dreamscape | Rank B-S+ | Bloodline [Ink] / Human Sage Keystone | Spiritual
Wispy ink flows from Miyuki from any method (paint brush, mouth, simply manifested from her body) but it seems to expand beyond its volume due to the potency of the human sage chakra contained in it. The ink is initially like a phantasm, moving through all people and weapons and other entities in order to coat the battlefield (entire topic). The entire environment is rendered black and white. There is nothing visibly hidden to those inside the topic. The prowess of Evergreen enables Miyuki's ink to function as a great equalizer, neutralizing many combat elements to render the environment a new natural state. Aesthetically, all techniques performed, once leaving the body of its user (if applicable), are rendered grayscale, except any Rainbow Ink techniques from Miyuki (or another Ukyo if learned from Miyuki).

• No chakra can be expended in this area. Chakra already in existence when this technique activates remains, but those that are optionally extended by a renewed/upkeep cost are unable to be extended because the cost cannot be paid. Bijuu forms, sage modes, curse marks, golden dragon seals, and summons remain, but no chakra can be utilized. As such, only simple tai/bukijutsu or basic combat strikes can be utilized.
• Lasts for 4 post cycles at B, 5 at A, 6 at S, and 8 at S+.
• Technique usage can be divvied up across rank durations but cannot exceed [9] posts total.

• [ Vantablack Assassin PA ] All sensory techniques fail outside the topic to sense within the topic. (Of course, because the ink covers the entire environment, this complete lack of sensory feedback will alert sensors to something being amiss.)

Character: Miyuki Ukyo
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Reflection | Rank X | Bloodline [Void] / Bloodline Keystone Augment | Spiritual
Void release techniques absorb status effects of one technique they move through, not impacting the rank or resource of the opponent's technique. As a bloodline specialist, the second effect is that the next bloodline technique that Miyuki uses will inflict those status effects. The technique absorbs one status effect of one technique and adds them to one casted technique. The cost of this technique is paid when the ability is used on a bloodline technique Miyuki casts, at the rank of the absorbed technique, but the jutsu whose status effects are absorbed is stated when absorbed.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2021 10:51 am
jake23482

Character: Koharu Ichikaru
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Sage Art: Lifestream Manifestation - Evergreen Rampart [ Senjutsu : Raifusutorīmu Kengen - Joryoku Joheki] | Rank B-S+ | [Crystal-Mokuton] [Human Sage Keystone]| Cost [ Spiritual ]
Upon activation of this technique; Koharu can harness the raw lifestream energy of the planet to instantly create a crystalized fortress wall of pure Nature-Chakra infused Shoton in front of her which then quickly expands covering [30] + [10] per Rank above B] Feet Across and [150]Feet tall. It stands as a tall wall of jade that takes the impact of an attack. This shields her and anyone else that stands behind it from the force, diverting all shockwaves and air-pressure around it with a safe zone directly behind the wall. Being comprised of a mixture of her unique bloodline combination and the pure energy granted to her by her goddess, Evergreen, in this Sage Mode... it is extremely dangerous to the touch, and particularly effective against the unnatural.
- Spiritual Attacks of Equal or Lesser Rank that impact the wall are Crystalized as per Shoton Rules.
- Simple/Complex Tai/Buki Techniques of equal or lesser rank are blocked and it applies Tenketsu Rot [20 for B-Rank, 35 for A-Rank, 50 for S-Rank, 70 for S+] to the limb/weapon hand that struck it. [They can avoid the Tenketsu Rot by immediately Spending Chakra equal to the rank of the barrier]
- Attacks using Demon Chakra or Curse Seal Corrupted Nature Chakra are treated as 1 Rank Lower for purposes of this shield's defense.
- Simple/Complex Tai/Buki Attacks using Celestial Chakra or Nature Chakra ignore the tenketsu rot part of contacting the shield, but are still blocked. Spiritual Attacks are still crystalized.
- This Shield takes 1 Offensive Action and 1 Defensive Action to Cast; Against multiple attacks in a post; The user can spend Chakra and each additional Defensive Action granted by Swarm rules to defend against them, provided the first technique, and any subsequent technique, against it did not break the barrier.



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