Character: Musunde "Soraru" Hiraite Link to profile:[x]
Weapon Name: Reito-kumo Weapon Type: Katana and scabbard.
Weapon Height: 32" blade, with the hilt being 10". Weapon Weight: 3.7lbs.
Description: With every new heir to the Iron country, a treasure is bestowed by the current lord. While it may be an object of vanity to some, for Soraru, it's the only memory he has of a time when he really understood his father. The katana blade his father once used religiously, tempered and repaired time and time again through various means to create a weapon with incredible durability, permanently etched with his fathers Yoton chakra as well. The name of the blade comes from a story, where its said that his fathers childhood friend flew the man into the sky during a battle with a rogue Shinobi force. As they were above the clouds, both held onto the hilt of the sword with one hand. The friend infused the weapon with Hyouton chakra, while Soraru's father used an extended form manipulation to make a humongous horizontal slash through the sky which froze the very clouds, and sent them crashing onto the enemy, winning the battle.
About 40% of the blade is pitch black, from the tip to near the center, said to have gotten that way from channeling the searing hot chakra of Takahiro Hiraite. In reality it's just that the blade continued to break off there from repeated use of the scabbards "burst" ability, so it was inevitably just reinforced there with koton to withstand the impact and not break. Those areas, and the more fragile ridges of the blade which shatter from the use of the helmet splitter technique have been reinforced to withstand nearly anything, leading to the look of black veins lining the rest of the silvery steel of the blade. The hilt is made of metal, though it's wrapped over with hardened lava to form a rubbery substance that can both absorb and dissipate force nicely. At the end of the hilt, the pommel looks like two crescent moons facing opposite of each other. The scabbard of the blade is dark and with a completely steel exterior. The decoration is of an icy blue full moon, with frozen clouds surrounding it at the end of it, while near the hilt side are the three wolves mountain. When the blade and scabbard meet, the katana becomes super heated from the ever present yoton chakra inside. It meets the steel like a close brother and they embrace, causing the silvery steel to become a scarlet red from the heat.
Ability Summary: • Passive: Synergy- The blade has been with Soraru through a lot, enough so that it has melded with his chakra as well as his fathers. Chakra signs can be weaved through holding the weapon, though still needs time to form the jutsu accordingly.
•Passive: Birthright - Due to the blood of Takahiro Hiraite in his veins, Soraru maintains some modem of control when it comes to Yoton, though it's not nearly as proficient as someone with less diluted blood. This only takes hold when he grasps his weapon, and it allows him to create and manipulate lava around the darkened parts of his blade. More importantly, it lets him enhance the blade with extreme heat rather than chakra when it comes to chakra scabbard techniques. Requires [ 10 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Passive: Will of Iron - When performing blade manipulation through either Form Manipulation or Ronin spirit, Soraru has the option to infuse his chakra into his creation. Merely results in razorwinds surrounding the creation or large amounts of water to form, depending on the size of it. Costs 5 chakra for the inclusion of one element, and 10 for both of them. Requires [ 20 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Ability: Burst Rank: B Description - This ability comes into play when Soraru has been in the air for at least two posts. After absorbing a steady dose of atmosphere, the user has the option to make a scabbard completely out of wind in the off-hand. Upon sheathing the blade in the scabbard, it results in a loud whistling sound, similar to a tea kettle, due to the high wind speeds passing through the holes in the blade. When the blade is drawn from the wind scabbard, it results in a powerful strike aided in strong force from Fuuton. Strikes from the scabbard results in high wind speeds following attacks, making swirling attacks result in small, uplifting whirlwinds around him, or straightforward strikes applying heavy knockback due to the wind force behind them. Said winds don't deliver strong cuts. but rather several tiny ones on contact, likely leaving the clothing of opponents in shreds after a couple of attacks. Soraru can keep these attacks going for three posts before needing to use another sheathe.
• Passive: Stronger Dose of Atmosphere - A small ability, but necessary to name all the same. If the scabbard from "burst" is formed in the presence of a lightning storm, said scabbard becomes infused with it. It results in the usual wind effects having a slight touch of lightning to them. Getting hit by the lightning sparks in the wind force results in some electric burns and cramping of the muscles in the area of impact. A direct strike from the blade can lead to temporary paralysis through full body cramping, and a large amount of pain. Requires [ 30 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Ability: Exile of the Sky Rank: D Description - When Soraru infuses the blade with his fuuton chakra, the pommel flies open, and a massive amount of wind flows out from there to carry Soraru in the opposite direction, following the blade tip in terms of direction. This can either result in a speed enhancement for a cut, a way to knock enemies away with several cuts on their person, or a short lived mode of transportation. The longer Soraru pours his chakra there, the more unstable it gets, resulting in unstable flight if he's using it to get himself from one place to another. Starts at D, then continues to grow in chakra cost, increasing a rank for every turn that the ability remains active.
• Ability: Scarring the Skies Rank: B Description - Soraru clears the surrounding five meters of air for a moment with a strong horizontal strike that mixes with his natural Fuuton affinity. Following the strike, wind suddenly pulls back into its natural place, pulling everything around to the center point, which is about one foot in front of himself. With that done, a followup strike is done by pivoting on a foot, spinning, and coming around with another vertical strike leading into a diagonal upwards arch which could very well tear an opponent in two, or shatter multiple ribs while sending them up and away into the air from the force of the blow. This is a two part technique, requiring two separate posts to pull off fully. It costs a B-rank amount of chakra to pull off.
• Ability: Tool of the Trade Rank: X Description - There are three holes in the blade of the weapon. Two near the base, one atop the other, and another around four inches down from the tip. These produce different musical notes, which depend on the speed and direction that the weapon is swinging in. This allows him to perform a fair bit of Performer's Genjutsu with his Emotional Content discipline just through normal swordplay, while of course being aware of the notes he's using. Paying a C rank amount of chakra allows him to channel Fuuton through the holes, and result in the note made to reach its highest octave in the swing, getting louder depending on how much momentum is putting into the movement of the blade. This effect lasts for four posts. Increasing to a B-rank amount of chakra allows the sound to reach max intensity within three meters, rather than while only being directly beside the blade. As long as it's Soraru's chakra and he's the one holding the hilt of the weapon, the sounds don't effect him nearly as much.
Character: Musunde "Soraru" Hiraite Link to profile:[x]
Weapon Name: Reito-kumo Weapon Type: Katana and scabbard.
Weapon Height: 32" blade, with the hilt being 10". Weapon Weight: 3.7lbs.
Description: With every new heir to the Iron country, a treasure is bestowed by the current lord. While it may be an object of vanity to some, for Soraru, it's the only memory he has of a time when he really understood his father. The katana blade his father once used religiously, tempered and repaired time and time again through various means to create a weapon with incredible durability, permanently etched with his fathers Yoton chakra as well. The name of the blade comes from a story, where its said that his fathers childhood friend flew the man into the sky during a battle with a rogue Shinobi force. As they were above the clouds, both held onto the hilt of the sword with one hand. The friend infused the weapon with Hyouton chakra, while Soraru's father used an extended form manipulation to make a humongous horizontal slash through the sky which froze the very clouds, and sent them crashing onto the enemy, winning the battle.
About 40% of the blade is pitch black, from the tip to near the center, said to have gotten that way from channeling the searing hot chakra of Takahiro Hiraite. In reality it's just that the blade continued to break off there from repeated use of the scabbards "burst" ability, so it was inevitably just reinforced there with koton to withstand the impact and not break. Those areas, and the more fragile ridges of the blade which shatter from the use of the helmet splitter technique have been reinforced to withstand nearly anything, leading to the look of black veins lining the rest of the silvery steel of the blade. The hilt is made of metal, though it's wrapped over with hardened lava to form a rubbery substance that can both absorb and dissipate force nicely. At the end of the hilt, the pommel looks like two crescent moons facing opposite of each other. The scabbard of the blade is dark and with a completely steel exterior. The decoration is of an icy blue full moon, with frozen clouds surrounding it at the end of it, while near the hilt side are the three wolves mountain. When the blade and scabbard meet, the katana becomes super heated from the ever present yoton chakra inside. It meets the steel like a close brother and they embrace, causing the silvery steel to become a scarlet red from the heat.
Ability Summary: • Passive: Synergy- The blade has been with Soraru through a lot, enough so that it has melded with his chakra as well as his fathers. Chakra signs can be weaved through holding the weapon, though still needs time to form the jutsu accordingly.
•Passive: Birthright - Due to the blood of Takahiro Hiraite in his veins, Soraru maintains some modem of control when it comes to Yoton, though it's not nearly as proficient as someone with less diluted blood. This only takes hold when he grasps his weapon, and it allows him to create and manipulate lava around the darkened parts of his blade. More importantly, it lets him enhance the blade with extreme heat rather than chakra when it comes to chakra scabbard techniques. Requires [ 10 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Passive: Will of Iron - When performing blade manipulation through either Form Manipulation or Ronin spirit, Soraru has the option to infuse his chakra into his creation. Merely results in razorwinds surrounding the creation or large amounts of water to form, depending on the size of it. Costs 5 chakra for the inclusion of one element, and 10 for both of them. Requires [ 20 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Ability: Burst Rank: B Description - This ability comes into play when Soraru has been in the air for at least two posts. After absorbing a steady dose of atmosphere, the user has the option to make a scabbard completely out of wind in the off-hand. Upon sheathing the blade in the scabbard, it results in a loud whistling sound, similar to a tea kettle, due to the high wind speeds passing through the holes in the blade. When the blade is drawn from the wind scabbard, it results in a powerful strike aided in strong force from Fuuton. Strikes from the scabbard results in high wind speeds following attacks, making swirling attacks result in small, uplifting whirlwinds around him, or straightforward strikes applying heavy knockback due to the wind force behind them. Said winds don't deliver strong cuts. but rather several tiny ones on contact, likely leaving the clothing of opponents in shreds after a couple of attacks. Soraru can keep these attacks going for three posts before needing to use another sheathe.
• Passive: Stronger Dose of Atmosphere - A small ability, but necessary to name all the same. If the scabbard from "burst" is formed in the presence of a lightning storm, said scabbard becomes infused with it. It results in the usual wind effects having a slight touch of lightning to them. Getting hit by the lightning sparks in the wind force results in some electric burns and cramping of the muscles in the area of impact. A direct strike from the blade can lead to temporary paralysis through full body cramping, and a large amount of pain. Requires [ 30 ] posts with the blade on person to learn.
• Ability: Exile of the Sky Rank: D Description - When Soraru infuses the blade with his fuuton chakra, the pommel flies open, and a massive amount of wind flows out from there to carry Soraru in the opposite direction, following the blade tip in terms of direction. This can either result in a speed enhancement for a cut, a way to knock enemies away with several cuts on their person, or a short lived mode of transportation. The longer Soraru pours his chakra there, the more unstable it gets, resulting in unstable flight if he's using it to get himself from one place to another. Starts at D, then continues to grow in chakra cost, increasing a rank for every turn that the ability remains active.
• Ability: Scarring the Skies Rank: B Description - Soraru clears the surrounding five meters of air for a moment with a strong horizontal strike that mixes with his natural Fuuton affinity. Following the strike, wind suddenly pulls back into its natural place, pulling everything around to the center point, which is about one foot in front of himself. With that done, a followup strike is done by pivoting on a foot, spinning, and coming around with another vertical strike leading into a diagonal upwards arch which could very well tear an opponent in two, or shatter multiple ribs while sending them up and away into the air from the force of the blow. This is a two part technique, requiring two separate posts to pull off fully. It costs a B-rank amount of chakra to pull off.
• Ability: Tool of the Trade Rank: X Description - There are three holes in the blade of the weapon. Two near the base, one atop the other, and another around four inches down from the tip. These produce different musical notes, which depend on the speed and direction that the weapon is swinging in. This allows him to perform a fair bit of Performer's Genjutsu with his Emotional Content discipline just through normal swordplay, while of course being aware of the notes he's using. Paying a C rank amount of chakra allows him to channel Fuuton through the holes, and result in the note made to reach its highest octave in the swing, getting louder depending on how much momentum is putting into the movement of the blade. This effect lasts for four posts. Increasing to a B-rank amount of chakra allows the sound to reach max intensity within three meters, rather than while only being directly beside the blade. As long as it's Soraru's chakra and he's the one holding the hilt of the weapon, the sounds don't effect him nearly as much.
Description: The Umbra Blade is best described as a very ornate, slightly oversized greatsword. The blade is sixty inches in length and runs from the pommel cap down through the hilt making it a full tang down to the point of the blade. The cross guard is a grand total of ten inches wide, with four inches in each side and a two inch section in the center between the two to mount it. The ends are tapered upwards slightly to allow an easier time catching and blocking incoming strikes. This curve also directs the strikes towards the center of the blade and makes it easier to then counter attack. The blade itself starts out at four inches wide and one inche thick with a concave grind on the edge and a hollow fuller to keep the blade light but still exceptionally sharp. There are two medallions in the center of the blade mounted into the fuller. The first at the halfway point, and the second six inches from the tip of the blade. The first is embossed with a symbol of Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto and the second is embossed with a simple moon pattern. These gold medallions offer a stark contrast to the blackened, acid etched, Damascus pattern of the dark bluish black color. This method of polishing and forging respectively gives the blade the look of a weapon that fell from the night sky.
The origin of the Umbra Blade is actually unknown to Yasu as it simply appeared in his room one night while he was working in Takumi. The truth of its existence is much more mundane in that it was simply an order he had placed with the smith while he was sleep walking, which he often does these days. Regardless of where it actually came from, Yasu believes that it is a gift from his god Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto.
Ability Summary: • Fade To Black: (active) Once the Umbra blade is drawn and the appropriate amount of chakra is poured into it, it casts an area of effect genjutsu on anyone and everyone who sees it. This genjutsu is of a rank equal to the amount of chakra poured into it. D=D, C=C and so on. As such it follows the rules of the genjutsu sytem for breaking genjutsu. During the first two posts under the influence of the genjutsu the victim sees the color slowly fade from their vision until the world is black and white. Once this stage is reached the second stage begins. Over the course of the next three of the victims posts the victim starts to loose their sight from the edge of their vision progressing inwards. At the third post the victims sight is entirely gone as all they can see is one black mass without shape or definition.
• Touch of Darkness: (passive) If at any time the Umbra Blade touches a person directly, irreverent of armor, they are placed under the same effect as the Shadow Imitation Technique, following all relevant rules and systems of the jutsu. Requires a C rank chakra charge.
• Soul Bound: (passive) This blade, regardless of its origins is something that is truly meant for Yasu and is an extension of himself and his abilities in every regard. As such any bukijutsu used with this weapon are treated as bloodline moves and follow all relevant rulings and modifications regarding bloodline jutsu.
• Shadow Dragons Bite: (Active) After concentrating his kageton chakra into the blade Yasu will then thrust the blade forwards, or deliver it through a vertical slash. Upon either motion the kageton chakra will leap from the blade and travel in the direction of the slash/thrust. This chakra become a coiling torrent of black chakra whos rotation results in the front of the mass taking on the appearance of a dragons head. Aside from carrying quite a large amount of momentum, it also is quite sharp and is able to easily inflict grievous wounds upon a victim if struck directly in the chest with this move. The direct ranking of this jutsu and thus the damage it causes is directly related to the amount inserted into the blade.
(Notes) The chakra to use fade to black and the chakra to use shadow dragons bite must be inserted separately. As such one insertion of chakra cannot be used to charge both attacks. Furthermore both attacks cannot be used in the same post.
The process of inserting chakra into the umbra blade consumes an activation and cannot be done ahead of time to side step this as the blade cannot hold chakra very well. (chakra inserted into the blade must be used within five posts of the insertion or its bled into the area harmlessly)
Anyone introduced to the effects of Fade To Black, that breaks out of said ability, are unable to be placed back in the jutsu until chakra is reinserted into the blade again. It is important to know that doing so causes anyone else who is currently under the effects of the jutsu to have their effects delayed a post. It is also important to note that this jutsu is incredibly hard to detect until its effects become more dramatic. As such it cannot be broken out of by anyone of a lower body rank than him during their first post of being under its effects.
Fade to black requires twenty[20] posts of use before it can be used.
Shadow Dragons Bite must be trained before using. This training treated as a B rank bloodline move.
Description: The Umbra Blade is best described as a very ornate, slightly oversized greatsword. The blade is sixty inches in length and runs from the pommel cap down through the hilt making it a full tang down to the point of the blade. The cross guard is a grand total of ten inches wide, with four inches in each side and a two inch section in the center between the two to mount it. The ends are tapered upwards slightly to allow an easier time catching and blocking incoming strikes. This curve also directs the strikes towards the center of the blade and makes it easier to then counter attack. The blade itself starts out at six inches wide and two inches thick with a concave grind on the edge and a hollow fuller to keep the blade light but still exceptionally sharp. There are two medallions in the center of the blade mounted into the fuller. The first at the halfway point, and the second six inches from the tip of the blade. The first is embossed with a symbol of Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto and the second is embossed with a simple moon pattern. These gold medallions offer a stark contrast to the blackened, acid etched, Damascus pattern of the dark bluish black color. This method of polishing and forging respectively gives the blade the look of a weapon that fell from the night sky.
The origin of the Umbra Blade is actually unknown to Yasu as it simply appeared in his room one night while he was working in Takumi. The truth of its existence is much more mundane in that it was simply an order he had placed with the smith while he was sleep walking, which he often does these days. Regardless of where it actually came from, Yasu believes that it is a gift from his god Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto.
Ability Summary: • Fade To Black: (active) Once the Umbra blade is drawn and the appropriate amount of chakra is poured into it, it casts an area of effect genjutsu on anyone and everyone who sees it. This genjutsu is of a rank equal to the amount of chakra poured into it. D=D, C=C and so on. As such it follows the rules of the genjutsu sytem for breaking genjutsu. During the first two posts under the influence of the genjutsu the victim sees the color slowly fade from their vision until the world is black and white. Once this stage is reached the second stage begins. Over the course of the next three of the victims posts the victim starts to loose their sight from the edge of their vision progressing inwards. At the third post the victims sight is entirely gone as all they can see is one black mass without shape or definition.
• Touch of Darkness: (passive) If at any time the Umbra Blade touches a person directly, irreverent of armor, they are placed under the same effect as the Shadow Imitation Technique, following all relevant rules and systems of the jutsu.
• Soul Bound: (passive) This blade, regardless of its origins is something that is truly meant for Yasu and is an extension of himself and his abilities in every regard. As such any bukijutsu used with this weapon are treated as bloodline moves and follow all relevant rulings and modifications regarding bloodline jutsu.
• Shadow Dragons Bite: (Active) After concentrating his kageton chakra into the blade Yasu will then thrust the blade forwards, or deliver it through a vertical slash. Upon either motion the kageton chakra will leap from the blade and travel in the direction of the slash/thrust. This chakra become a coiling torrent of black chakra whos rotation results in the front of the mass taking on the appearance of a dragons head. Aside from carrying quite a large amount of momentum, it also is quite sharp and is able to easily inflict grievous wounds upon a victim if struck directly in the chest with this move. The direct ranking of this jutsu and thus the damage it causes is directly related to the amount inserted into the blade.
(Notes) The chakra to use fade to black and the chakra to use shadow dragons bite must be inserted separately. As such one insertion of chakra cannot be used to charge both attacks. Furthermore both attacks cannot be used in the same post.
The process of inserting chakra into the umbra blade consumes an activation and cannot be done ahead of time to side step this as the blade cannot hold chakra very well.
Anyone introduced to the effects of Fade To Black, that breaks out of said ability, are unable to be placed back in the jutsu until chakra is reinserted into the blade again. It is important to know that doing so causes anyone else who is currently under the effects of the jutsu to have their effects delayed a post. It is also important to note that this jutsu is incredibly hard to detect until its effects become more dramatic. As such it cannot be broken out of by anyone of a lower body rank than him during their first post of being under its effects.
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XAyame_HatakeX
going to approve this unless there are any objections.
Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2016 1:08 pm
Character: Jovian Nameless Link to profile: Currently Still under Approval
Weapon Name: Haizearen! (( Hai-Zea-Ren )) - Fists of the Storm Weapon Type: Cestus
Weapon Height: 2.5ft - covers her fists up the the middle of her arm Weapon Weight: 10 lbs total
Description: Jovian recieved these after her caravan pooled money together to get them crafted for her. They got them to resemble eagle heads on the end of her fists. her name is inscribed on each beak.
Ability Summary: • They have to be trained to be worn (( like the Taijutsu has listed )) • It takes atleast 2 sentences to be equipped, then they are ready for use. • Once equipped, her physical strikes are strengthened mildly • They channel Fuuton chakra relatively easy, they have the ability to strike through Doton Jutsu if the user has trained in the Hard Physical Formless Style.
Weapon Name: Unmei no Akaito (Red String of Fate) Weapon Type: Accessory
Weapon Height: not relevant Weapon Weight: not relevant
Description: Unmei no Akaito can refer to either the ever-growing collection of accessories or a single piece from that collection. Collectively, Unmei no Akaito is known as the Akaito set for short. Individually, the Unmei no Akaito can be shortened to an Akaito accessory. Each piece of the Akaito set is unique in design but all are inset with a small, red gem and are intended to be worn either through or around a part of the body (e.g. piercing, necklace, ring, bracelet, anklet).
The purpose of the Akaito set is to strengthen Xion's connection, for the purposes of her Seirei no Hogosha bloodline, to those who are willing to connect with her. The signature red gem of the Unmei no Akaito is intended to hold her chakra and each accessory of the set has been crafted to be able to not only hold the chakra but use it as a link back to Xion. Xion can resonate her Akaito accessory with others that contain her chakra. As the accessory either completely wraps itself around or goes straight through a part of the wearer's body, the resonance makes it easier for Xion to connect with others who wear an Akaito accessory that is linked to her chakra and lets her do more with the established connection.
Xion's Akaito accessory is a gold ear cuff earring that extends from a little below her ear lobe to halfway up her ear. It's simple in design, which is to say that it has none. Xion wouldn't even know where to begin describing the kind of design she would like to see because she can't. She can't see. She's blind. All she wanted was something sturdy for her ear, which she figured was the safest spot for an item, and she let the smith decide what to do with that. The smith's interpretation, and what Xion gets, is literally just a gold band that covers the front and back edge of the ear and is held to the ear by a couple piercings. The signature small, red gem of the Akaito set is set into the earring at the ear lobe.
Ability Summary: • Bond - To activate an Akaito accessory, Xion has to establish a bond using her chakra. Bonding an Akaito accessory to her network requires her to invest 5 chakra and stamina. As long as the Akaito accessory remains linked to her, Xion is considered to have lost that 5 chakra and stamina from her maximum pool. To create a bond, Xion needs to be in direct physical contact with the accessory. • Release - Akaito accessories are linked until Xion wants them otherwise. Time and distance do no matter. When Xion wants to end a bond, she can finish it with just a thought. Releasing a bond restores the 5 chakra and stamina Xion sacrificed from her max pool when she established the link. Xion does not need to be in contact with the accessory to end the link. • Mukei Enko contact+ [ Spiritual Connection contact+ ] - An activated Akaito no Unmei, because it is linked directly to her chakra, can take the place of Xion's touch so long as she can sense them in some way, be it physical, spiritual, or chakra. Furthermore, the body of anyone wearing an Akaito no Numei and connected to Xion via Mukei Enko can act as her body. What they come into contact to, she can choose to be considered to have come into contact with as well. She can also choose to use their body as the origin point for her techniques and skills. • Mukei Enko range+ [ Spiritual Connection range+ ] - Those wearing the Akaito no Unmei have two sets of maximum ranges for Xion to connect with using Mukei Enko, of which the largest is taken as the effective maximum range. The first range is the default range of the connection, two miles not including any extensions. The second range is the range of Xion's senses, including chakra sensing. If she can sense a bearer of the Akaito no Unmei, then she can connect with them. • Mukei Enko spirit+ [ Spiritual Connection spirit+ ] - Those who bear an Akaito accessory activated by Xion and can be sensed by her have a spiritual connection strong enough to convey thoughts through. This, essentially, functions as telepathic communication limited in content only to what those communicating can think of.
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XAyame_HatakeX
Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 12:27 pm
Lanfaer
Made some quality of life changes, most of these I already talked to you about, and is basically a nerf from the weapon's original form that I thought would be necesary. The new additions are full counter (unlocked once the sword has sealed away 1,000 chakra, twice) and guard break (unlocked once the blade has sealed away 1,000 chakra three times). Shock Therapy was renamed, given a cost, and moved from an innate skill of the weapon to the first locked skill, I also played around with the costs, increasing most of them (Stone Will increased from 10 Chakra to 15, Iron Rush increased from 0 of the sword's chakra to 50, and from 20 of the user's chakra and stamina to 35)
Description: Kodokumaso is a black blade most likely forged of Iron Sand by the first member of House Storn, Akura Storn himself. The blade is laced with his chakra and is the Storn Family’s most prized possession. It is the strongest of the family’s three treasured weapons, the other two being Iron Decree and the fabled, and long lost, Mantle. Upon first being drawn by a member of the Storn family, the weapon communes with them, giving them access to the knowledge of all who came before him who also wielded the sword, revealing to them the powers each individual endowed onto it, but upon being discovered in the wreckage of the Storn family lands, Axel only finds unlocked the passive abilities the forger of the blade, Akura, bestowed upon it, utilizing the two elements that make up the Iron Sand, as well as an active ability which gave the weapon renown. Additionally, the weapon also comes with his father’s signature ability. All of this comes with the prize that Kodokumaso brings upon its user, and that is that upon the blade being that once the blade is drawn the chains that bind the blade to the sheathe wrap around the user’s arm and begin to sap one’s life force until the wielder is killed, the opponent is killed, or chakra is sealed by the Devour ability. To those that can sense emotions and such, Kodokumaso feels like a zone of negative energy, upon being drawn, both blade and user feel inherently hostile, even toward allies.
Ability Summary: • [Passive] To Devour the World: Kodokumaso has the ability to seal chakra within itself, giving it a chakra pool all of its own, from which the user can draw if need be. This pool does not regenerate and can only be increased with the Devour technique. Kodokumaso is first found with a pool of 0 Chakra. Additionally, should the wielder run out of stamina while using the blade, they are sealed away by it and are effectively dead. Every 500 chakra that is sealed the strength or speed all physical attacks done with Kodokumaso are slightly increased. Every 1000 chakra, Kodokumaso can consume the chakra to unlock a new ability. The weapon can only store up to 1000 chakra, when one of these two abilities are used, the chakra is released.
• [Passive] Stone Will: While wielding Kodokumaso, all techniques that do not come from Kodokumaso itself cost 15 extra stamina, but have their power moderately increased.
• [Active] Iron Rush: Kodokumaso is transformed into pure lightning chakra and is fired in a straight line that travels for 50 ft. If it comes into contact with any living being, it takes damage from the bolt and the wielder of the blade is transported 5 feet from the struck target. Costs 50 chakra from the blade, and 35 chakra and stamina from the wielder; the damage from the lightning is treated as B rank. This is treated as a bukijutsu technique.
• [Active] Devour: Kodokumaso’s main ability, by adding one’s energy to the blade, the user swings it, creating a vortex that seals chakra directly into the blade. The vortex is as long as the stroke of the blade and twice as wide in all directions. When interacting with an opposing technique, the wielder must pay the equivalent amount of the technique’s cost in stamina to be able to seal the chakra away. In the case of it being used to seal an individual, stamina must be paid equal to that individual’s body’s rank. The individual is then sealed within the blade until the user choses to release them; upon being released, they come out with 1 Chakra point and unconscious. Up to three people can remain within the blade at a time. Using Devour consumes all of the posts activations.
• [Locked - Passive] Shock Therapy: Upon coming into contact with a target, Kodokumaso releases a shock of lightning chakra, the lightning spreads from the initial target to all of those within a 15ft area except the wielder of the sword. This is considered a physical technique. The damage from the lightning is treated as D rank if the technique is simple and increases the cost by 5 chakra, if it’s a complex technique, the lightning is treated as a C rank and the technique’s cost is increased by 10 chakra.
• [Locked – Active] Full Counter: A Deadlier alternative to Devour, Full Counter is a defensive technique whose purpose is to return a jutsu back to its original caster. The user stabs Kodokumaso forward while having the blade charged with just enough chakra and energy to overpower the incoming attack, but not to disperse it. Instead, the force behind the stab pushes the technique back to its point of origin, or wherever the blade is facing. The cost for using this technique is the original cost of the technique split in half for chakra and stamina, + 5 of each. (If it’s a C rank technique, the user would pay 15 chakra and stamina to return or redirect it. This is treated as a bukijutsu technique.
• [Locked – Active] Guard Breaker: An overall simple technique that has a great levels of power behind it. Typically, a downward slash charged full of the user’s energy and chakra as well as all of the chakra stored inside of the weapon. The power of the attack depends on the amount of chakra stored in the weapon; it cannot be used if Kodokumaso has less than 100 chakra. •100 chakra: The attack ignores all descriptive bonuses of the defending move and individual. •250 chakra: The attack ignores all descriptive bonuses of the defending move and individual, it’s treated as having a supreme bonus in strength and speed. •500 chakra: The attack ignores all descriptive bonuses of the defending move and individual. At this point it has been known to send shockwaves strong enough to slice rocks metal up to ten feet away in a straight line. Every 100 chakra the blade has after this point increases the power and reach of the shockwave, capping at 100 feet with enough force to slice a mountain in half at 1000 chakra. It is at this point that both Guard Breaker and the shockwave can cut clean through Black Steel, a Madokishi user’s shield and a Seidaru Oodachi’s blade.
I reserve the right to overlook this again, because a lot of these powers will need to be field tested before I can completely accept them. Once field tested, if proven to be not so bad, I will accept without reservation.
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:29 am
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Character: Kisuke Shinsetsu Link to profile:
Weapon Name: Lostvayne Weapon Type: Falcata
Weapon Height: 23 Inches Weapon Weight: 4 pounds
Description: This blade sat alone in the blade shops shelf, the owner did not allow anyone buy it or touch it. That was until Kisuke walked into the shop and walked by the blade. He stopped and looked at the blade. He felt a strange sensation and stood in a daze. The shop keep noticed what was going on and walked over. Once he got closer he could also feel something going on. He knew this blade was reacting to its true owner. He told Kisuke he would give it to him for free, he would need time to prepare it. The handle of the blade appears to be a dragon with ruby red eyes and made from some green substance that fits perfectly in his hands.
Ability Summary: • Chakra Capacity: The blade holds 4k of any mixture of Chakra and Stamina, extra chakra is processed into the infinity seals. excess stamina is held for up to 3 posts then released harmlessly if not used. • Revenge Counter: Any techniques that is used against the user or in his vicinity if it is blocked or countered 50% of the chakra/stamina that was used in the technique is residually absorbed by the blade. • Full Counter: Any technique that strikes Kisuke without any defenses 100% of the techniques chakra/stamina is absorbed by the sword. Damage is still done as normal to Kisuke. • Release Counter: Kisuke can unleash stored chakra into a null element blast of chakra. He can use this to counter attacks aimed at him. *Techniques countered or blocked in this fashion do not residually get reabsorbed into the sword that would be OP
Weapon Height: .25 inches x .25 inches x 1.5 inch Weapon Weight: .6 grams
Description: Essentually a grouping of 3 capsule types have been custom ordered by Elizabeth through a contact. They are to be used with existing uhv technology, specificly the uhv semi-automatic kunai launching device and the dart version of the semi automatic injection sniper. These capsules have set effects listed below and can be loaded into the device 12 at a time. One activation per shot is needed however they are propelled by very small chambers filled with an inert but pressurized gas, when used with a sidearm. Each pull off the trigger fires at most, 1 capsule, meaning a maximum of two can be fired per turn. The capsules can be fitted with hardened tips when penetration is required before activation.
Ability Summary: Micro-Flak Capsules • The tin projectile has an explosive tag inside it. Upon impact with the target, the explosive tag is set off and the tin is decimated into shrapnel, leaving less burns behind but many tiny bits of sharp, jagged metal embedded into the impacted surface. Same damage as an explosive tag but with a 'slightly' descriptive rank decrease to the impacted area. However a "slight:" bleed effect is applied for every piece of shrapnel said to hit the target by the victim.
Entrapment Capsules • A user of the Kumonenkin [ Spider Sticky Gold ] technique gave a sample of the liquid form to the black market representative and their chemical specialist was able to inject another liquid into the mixture to cause the original fluid to expand rapidly when exposed to air, while not impeding the hardening property from taking place. The result is a liquid that hardens to the strength of steel, without the weight, and with more mass due to expanding up to four-times the original amount. • Upon impact, the tin projectile splits at the seam, and the liquid inside begins rapidly expanding and hardening. It takes a solid five seconds to finish expanding and hardening. It will break under B-Ranked stamina attacks and C-Ranked chakra attacks, though will only break the area of impact. However, a D-Ranked fire attack will cause it to become soft enough to be scrapped off but will harden back to its original property. It will naturally degrade in a week. Any joints hit by this would be considered immovable.
Fuuin Capsule • An empty, tin shell. It is inscribed with the same type of Fuuin as a sealing symbol. Due to its size and lack or proper way to reinforce the tin, any jutsu placed on it will have its effect lessened. Only 'attack' jutsu will be taken in by the Fuuin and their damage will only effect the area of impact. Upon impact, the tin's seams will split, and the seal will break, releasing the jutsu. Any jutsu with lasting effects (beyond physical damage) will be cut in half.
5,000 for 50 Concussive 3,750 for 50 Entrapment 1,900 for 50 Fuuin
Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:49 pm
『 ♔ 』 "The Half-Blood Prince"
Holy Rinaku
• Micro-explosives? When did this guild allow and advance to the point of 'micro-explosives'? Unless you can point me to where the approval of this is, I would flat out deny it. This guild is already leaving its base roots so far behind that soon no-one will bother with learning jutsu at all.
• Why C-rank physical damage? What are these capsules made of to be so dirt cheap despite their high-end quality to hold such powerful techniques AND cause damage?
• How do they know how to burst open an inch before the target? Is it chakra? Does the capsule have a high-tech sensor?
• A basketball sized amount of goop? From a capsule small enough to be swallowed? I find this extremely hard to believe.
• Where was this goop approved? Is this goop natural? Man-made? It will need to be approved before it can simply 'be.'
• Stacking resistance? So two shots of a C-rank goop is suddenly an A? An S or S+? Two shots from a capsule that costs next to nothing and suddenly gridlock a Biju and the goop is only the size of a basketball?
• Why does this goop cause damage? How? You call it armor, but now that armor is harmful? That isn't armor.
• "Golden Sticky Spider silk technique tree?" So it's a technique? I need a link, please.
• "These capsules are based on the muscle shock technique." So they have a technique in them? Or some technology, that I need to see the approval link on, does this? HOW does the technology do this in this tiny capsule?
• You're calling it a technique now? So it isn't technology? Why does it last 5 posts? And why is it so strong to be C-rank?
• No way are they 100 Ryo and no way would your character get a discount without a PA or Worker class perk or what have you. That is a huge advantage that anyone could also claim just because they say so - because you said so first. And everyone else would have access to these.
I cannot approve this. If you have links to approved instances of parts of this, link them in when you next apply.
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 10:08 pm
『 ♔ 』 "The Half-Blood Prince"
Grand Chevalier Haji
• Four thousand?! I have a Konin that barely has 800 and you want a storage vessel for four thousand? An S-ranked Jutsu is only 160 chakra. Nope. No infinity Seals, and no excess stamina stored for 3 posts before being released. I'll give you 200 Chakra of storage. • Full counter denied.
Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 11:38 pm
『 ♔ 』 "The Half-Blood Prince"
Aegon VI Targaryan
How long are people able to be sealed within the blade for? Can the blade still use techniques when sealed with people? Are they in complete stasis or do they age/need nutrients to survive? And are Shock Therapy and Full Counter using the chakra in the blade or wielder?
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:15 pm
It seems Fruity's suggestions were addressed. If there are no other objections, approved.
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