☆ Custom Jutsu :: Crew

[Fooly your Cooly]

Well, I couldn't randomly do it unless i had finger engraving, but the idea is that they're Pieces of glyphs, that attach to seals.

:O well, with this system, which i'm not opposed to have made a part of the fuin list, makes sealing more like what it is in Naruto instead of just being a bunch of over-glorified barriers.being able to use them remotely, as traps, and the like. My second post though are Fuinjutsu themselves though  

[Shinsua]

Bleh... the Taku and Fuinjutsu lists and systems are outdated...

Regardless, you'll have to select and reword the seals you honestly want to use, as I can't allow you to create sets of jutsu that take up only a single slot.  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Well, they aren't going to take up one custom slot. seeing as they aren't really full jutsu's, just parts, can every two take up a custom slot?  

[Shinsua]

Ahhh... uhhhh.... I suppose that's fine.
Just remove the last note on Transcription Seal, I don't want it being able to be placed on people. I also believe that Itachi's eye thingy was something more than a simple seal. =/  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Shinsua

Sweet. What do you think about my Profile though, I think 4 Extra Fuin only custom slots, at the subtraction of one of my genjutsu slots, is pretty decent right?  

[Shinsua]

Mmm... yeah, I suppose that works too...  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Character:Taizo Yamamoto
Technique Name: Cursed Seal of the Stars
Rank: B
Type: Juinjutsu
Element:None
Description: Developed by Koharu Yamamoto, the current Yamamoto clan head. In exchange for a powerful sealing jutsu that was traded to an unnamed army, they gave him the dead body of one of their clans most well known ninja, who was famous for a body altering bloodline that was never recorded due to it's rarity. After experimenting on the dead body and extracting the enzyme responsible for the alteration He created a seal, using the chaka rich fluid. This jutsu was created to strengthen the bloodlineless Yamamoto clan, although it is not only subject to those without kekkei genkei. The seals worked by forcibly drawing chakra from the user's body, giving the user a chakra capacity beyond what they would normally be capable of, as well as increased physical performance, especially in battle. The seals markings spread across the hosts body, in differentiating shapes an sizes, depending on the personality of the user.
When Activated:
• + 80 Chakra
• The users strength, and speed are increased moderately.
• The seal forcefully pulls chakra from the user as battle goes on. [-5 chakra each post]
• it also causes the user to be unable to control the release of his own chakra. [+5 Chakra to any jutsu used]
• Prolonged use creates heavy fatigue,and the user is placed in a weakened state.[after the fifth post of use, each extra post that they remain in that form causes them one post of fatigue (cannot use any jutsu above your own rank, Strength and speed halved.) ]
 

[Shinsua]

Before I even start reading what it does, I'm gonna say denied because of it's name / type.
We shouldn't have curse seals yet. :I  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Shinsua

Well considering the backround of Jugo, and how he was the base, it's easier to assume that before, there were more of his bloodline running around, and any Eisei nin could extract the enzyme that gets released into his blood.

But it's not like Orochimaru's cursed seals, there's no second form, and I believe I balanced it pretty well. I just called it a Juinutsu for Roleplaying purposes, but it's really just a seal, like a tattoo, that forces the user to expend chakra through the seal, multiplying it via the enzyme, and making the body stronger due to the Chakra in the seal responding to emotional stress.  

[Shinsua]

After reading this I just can't help but feel that it's well... really... weak. o_-

And, to be perfectly honest, I have almost no idea what you're talking about with the first part. I don't like Naruto. :I  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Shinsua

After reading this I just can't help but feel that it's well... really... weak. o_-

And, to be perfectly honest, I have almost no idea what you're talking about with the first part. I don't like Naruto. :I

Well, could you maybe strengthen it with your almighty Captain powers, so that it matches it's drawbacks? cause i wanna keep the drawbacks.  

[Shinsua]

Ahhhhh... errrmm... A few things'll have to change, but let's see what I can do...  

[Fooly your Cooly]

Thanks Shin!


Character:Taizo Yamamoto
Technique Name: Mark Of The Black Hole
Rank: ---
Type: Juinjutsu
Description: Developed by Koharu Yamamoto, the current Yamamoto clan head. In exchange for a powerful sealing jutsu that was traded to an unnamed army, they gave him the dead body of one of their clans most well known ninja, who was famous for a body altering bloodline that was never recorded due to it's rarity. After experimenting on the dead body and extracting the enzyme responsible for the alteration He created a seal, using the chakra rich fluid. This jutsu was created to strengthen the bloodlineless Yamamoto clan, although it is not only subject to those without kekkei genkei. The seals worked by forcibly drawing chakra from the user's body, giving the user a chakra capacity slightly beyond what they would normally be capable of, as well as increased physical performance, especially in battle. The seals markings spread across the hosts body, in differentiating shapes and sizes, depending on the traits of the user.

Benefits:
• Immediate boost: +100 chakra. (+150 at chuunin. +200 at jounin. +300 at konin. +400 at sannin.)
• Strength, and speed moderately increased.
• Physical defense slightly increased.

Restrictions:
• First usage requires [12] posts of attempting to force it active.
( This session will end in an empty chakra pool. )
• Active until chakra pool is empty, or turned off.
• Drains [5] chakra each post.
• Techniques that use chakra cost [5] additional chakra to perform.
• Prolonged usage (10-15 posts) causes heavy muscle fatigue.

 

[Azeiel The Risen]

Has this been approved yet ?  

[Shinsua]

I reworded it an all that, so...
*Stamps jutsu*
As if right now, it is.